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Limited Edition vs Yvonne
Battle Rules:
8 -10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Beef gd luck... Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-04-04 at 11:40 AM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 11:55 AM.
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You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted
Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed* dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit** my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite * his name..edition **^^... ya dont get my verse fine...dont vote thanx... we will hit urs too..........1 |
Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 05:07 PM.
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...A'yo... Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world... She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled.... Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared... Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher... But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me... ...That's Ordinary Nonsense... Quick...whatever...goodluck... |
oh dear so u waited for me to get my siggy first for a personal?.....wow
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Voted For: Yvonne
You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed* Ok wouldn't of used as an opener dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye Hell no that was bad ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no Pretty good hit quite hard ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit** my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite Best bar had me laughing Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world... She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled.... Played or what man Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared... Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared No that was a filler I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher... But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture Decent punch I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me... No what was that man realy? Yvonne took this for 2 punches. Pz. |
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Voted For: Limited Edition
You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed* ^^^^^^^^^^^^ AGIHT GOOD OPENER NICE PUNCH dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye ^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCH NICE ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit** my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD OPENER AND NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD CLOSA YVONNE-HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW KEEP IT UP Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world... She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled.... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD OPENER AND GOOD PUNCH Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared... Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared ^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH (DECENT) I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher... But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA LIMIT EDITION-ALTHOUGH I HATE U- U HAD GOOD&HARDER PUNCHES AND NICE FLOW'Z GOOD STRUTURE AND GOOD WORDPLAYS LIMIT EDITION GOT DIS BECUZ HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND NICE WORDPLAYS AND GOOD FLOW YVONNE- GOOD BATTLE,,,,,,,,,,GOOD VERSE U HAD FLOW'Z AND PUNCHES BUT I THINK LIMIT EDITION CAME HARDER IF U HAD MORE LINES U'LL PROP GET LIMIT V-LIMIT EDITION FO WORDPLAYS AND HARDER PUNCHS ~PEACE~ |
This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
cant vote cuz A.I but
Le came harder I feel...his verse was ok...maybe he didnt come as hard as he oculd Yyvone...ya fine girl but......ya need to practice punches.... start readin poppa kap e looch n them start writing laot..use big vocab and itll get stuck in ya had...I forgot how I elevated but this is the method thats used alot... |
belh edit mine.....Really readin tha verses...IO felt Yyvone came a lil harder....she had pucnhes with energy like hse tried...LE's were so bland..bleh....
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lol confused so is it a vote or still a feedbak????
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Voted For: Yvonne
yvonne came a lil hard she ahd better punches and stcutre i think she won lol but ya thats my vote anyway lol Limited Edition: you have potential man nice vocabulary but i feel yvonne came harder you had some nice punches aswell but not hard enougj you talk to much shit about yerself and droping n shit lol and yer style was fucked coulda been better Yvonne: she just cam harder period lol she had way better punches and wordplay and she realy said shit about her oppenent more then limited edition. VOTE: Yvonne |
Voted For: Limited Edition
Cant vote but good battle from both *Nods hat* Removed |
oops i meant 2 put feedback
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Voted For: Yvonne
sup yve? ya flow got a little stretched at times but i see ya constantly getting better...good deal with the nameplay... punches were better...nothing spectacular but still stronger than "Limited" editions...lol Limited came soft with the attack..."only way you sick" lines are played...second bar was filler...third bar was wack... closer needs a lot of work... omma give you the benefit of the doubt and say it was a rushed verse but you need to get more complex and build ya vocab... come with harder punches... work on ya structure too...not too bad but it still needs work |
Voted For: Yvonne
aiight good battle.... opener - yvonne... it was a aiight operner 7/10 closer - yvonne.... good closer 8/10 flow - yvonne punchez - yvonne vocab - yvonne structure - edition v - yvonne... no hate she just had better verse.. |
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Voted For: Yvonne
not a real good battle........................... breakdown line 4 line aight................... You thinking to win this bitch shows u got it twisted Blasphamig in ya spit…son u got ur death edition listed* 6...aight punch, nice personal but cud have been better. dogs only bite,ur ghost shud be ready 2 write,u a vet?is a lie so do us a fav&decline dis fight,cos u could hurt sum1's eye 6...1st line aight, 2nd line not so gud!! ur punches would neva stand even if they were on ego cos u still gatta pack heat from yve...the vol-ca-no 6...average punch, slight self glorification!! ur rec has been geled,reseting it was stupid,cos ur skills got a limit** my clocks ticking i aint got time to waist,sit bak& c ya loss come in a minuite 7...better, nice closer. 25/40 Now I am up against a girl, but I'ma rock this bitch's world... She a'in' dope, only way she sick is when sickness hurled.... 5...sick lines are played, i only like them if they make me laugh, and this one didnt. Now I got you scared, well hoe, you should been prepared... Jaw dropped and stared, well if you was hot, I may have cared 6...pretty weak man. I haven't seen a picture, but if Eve ya sig, I'ma be a ditcher... But sayin' you dope, is sayin' a martini doesn' have a mixture 7...nice line, gud meta. I mean no offense, girl, but you better get a lil' common sense You be like 50 Cent, if you think you can merk me... ...That's Ordinary Nonsense... 6...average closer!! 24/40 Both weak verses, both need to elevate the game!! |
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