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SubtleTee vs 40Cal
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-30-04 at 08:49 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
SubtleTee has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 08:32 PM.
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Killed with a Keystyle Son
Can’t son a bitch, man I’ll daughter this nun. I’ll straight up slaughter you son./ I’m so whack? When this cat packs the same “caliber” as plastic water guns?/ Worthless! You’re expendable bra, my lines ill, I’ll just stay dependably raw!/ Fuck a wolf! My lines slice jaws and leave an MC cut up like extendable claws!/ Bout to get ~wrecked, damn~, already had a battle but you didn’t ~check fam~/ Quitting is the ~best plan~, because you’re about to lose, just like ~X, man~!/ Explanation: Line 2: Caliber is the strength of a gun Line 4: Wolverine is his avvy and Wolverines power is extendable claws Line 5: He didn't even check into our last battle Line 6: I'm battling X-on. Wolverine is an X-Man. Get it? X, Man? |
40Cal has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 08:44 PM.
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Be “Subtle” while I “Tee” off and bang ya moms in tha cock//
Yer as ferocious as vanilla ice and tha new kids on tha block// 40cal claps lungs wit his lyrical guns causin ya breathin to stop// People treat ya albums like newly caught fish kuz they ready to flop// U real baby like playin around wit mic’s as if they were rattles// Jot this down as a loss on ya record and for everytime that we battle// |
Voted For: SubtleTee
SublteTee: Yo punches were hard & they connected.. tha flow was pretty decent & it didnt fall.. and yo strucuture was aight..(try to not stretch yo lines..*use dif. fonts to make it smaller or sum shit*) 40Cal: Yo punches were good too..could've been a little harder.. Decent structure ur lines wasnt stretched out.. and yo flow was pretty nice too..elevate a little more |
Nice, you've elevated but not enough son. Opened up for votes peopel!
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i definately respect anyones vote as long as it's valid ya kno, it's all about opinion so i respect it, keep on keepin on tho i'll be battlin 4-eva
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Voted For: 40Cal
ooooooooooo dis nigga ripped yo good battle guyz but damn ma nigga 40cal took dis by a mile no hate tho u ripped it too tee but ima hav to say dis is da best battle ever vote/40cal Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^ Not Explained, can we get some explained votes? Please?
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This was feedback posted for SubtleTee
k of carse 40cal lost hes gonna get KOed he was so wack lol whata herb lol
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it was wack? be 4real i used tha kids name maybe i shoulod explain it at tha bottom for those who don't kno what "subtle" means or what it means to "Tee" off on someone Tee had one good line but he was mostly rhymin 4real if u had of said that i lost then koo but KOed? Chill tha fuk out dik ryder take ya 14 year old ass to bed it's 8pm
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Voted For: 40Cal
damn wack battle lol like really really bad lol but I see you all are new so i want get on ya both wordplay was very bad either terribl;e or none in there punches were basically insult of mothers or self glorifiaction and weak metafors I believethis is an explained vote though 40cal had flow and was easy to read so he gets my vote http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150389 please return the favor and give a detailed vote if any of you wants help with rapping IM me ProVerse ^thats my AIM peace both of you will soon get better |
Voted For: SubtleTee
Vote for subtle other nagger is just too simple nothing at all hard hitting pretty weak battle... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: SubtleTee
Average Drop Intro : Subtle.. Pretty Good Like The Calliber/plastic gun line Punches: Subtle.. Punches Hit Harder.. 40Cal U Were Talkin Bout Bangin His Mom.. Stay Away From That Shit.. Word Play: Subtle.. U Had Ok Word Play But Keep Elevatin.. 40 Keep Tryin Urs Was Pretty Plain.. Multis: Weak Multis.. Draw Vocabulary : Subtle.. Much Better Showed that your educated haha :thumbup: 40 u should work on this.. u kept it too simple.. Ending: Subtle.. Much Better.. Used Word Play Here Nice.. Keep Elevatin 40.. Winner : Subtle.. 1 sided Battle here.. Keep workin on ya shit.. no hate.. rtf.. |
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fo real son thats a positive attitude :thumbup: keep doin ya thing.. practice make perfect |
Voted For: SubtleTee
Subtle Tee wins this hands down with wayy better wordplay and personals and harder hitting punchees than 40. 40,your verse was basic and elementary-like.Work on upping your structure and wordplay.Try also to throw some personals in there. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: 40Cal
yo yall need to elevate i meen relle elevate, get yall punches up and come up wit betta wordplay(no hate) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Bumping for some explained votes. Get with it people.
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Voted For: SubtleTee
Can’t son a bitch, man I’ll daughter this nun. I’ll straight up slaughter you son./ I’m so whack? When this cat packs the same “caliber” as plastic water guns?/ Worthless! You’re expendable bra, my lines ill, I’ll just stay dependably raw!/ Fuck a wolf! My lines slice jaws and leave an MC cut up like extendable claws!/ Bout to get ~wrecked, damn~, already had a battle but you didn’t ~check fam~/ Quitting is the ~best plan~, because you’re about to lose, just like ~X, man~!/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW AND GOOD PERSONALS KEEP IT UP MAYNE Be “Subtle” while I “Tee” off and bang ya moms in tha cock// Yer as ferocious as vanilla ice and tha new kids on tha block// 40cal claps lungs wit his lyrical guns causin ya breathin to stop// People treat ya albums like newly caught fish kuz they ready to flop// U real baby like playin around wit mic’s as if they were rattles// Jot this down as a loss on ya record and for everytime that we battle// ^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT MAYNE GOOD SHIT HERE NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WASNT ENOUGH TO KNOCK SUB OFF DA ROPES// ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES OK PERSONALS ELEVATE ON THAT TOO DEN U ALRIGHT ~PEACE~ SUB RETURN AN FAV (HONEST VOTE) |
This was feedback posted for SubtleTee
not bad ill like to see our battle cause this is a really nice one looved it
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158115 |
Voted For: SubtleTee
ok you won punches tee hit harder multis tee the only ones i saw enjoy tee alot funner to read won tee |
Voted For: SubtleTee
wack battle but sub was hotter flow punches and personals were hot but the style was wack. |
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