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RobKilla vs Maku JaiiLiin
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6 - 10 linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no feeding, i see you like to do that 150 posts to vote!!! chek in - 3 dayz drop- one hour Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 10-02-04 at 10:38 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 10:41 PM.
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for you to know i feed off verses, you'd have to check out my battles, and fucking, feed off mine! but let's get it on though!
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the 'reign' of this king begins now, so i would bring coats//
cuz you won't have hot bars if you melted irish spring soap// i video taped me and ya girl, when i offered her ten bucks// so like tupacs sentencing televised, you was watching me get fucked// wit no warnin i bus, what can i say to this bitch if 'she' hate this// "grow up and swallow, cuz like that columbine killer i 'spray kids'!"// I started ill and stopped, cuz you don't want me to come back and rap lines// i'm an unwanted return, like owing thousands back at tax time// |
RobKilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 11:42 PM.
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wtf? you neva dropped........................................... .................
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you gonna drop kid?
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yeah, you never dropped tho....... what happened? d
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i dropped! you can't see it cuz you ain't dropped yet!
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oh yeah
ima drop in a few.............................. |
I'll snatch yo "loose change" so fast, you wont have time to snap back...
he's so unused to "applause" he took out a 9 to try and "clap back" You stink, you feel glum the way nobody's fearin you... You must feel real "dumb" the way nobody's "hearin" you you are what i cant be? is that what yo motto say? Must be true, its impossible for me to be that gay... What are you, Japanese dude? dont worry about RobKilla here's more important news... RUUUUNNNN!!! ITS GODZILLA! This man's record proves it... 9-9 tha jive hoe... its split 50-50... so i know it'll be 5-0 naw... i didnt bring my best... im savin for the Punchline League |
Voted For: RobKilla
OK MAKU FIRST BAR WAS CORNY SECOND ALSO WEAK 3RD ALSO WEAK AND ENDER WAS ALSO WEAK WHAT THE FUCK GOOD STRUCTURE AND VOCAB WAS DECNT FLOW WAS OK BUT YOUR PUNCHES MADD LACKED AND I REMEBER YOU BEING BETTER THEN THIS BUT THIS WAS WEAK A 4/10 ROBKILLA OPENER OK PUNCH GOOD WORDPLAY ON THE SECOND BAR BUT ALOT OF THESE LAMES AINT GONNA CATCH THAT BE THAT GAY LOL GOOD PERSONAL GODZILLA LINE WACK GOOD ENDER STUCTURE DECENT GOOD FLOW AND VOCAB BUT BETTER PUNCHES BY FAR AND THE NICE PERSONAL GOT YOU THIS BATTLE A 6/10 RETURN MY HONEST VOTE BOTH OF YOU |
upppin on this one upppin on this one
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both of you return my fucking honest vote what the fuck see this is whats wrong with fucking r.v now :cussing:
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uppin............................................. ........................
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Voted For: RobKilla
RobKilla gets my vote.. His punches were played~out~harder.. tha flow was good & same wit tha structure too.. and tha vocab was aight.. Maku yo shit was good too.. tha punches couldve been a little harder & ur structure was aight..(dont space them out..) |
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dude, calm down, i returned a while ago |
let's up this one, amidst the bullshit
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
Maku: One Nice Meta... a bunch of clever similies- simple multies at the end of each line but it all in all had good flow... I felt your shit. RobKilla: You had a couple decent bars--- but the Run its Godzilla punch was horrible... and rhymin gay with say is definately below your level .... Vote Maku. |
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hey man... i was out of it that day... i just wastn feelin the flow... and that run its godzilla- i officially apologize to the web site for the wackest line ever!! I AM SORRY :banghead: |
This was feedback posted for RobKilla
hahahah Godzilla line had me rollin............... and i think u merked him............ but im juss checkin polls
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hahaha jk............... but u should get Seven third vote dqd........... didnt really say much........
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Voted For: RobKilla
Robkilla: I'll snatch yo "loose change" so fast, you wont have time to snap back... he's so unused to "applause" he took out a 9 to try and "clap back" Ok opener, punch was ehh, but I got the wordplay...2.5/4 You stink, you feel glum the way nobody's fearin you... You must feel real "dumb" the way nobody's "hearin" you Good rhyming, but the punch didn't hit, 1/4 you are what i cant be? is that what yo motto say? Must be true, its impossible for me to be that gay... Made me laugh a lil' bit, but the punch was simple and gay concepts are played, 1.5/4 What are you, Japanese dude? dont worry about RobKilla here's more important news... RUUUUNNNN!!! ITS GODZILLA! The highlight of your verse, funny shit, although the punch wasn't that hard, 2.5/4 This man's record proves it... 9-9 tha jive hoe... its split 50-50... so i know it'll be 5-0 Aight wordplay, but it seemed a little self-glorifying, 2/4 Total: 9.5/20 Maku the 'reign' of this king begins now, so i would bring coats// cuz you won't have hot bars if you melted irish spring soap// Great rhyming, good wordplay, average punch, 3.5/5 i video taped me and ya girl, when i offered her ten bucks// so like tupacs sentencing televised, you was watching me get fucked// This was aight, the punch didn't really connect that much, 2.5/5 wit no warnin i bus, what can i say to this bitch if 'she' hate this// "grow up and swallow, cuz like that columbine killer i 'spray kids'!"// Just simple here, punch wasn't hard, 1.5/5 I started ill and stopped, cuz you don't want me to come back and rap lines// i'm an unwanted return, like owing thousands back at tax time// This one didn't hit very hard either, 1.5/5 Total: 9/20 Winner: Robkilla, but both of you need some elevatin', no hate, return a vote at a link in my sig... |
Voted For: RobKilla
V/ Robkilla Well this was actually close...Robkilla had a nice opener which had me laughing....the rest was just blah...nothing else was quotable...the godzilla line was horrible...Maku coulda taken this...he had sum okay meta's...but they were more self glorifying...they werent punches...jsut good meta's...and u need punches to win a battle...so rob gets this |
This was feedback posted for Maku JaiiLiin
checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573 |
Voted For: RobKilla
vote goes to RobKilla, good verse there. maku, your shit was a bit wack, no offence, it was easy to understand so that was good but you need to improve your punches please return and honest vote onone of the battltes below |
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