surgical vs oreo
 

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8 - Bars
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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-04-04 at 02:36 PM

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surgical has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 02:37 PM.

oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 03:05 PM.

i asked for you to pm me first but its all good homie

Im tellin you before u spit leave and forget it
Im just that red sign on your page tellin people to exit
I dipped you in milk and laid u out on the table
Then let you die out like Cain did Abel
I put so many holes in your body I see you better than x-ray
Your loosing your breath dont panic
Im bout to sink this youngin like that ice berg did titanic.
I stand tall like a tree but I flow like mapel
While im spitten you sayin is heaven missing an angel
Cant beat me you not strong enough so keep eatin your whetes
Head spinnin like CDs when I pop up in your hood more than graffiti
I put a wire through your soul than your soul through the wire
You bleedin now so its best that you retire
You foolish thinkin you could see the best
Im new like DVDs and you outdated like VHS.

pull out the scalpal, pull out the table,
thats the only way youll cut me up if your were able,
your like 12 with out a win and surgery is your hoobby?
well put an iv in your skin, cuz that will be the only flow in your body,
take off your white coat, take off your white trousers,
look everbody is another tennage douggie howser,
im too sick with my flow, he here goes a doctor on rv,
quit frontin hoe, leave the e.r. shit to t.v.,

no oofence dog you cool

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Voted For: oreo

honest vote orep win he had better verse period and better punches but barly need to say anything hes doper then most newbs:laugh:

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Voted For: oreo

vote to oreo!!

pull out the scalpal, pull out the table,
thats the only way youll cut me up if your were able,
well, pretty good idea, but could have been executed better!

Im tellin you before u spit leave and forget it
Im just that red sign on your page tellin people to exit
first line is bad, but second is good.

Introduction goes to surgical!!

your like 12 with out a win and surgery is your hoobby?
well put an iv in your skin, cuz that will be the only flow in your body,.........
im too sick with my flow, he here goes a doctor on rv,
quit frontin hoe, leave the e.r. shit to t.v.,
These are two good as punches, i think the second one is better.

You foolish thinkin you could see the best
Im new like DVDs and you outdated like VHS.
This was surgicals only real punche and it was quite weak.

Punches to Oreo!!!

For good flow you must try to keep all your lines even, none of you really did this, but surgical had some long lines and soe very short lines...eg..Your loosing your breath dont panic
Im bout to sink this youngin like that ice berg did titanic.
And that is poor flow..

Flow goes to Oreo whos flow kept fairly consistant over the battle.

Vote to oreo......please return the favour and vote on one of the battles below, thx

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Voted For: oreo

this was fresh and pretty hott.... considerin that 8 bars is 16 linez....butt the thought process was hott good battle

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Voted For: surgical

i thought that Surgical took this because his punches seemed to work out a lot more and the flow, although it fell off at times i felt it was just overall batter than the other dudes stuff... good punches they were a lot more on target and just struck your opponent harder.. good job to the both of you but inmy eyes i though that Surgical just had the better overall verse... so as i thought this my vote goes to him, again good job to the both...

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Voted For: oreo

i vote for oreo because he wrote less and it was better than surgical and he wrote a paragraph

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Voted For: surgical

ok surgical structure is ok a little streched in some places ok flow a good vocab now to where you lacked cain and ablel aint die out cain was cursed to walk the earth forever in the land of cain anyways punches aint hit but were ok disses were weak work on those and you will be much better a 5/10
oreo good structure and flow i like how your madd active and battle alot you will get better nut your punches are weak and disses too plus you need better wordplay your verse lacks because of that and makes you lose a 4/10

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Voted For: surgical

i think that surgical had better vocab in this one and more punches. oreo u had some better punches but when u do the math it kinda evens out. but i gotta say that surgical gets this one. it was really close though.

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Voted For: oreo

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stukture-tie
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best-oreo

oreo:
he had little pucnhes wasnt all to good but they were ok
other guy:
his verse didnt quite make to much sence hispunches didnt rly land
oreo wins pz

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Voted For: oreo

okay oreo got my vote his verse was better flowin and had harder punches...good wordplay and good personals i liked it and you had better structure but your only flaw was the one stretched line but nice youv def gotten better
8/10 on the whole

surgical okay you had good flow but i wasnt really feling your shit too much structure was messed up lines were short then stretched try to even them out some...punches were good but oyu self glorified a lot so that hurt you..also your x-ray line didnt rhyme with anything so that hurt you a lil....didnt see any personals if you woulda thew some in it woulda been closer.but like i said structure man work on it

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oreo-your like 12 with out a win and surgery is your hoobby?
well put an iv in your skin, cuz that will be the only flow in your body,

surgical-Cant beat me you not strong enough so keep eatin your whetes
Head spinnin like CDs when I pop up in your hood more than graffiti

v/oreo
return the favor honest explained votes plz.
peace~1