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genocide vs CeRtIfIeDtHuG
Battle Rules:
6 - 50 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-05-04 at 12:00 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
genocide has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 12:12 PM.
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man fuck checkin in unless you wanna get ripped..
nodoby wanna see you, like a fat bitch gettin stripped.. just one slip of my tounge and ya throat is slit.. closest you get to a single is doin a skit.. call me a firespitta cause i come from hell.. no i aint a drug deala but im givin you this L.. pop ya ass faster than a bag of popcorn.. your useless.. like a roof with the top torn.. come here little homie, yea leave ya closet.. my gun will leave you drippin like a leaky faucet.. i put some sauce on it and stick a fork in ya yous done.. your punches have me laughin, leave me slappin my knee.. one jab from me? shit you gon' need the EMT.. call you a bird feeder cause i leave you hangin in a tree.. |
CeRtIfIeDtHuG has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 03:09 PM.
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its a suicidal sickness headin to ya brain genocide/
im that thug that hit ya hard wit my lyrics make u wanna comit suicide/ see this aint battle cuz theres no challenge here/ see u dunt kno wat ta say u jus cry n wanna disappear/ dawg u aint got no chance against me/ see i graduated from gangsta college wit the illest spititn dagree/ im like a knife wound piercin threw ya chest/ r u sad gettin mad n humiliatidly depresssed?/ this is jus a lil sumthin that i had off tha top of my head/ im layin u out jus like a flat bed/ see my words run u over like a truck/ as u kan tell dawg u winnin dis battle is like 50 beatin young buck/ well im out with this win n my gangsta within/ so try n come at me n get a glock ta ya chin////// |
Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG
IIGHT THIS WAS A OK BATTLE GOOD PUNCHES 4RM BOTH OF U CT HAD BETTER STRUCTURE SOME GOOD LINES 4RM CT AND GEN NO PERSONALS 4RM EITHA BOTH HAD GOOD DISSES..SO IT WAS ALMOST A TIE BESIDES OF CT'S STRUCTURE |
Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG
certifiedthug elavated i can see that he has a lil vocab now and he flows pretty good now his verses are gettin way better but ya he merked this guy KO i think so he had some alright punches to nice closner lol and opener nice shit. VOTE: Certifiedthug return the favour in my battle verse NET the links in my sig aight peace 1 |
This was feedback posted for genocide
Certified thug.. you came off wit better structure in this battle ..... but personals? punches?... the verse was mostly fluff
Genocide..... not your best work, but your verse deffinetly flowed better than your oppenents, and you actualy threw punches.... some decent lines ........ "one jab from me? shit you gon' need the EMT.. call you a bird feeder cause i leave you hangin in a tree" return the favor yall |
yo tito u klicked tha wrong thing pm strobe n tell him ur thing was a vote not feedback
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Voted For: genocide
genocide easily won this battle because he came wit punch after punch... (no hate) Thug's verse wasnt really a battle verse because it lacked flavor, it just seemed like a long list of threats.. i suggest you work on usin metaphors and personals in yo rhymes Thug... genocides punches werent that good, but they got the job done. you could both use some elevating, try workin on personals and metaphors... V/ Genocide return tha favor on my weakest most waste of time battle yet.. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...hlight=robkilla |
thanks yall we still need some votes on this battle though
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uppin this battle niggas
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Voted For: genocide
man fuck checkin in unless you wanna get ripped.. nodoby wanna see you, like a fat bitch gettin stripped.. just one slip of my tounge and ya throat is slit.. closest you get to a single is doin a skit.. call me a firespitta cause i come from hell.. no i aint a drug deala but im givin you this L.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH NICE FLOW'Z pop ya ass faster than a bag of popcorn.. your useless.. like a roof with the top torn.. come here little homie, yea leave ya closet.. my gun will leave you drippin like a leaky faucet.. i put some sauce on it and stick a fork in ya yous done.. your punches have me laughin, leave me slappin my knee.. one jab from me? shit you gon' need the EMT.. call you a bird feeder cause i leave you hangin in a tree.. ^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD CLOSA AND PUNCHES NICE FLOW'Z its a suicidal sickness headin to ya brain genocide/ im that thug that hit ya hard wit my lyrics make u wanna comit suicide/ see this aint battle cuz theres no challenge here/ see u dunt kno wat ta say u jus cry n wanna disappear/ ^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH NICE FLOW dawg u aint got no chance against me/ see i graduated from gangsta college wit the illest spititn dagree/ im like a knife wound piercin threw ya chest/ r u sad gettin mad n humiliatidly depresssed?