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Jenn
...A'yo... ...This is to my girl...Jenn... You make me feel....so loved and so specail... No matter what I do...no matter my credentials I want to show you...how much I love and feel... Nothing is fake...the first time I've ever felt real I don't cry anymore...you make me feel alive... I was so down...so lonely...I couldn't survive But then you were by my side...I feel your touch... Not even Romeo...could have loved Juliet this much But as such...people...loved ones try to make it end... But what they're not gettin'...it's not make pretend When I look into your eyes...all's I see is God's grace... I don't deserve it...but he has given me your pretty face I respect you...I want to keep you out of harms way... These people around us...make me wanna move far away With you of course...I want us to be happy no matter what... My mom and your dad...all's they are tryin to do is damage us You have captured my heart....I am a diehard fanatic... I wanna show you love...I wanna show you what's romantic I just want to be with you...through the good, and the badder... I just want to say somethin' now... ...I love you...and that's all that matters... ...From the heart, Jenn... |
lmfao quit playin lmfao you a heartless mutha fucka this is a con to get all up in herr lmfao good lil song.......
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Haha motha fucker...no it's true from the heart...but I get up in her anyway haha. Thanks for the feed though...haha how many times you gotta change ya damn name?
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lmfao alot this my last one....but damn i feel good today i had a dream i dated nichole richie last night......i wuv her...lol its tru...
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Haha...yeah right that won't be your last one...uppin' for some more feed on this.
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Uppin' for some more feed on this. Come on people.
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Man that was deep, came from the heart and you can tell.
If everybody in the world had someone they could feel like that about, it would be a better place. Much Respect, that was great |
Thanks dawg...uppin' for feed.
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nice job..good emotion..nice shit all around im proud to know you..hit em up on aim..
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Thanks...uppin' for some more feeback.
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Uppin' for some more feed on this...
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nice drop!! You had your flow on point.You were writing from the heart.You came with a nice rhyme scheme.A bit simple at time's but it didnt really change the effect of the peice. Nice drop keep them coming...........pz
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A'ight thanks...uppin' for some more feed on this.
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awwwwww thats adorable u should give that to her if u didnt yet
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Look Limited...I could use all this shit in battles, But man...Its from the heart I'll leave this...Its deep and Nice man. One of your more, No joke man Very touching Uppin this for limited.
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Feedback Granted:
overall was on the better half of the scale. ya said the word feel too many times. but thats alright, ya girl must've felt very special once she read it, ya have nice perception, and nice insight, i wish ya wouldnt have declined our battle, i dropped a decent topical, that would have gave ya a challenge to beat, bu eh...ya focus was internal: had depth and had blunt statments. more similies and metaphors and itll be an 'A' paper. thats verb's feedback. pz. |
Yo Limit We Might Be Enimies
But Dis An Tight An Str8 From Da Heart Piece Keep It Up U Had Deep Feelings And Good Flow ~peace~ |
^^Enemies?
Thanks for the feed...uppin'... |
cho mayn...nice shit...has ure girl seen that? you shud let her read that mayn...8/10, keep droppin G...~1~
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Man that was some soppy shit...lol na was emotinal nice drop flow on point wordplay nice structure was dope lyrics were decent this was a nice drop almost made me shed a tear..but i have no heart but lyrically...nice piece keep em comin...and don't die
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that was some pretty nice shit..... i juss saw this in ur sig so i unno how old this is... did u show it to her??? cuz that shit was great.... nice metaphors and such... and u can feel the emotion in ur thing..... real good closer, u know definately how to write.... might be more of a poet than a rapper, i dont need to tell u, but keep doin ur thing anyways
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God...it kills to see this shit...holy fuck...
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