SubtleTee vs x-on
 

Battle Rules:

6 -10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-29-04 at 11:17 PM

Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in.

SubtleTee has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 10:18 PM.

x-on has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 10:40 PM.

The Chosen one baby, X-on...

Ayo:

Ones left thinking and contenplating why you think X-on's got weak punches?/
After this battle you'll understand only good shit you got in your "school lunches"//
I'm a try to be a scocialogist on this one, and try to make a hypothesiss/
Cause my senses say i'll kill your style and leave you burried in a sarcafaguiss//
You fail to understand i'll leave you out of a job like a "NHL PLAYer"/
Or like Eminem fucking Cage, you cock sucking day raper//

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I know i'll need to explain some shit here.

- This guy was on my dick for saying how I had week punches in one of my battles when the other people said it was sick
-scicologist, they stud individuals, so i'm studying his mind and hypothesis is a educated guess.
-sarcaffagus is what momy's were burried in.
-Cage had a song called suicid failor, eminem copied his shit.

See what you got hommy? VOTES PLEASE!!!!!

I ment to say , " how eminem fucked cage*** that's it..

Here's the link to text elevation, come and battle me after you go use it./
Watch me drop X harder and faster than ravers jamming to techno music/

I rhyme too hot. An effortless win, I’ll easily slice through all you brought./
But it’s easy to aim KO punches cuz all pirates know X MARKS THE SPOT/

Battling me is the equivalent of blind Spanish cripples trying to race bulls./
And you’ve only got DMX in belly after taking a round of cumshot facials./

I know elevation can cause frustration, but whack lines just invite hate son/
Now I understand why he listed getting “schooled” as a full-time occupation./

Left helpless like kids with ~broken necks~ my ill lines stay ~smoken vets.~/
And like a Mothers Against Club Drugs meet there won’t be any votes for X./


Explanations:

Line 2: X = Ecstasy
Line 4: X marks the spot on a treasure map
Line 5: The Running of the Bulls in Spain
Line 6: His bio says "I'm like DMX in belly"
Line 8: His occupation is "School"
Line 10: Mothers against drugs, Ecstasy, get it?

Um, why do people not vote? Bumping this it's been open for a day.

yeah , I know dog. this shit is wack?? hahah vote people!!

Okay bumpin this up. Where the fuck are the voters?

Votes.. please like let's get this shit done with...

Voted For: SubtleTee

Emcee:SubtleTee

Verse:
Here's the link to text elevation, come and battle me after you go use it./
Watch me drop X harder and faster than ravers jamming to techno music/

I rhyme too hot. An effortless win, I’ll easily slice through all you brought./
But it’s easy to aim KO punches cuz all pirates know X MARKS THE SPOT/

Battling me is the equivalent of blind Spanish cripples trying to race bulls./
And you’ve only got DMX in belly after taking a round of cumshot facials./

I know elevation can cause frustration, but whack lines just invite hate son/
Now I understand why he listed getting “schooled” as a full-time occupation./

Left helpless like kids with ~broken necks~ my ill lines stay ~smoken vets.~/
And like a Mothers Against Club Drugs meet there won’t be any votes for X./

Comments:i think you took this because of harder hitting punches and more metas...g'job

Marks:
Wordplay:5/10
Vocabulary:6/10
Structure:7/10
Punches:7/10
Personals:8/10
Opener:7/10
Closer:6/10
Metaphors:6/10
Creativity:5/10
Enjoyment:6/10
Overall:63/100
----------63%

Emcee:x-on

Verse:
Ayo:

Ones left thinking and contenplating why you think X-on's got weak punches?/
After this battle you'll understand only good shit you got in your "school lunches"//
I'm a try to be a scocialogist on this one, and try to make a hypothesiss/
Cause my senses say i'll kill your style and leave you burried in a sarcafaguiss//
You fail to understand i'll leave you out of a job like a "NHL PLAYer"/
Or like Eminem fucking Cage, you cock sucking day raper//

Comments:well most of the time you shouldnt have to explain punches and personals....the only ones you might have to explain are ones that you leave links to or whatever may be ur reasons...you dont listen to a song and dont understand it...then at the end they give and explanation to evryword they said...

Marks:
Wordplay:4/10
Vocabulary:5/10
Structure:6/10
Punches:5/10
Personals:4/10
Opener:5/10
Closer:5/10
Metaphors:4/10
Creativity:5/10
Enjoyment:2/10
Overall:44/100
----------44%

return the favor.....................................

Voted For: SubtleTee

Here's the link to text elevation, come and battle me after you go use it./
Watch me drop X harder and faster than ravers jamming to techno music/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ha good opener lol nice punch


rhyme too hot. An effortless win, I’ll easily slice through all you brought./
But it’s easy to aim KO punches cuz all pirates know X MARKS THE SPOT/
^^^^^^^^^^^ nice mayne good punch


Battling me is the equivalent of blind Spanish cripples trying to race bulls./
And you’ve only got DMX in belly after taking a round of cumshot facials./

I know elevation can cause frustration, but whack lines just invite hate son/
Now I understand why he listed getting “schooled” as a full-time occupation./

Left helpless like kids with ~broken necks~ my ill lines stay ~smoken vets.~/
And like a Mothers Against Club Drugs meet there won’t be any votes for X./
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight cool

nice verse mayne u had-punches and personals


Ones left thinking and contenplating why you think X-on's got weak punches?/
After this battle you'll understand only good shit you got in your "school lunches"//
I'm a try to be a scocialogist on this one, and try to make a hypothesiss/
Cause my senses say i'll kill your style and leave you burried in a sarcafaguiss//
You fail to understand i'll leave you out of a job like a "NHL PLAYer"/
Or like Eminem fucking Cage, you cock sucking day raper//

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight nice verse

dis an good piece but yo punches wasnt hittin harder good flow

work on dem punches u'll get betta

v-sub for harder punches

Elevating this shit for votes. It's been a week...

........................Skyin for votes..........................

Voted For: SubtleTee

Weak Battle

SubtleTee took this one hands down..
..punches were harder & had landed
..structure was decent and not stretched-out
..wordplay was ok
..vocab was nice

x-on..
..yo punches were hard enuff to get my vote
..tha flow fell a little
..tha structure was stretched-out
..& tha vocab was ok

overall
S.Tee too this one wit ease..
..came in there & had harder punches than x-on

Alright, thanks for voting lets get a few more.........

God Damnit!

Vote People!

Wtf????????????????????????

Voted For: SubtleTee

okay Sub got my vote
he came harder and came better good flow punches was hittin on and on cool battle it was aiight nice personals not that good tho but it was cool
X-On
cool flow but Sub came harder and a better flow

Voted For: SubtleTee

subtle got this, da verse wuz sickerning, nice flow, nice puns, personals hit they mark, only flaw is dat u seperate da barz, da structure lyke dat is kinda lame, but for overrall lyrical content u got da win, X, yo flow wuz iight, yo structure iz so fucked up n placez i culdnt read it, work on dat ye?