40Cal vs untouchablekilla
 

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6 -10lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


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untouchablekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 09:23 PM.

40Cal has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-04 09:45 PM.

like A Midget Playing Basketball Cause he has No Business On the Net
he wants 2 be a Vet But his Chin Catches more Balls Than The New York Mets
dogg ya style is fake like a thug wit a de-votion to e-motion
although ya get mad when ya open ya girls door and see-pokin
when it comes to guns and lives u know I got mine and a nine
being a "phone sex operator" is the only way u'd have a hot line
when I think of 40Cal I picture a http://www.uglypeople.com/uploaded/...ugly12.JPG]slow faggot frog-faced homo[/URL]
send ur photo to uglypeople.com , they'll probly pay to use it as their logo

No killa’z gro up in tha burbs homeboy I’m str8 from tha streetz//
But u did get assault and battery for beatin ya meat//

If I lose I lose fuk I’ll come bak even betta//
Tha only hood this bitch has been in, is tha one attached to his sweata//

I’m hittin him from every angle jus like he’s battlin 2//
And ya dik ryders are invited I’ll fukin battle them to//

It’s funny u have a pic of 50cent and he made a song about wanksta’z//
Definition of fake -Untouchable killa…..a*k*a wanna be gangsta

Anytime I’m in a battle I’ll be winning tha fight//
Dis cat lost by waaaaay 2 much he’ll prolly B banned from tha site//

that was str8 homey i thought u could have kinnah seperated ya scheme so that i could see yer punch lines more clear but there were some hot punchlines good luk kid

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Voted For: untouchablekilla

hmm close battle

punches- killa, harder, not as many, but much harder hittin
personals-40, u had a good one and thats it
multis- killa, u did them
metas- killa, better ones
word play- 40, better wordplay overall
flow-killa, didnt fall off as much as 40's

killa ok verse. try some better personals next time

40 u started good, but u fell off. u r talkin bout losin. ok personal, keep elevatin

Killa:
"when it comes to guns and lives u know I got mine and a nine
being a "phone sex operator" is the only way u'd have a hot line" ok punch.

40:
"It’s funny u have a pic of 50cent and he made a song about wanksta’z//
Definition of fake -Untouchable killa…..a*k*a wanna be gangsta" good personal.

v/killa

Voted For: untouchablekilla

lol this is was a hot drop untouchable and 40cal

my vote...

Punches/Personals-Overall i think that untouchable came a lil bit harder with it..i liked ya closer it was good...nice drop...same 40 cal ya verse was kinda weak...and it didn't pack real punchez...sorry no hate

Vocab-Untouchable ya had some nice shit there......more words not used then what he used....you need to elavate 40 cal a lil bit more...

Enjoyment-Untouchable i liked your drop a lot more then 40 cal's...yours actually made me wanna read it...good job mayne....40 you need to put stuff in to make people wanna read ya stuff

Overall-Untouchable you get my vote cuz you came way the hell harder then 40cal did...but good job on both parts....

Voted For: 40Cal

40Cal won this battle easily. untouchable lost cause his punches were weak. if u changed the words around or jus change the whole line. some of them were played like the new york mets line and the line about seeing his girl pokin or something stupid like that. his closer was really weak. untouchable only had 1 real punch. and that was about the hot line. 40cal attacked him more and harder. he coulda re-worded the line about beating his meat but that was still good. and the sweaterline was pretty funny too. untouchable jus didnt have enough real punches in there

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Voted For: 40Cal

he had betta flow and structure. it was easier to read than untochable's. punches were weak from both sides, but i think 40 cal got dis one

nice dick ride bitcH!

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Voted For: untouchablekilla

yo this was a pretty tight battle.....but in the end im feelin kill's more....i like the uplink thing...unique...dunno how others feel because it might imply a lil pre writin but i thought it was hot you.....killa's punches were a tad harder....but damn this was a tough decision....good battle yall...killa hit me up....i'd like to battle if you down wit it

Voted For: untouchablekilla

I Lkked This Battle But BasicallY I Can Only Give my vote to Untouchable Bcuz he came Waaaaaayyy Much Harder wit the punchez and personals and i gotta give em His props he Did His Homework and I like to See That In Battles In Stuff and He used your history To his best abilility And thats a good and easy way to win battles
plain and Simple
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Voted For: untouchablekilla

Untouchable took this one..
punches were hard & landed...
flow was pretty decent...
structure was kinda fuck'd up...
and the vocab was aight...
but overall u had a decent drop tho...

40...u could elevate a little more tho...
u been on this site since September...
u could've elevate way more...
but anyway, ur punches couldve been a little harder...
structure needs improving...
and thats it, do those 2 things, and u'll be kinda good...