/ ^^^^^^^^^^^ ALL FLOW BUT NO PUNCHES this is jus a lil sumthin that i had off tha top of my head/ im layin u out jus like a flat bed/ see my words run u over like a truck/ as u kan tell dawg u winnin dis battle is like 50 beatin young buck/ well im out with this win n my gangsta within/ so try n come at me n get a glock ta ya chin////// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA VOTE GOES TO GENOCIDE CAUSE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND NICE FLOW CERTIFIED THUG-U HAD GOOD PUNCH ON THE OPENER DEN U LACK OFF USIN FLOW'Z INSTEAD OF PUNCHES STAY ON POINT W/PUNCHES VOTE-GENOCIDE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNHCES AND FLOW ~PEACE~ RETURN AN FAV |
ok tied battle uppin this battle for more votes favors will be returned
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uppin this shit
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Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG
i think that genocide won da battle, because his punches were more consistent as well his vocab was betta. thug u were ok, but flow and structure was off my vote goes to genocide weak battle doe Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin dis shyt n yo geno i jus noticed we in tha same crew now lol but its all good
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uppin this shit there boys and gurls
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uppin this shit there boys and gurls come on and vote on this come on i will return favors
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uppin this shit for votes boys and gurls i will return votes ok yall
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uppin this ahit boys and gurls help us out with votes
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Voted For: genocide
lol genocide got this, didnt wanna vote on ya battle again cause peeps will think its a d/r (even tho i dont know u) but i'm just votin on all the battles that pop up on the front lines... but yea anyway... genoice got this, pretty dope finisher, better punches n vocab than thug, only thing i didnt get was the givin u this L line? i know L is a joint, but wheres the point in that line? (no hate) but yeah overrall u got this... thug, genocide an rhymin it with suicide is predicatble an played out... ya vocab wasnt up too much, an no noticable hot ass punches... elevate an yall be sure to return the fave in my sig p e a c e |
uppin this shit boys and gurls dont sleep please vote on this battle
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uppin this shit boys and gurls dont sleep please vote on this battle
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Voted For: genocide
hum nice genocide- had good punches they were ok hit nice and landed good had goos stukter and flow it was a nice verse man nice rhymes flow was cool it was all good man nicew verse i gotta say :thumbup: CeRtIfIeDtHuG- also has good punches hit nice landed good the flow was nice flowed good stukta was ok not to good but it was a nice verse also nice rhymes they were good overall- both had good punches n flow both hit the same both had nice rhymes n flow but this all come to stukter n punches genocide had better stukter and only only just had little bit of better punches hit only a little bit harder if he took 1 of his punches out it wud be a draw punches- g-51% c-49% only just nuffsaid |
This was feedback posted for genocide
"pop ya ass faster than a bag of popcorn..
your useless.. like a roof with the top torn.." I like this line... aiight let's see... thug's verses had OK punches but they werent hard enough to overcome genocide's thug could have come harder with the ending...(u should always have a strong finish) I think genocide had a better flow, he ended strongly and he kept his flow going thug kinda got lazy at the end I didnt sense much personals from genocide though u could have more if its 6-50 lines... uhm ya thats pretty much it... |
Voted For: genocide
gen won diz battl hiz punchez hit harder n da flow wuz much better thug u need 2 step it up cuz yo flow wuz cool but dsa personals wuznt az effective as genocide dat iz y iam voting fo him |
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