Notorious Verses vs CeRtIfIeDtHuG
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 08:07 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

CeRtIfIeDtHuG has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 08:10 PM.

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 08:13 PM.

im beatin u in dis battle like u on tha comp/*
killin u like bucks new song u gon get "stomped"/
notorious dawg u aint even close ta tha man/
im betin u down like tha klu klux klan/(im not racist so dunt think)

see man u try ta act hard wit ya record of 0 n 1/
man as u kan see u jus a straight bum/
well man i got betta battles ta take care of n shyt ta do/
man every1 kno u played out like tha old DJ CLUE//////

* him watchin porn on tha comp beatin his dick

yo u gon spit or not wtf u punkin out on me now........

yo nigga i already spit pussy y didnt u huh??? u bitchin ouyt???

i don see ur dam verse on my screen u prolly did sumthin wrong

cuz u gotta drop ur verse so drop ya verse then ya can see mine so get ta work homie

U Far From Outstandin, U Very Demandin Like Mrs. Roper Hubby
Im Sure U Get More Balls In Ur Area Dan Barry Bonds Produce In Maccovey
Despite Wat Da Post Says I Am A Season Vet At Dis
And Yes U Certified Wangsta Dat Does Mean Im A Season Veteran
I Spit Hardcore And Reel At All Times, But My Flow Is Flexible
I See U From Philly But Like Da Teams Dere, Dawg U Neva Successful
Ya Life And Ur Rap Career Is Dead Like White Girls Gettin Lice
How Ya Sig Is Scarface Bout U Aint See His Tape In Ya Life
I Got Dynamik Punches Dat Make A Wangsta Like U Feel
Even Wen Im On A Callabo Wit Whack Niggaz I Still Make Shit Reel
U Standards Is Low But I Spring Up Like Wen U Catch An Erection
Im Winnin Niggaz Votes Easily Like Da Presidential Election
Ya Career Is Gettin Damaged Quicker Dan An Athletes Porsche
Imma Leave Shit At Dat So U Could Grieve Ya Loss

yo dawg i went so u could go now cuz i still don see ur verse

U Far From Outstandin, U Very Demandin Like Mrs. Roper Hubby
Im Sure U Get More Balls In Ur Area Dan Barry Bonds Produce In Maccovey
Despite Wat Da Post Says I Am A Season Vet At Dis
And Yes U Certified Wangsta Dat Does Mean Im A Season Veteran
I Spit Hardcore And Reel At All Times, But My Flow Is Flexible
I See U From Philly But Like Da Teams Dere, Dawg U Neva Successful
Ya Life And Ur Rap Career Is Dead Like White Girls Gettin Lice
How Ya Sig Is Scarface Bout U Aint See His Tape In Ya Life
I Got Dynamik Punches Dat Make A Wangsta Like U Feel
Even Wen Im On A Callabo Wit Whack Niggaz I Still Make Shit Reel
U Standards Is Low But I Spring Up Like Wen U Catch An Erection
Im Winnin Niggaz Votes Easily Like Da Presidential Election
Ya Career Is Gettin Damaged Quicker Dan An Athletes Porsche
Imma Leave Shit At Dat So U Could Grieve Ya Loss

my bad for puttin it twice, i didnt noe wat to do.

dawg u gotta put it where it says post ur verse not reply

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

IIGHT SOME OF NV LINES DIDNT RHYME..HIS STRUCTURE WAS IIGHT CT WAS BETTERS OK PUNCHES 4RM BOTH SOME VOCAB 4RM NV BUT CT PULLED OF CUS HE HAD SOME STRONGER PUNCHES ELIVATE MORE MAYN NO D/R OR HATE

Voted For: Notorious Verses

yo i think NV takes this....cos first of all he hd more lines...so...more space for a better verse....he had harder punches wordplay and personals were tight...structure and flow were just a lil off..but mayne ya verse had all what it takes to win this...certifiedthug....yo no hate but ur verse was wackkkkkkkkkk....sturcture was off...no flow..no hard punches no decent personals...NOTHING!!!...i just think you have to elevate...NV takes this for a more complete verse...


be honest on mines too...(sig)


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Voted For: Notorious Verses

aight oyu got this vote cuz you had better wordplay and an okay flow but some stuff didnt seem to rhyme but certifiedthug had a weak verse you had harder punches and better structure

thug-you went easy on him i guess cuz your verse lacked your wordplay was grade skewl man work on that and punches werent that hard hittin and personals lacked structure was okay flow wasnt that great

v/notorious verses

Voted For: Notorious Verses

*cough*cough*
this a one-sided
one who did everything right
and one who did everythign wrong

Verses:
you had some very nice flow
I read your verse with eas and not having to stop
your structure was easy on my eyes
you punches were nice but some weren't insulting
him and more at what you used for wordplay
like the philly line
ut it was still nice


Thug
your lines were very short
so flow was off teribly
and punches were basic and so was ur voacb
and al the verse was painfullybad

vote/Notorious Verses

Voted For: Notorious Verses

yo my vote has to go to---- notorius
that other kid really needs to eleavate! I really don't know how to break this one down---iight I'll try
Vocb. - notorius
Flow- notorius
stu. - Notorius
word play- notorius
naf said................
WELL THAT WAS SIMPLE WHY MY VOTE IS THE WAY IT IS!

Voted For: Notorious Verses

^you should watch ur wordiness cuz it can throw off ya flow.... but nice opener, the closer was nice but doesn't rhyme..

best lines:
I Spit Hardcore And Reel At All Times, But My Flow Is Flexible
I See U From Philly But Like Da Teams Dere, Dawg U Neva Successful
^lol nice job... lol

Certified's best happened to be:
see man u try ta act hard wit ya record of 0 n 1/
man as u kan see u jus a straight bum/
^not bad the only tru personal....... i see ya elevatin' ya verse... nice job..

I picked Notorious cuz he came harder with punches had the more creative touch in his verse.. nice wordplays some decent metas....... he had the better opener and closer and his vocab was really good........ y'all both gotta work on structure sum what... and certified u need to make ur verse a lil' complex or put sumthin' creative within it...... good luck with this, nice battle you two.. but Notorious got this battle easily..

Returnt the favor- or just peep my collab in my sig, pz..