Empire vs THE BLACK PLAGUE
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting




DAMN TIME TO OWN ANOTHER LAME

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-04-04 at 08:15 PM

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The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 08:19 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 08:21 PM.

Wait hol up, i just PM'd you... lets make this 15-20 lines, i dont want this to be a little 10 line battle...

15-20

no you accepted rules stay how they are :nono: .................................

I don’t got shit to fear from this queer, afterall, you sport womens watches
You a faggot admit it.. You like crabs in prison…all up in men’s crotches
Don’t pretend to be straight, when u with ya computer hidin in the closet
The only time this fag “cums” ill, is when he leaves a sperm deposit*
Ya look like the white version of Shaq, so treat RV like LA and consider leaving**
you a disgrace to society, ya DNA reads "wackness", you diss yaself by breathing
You won’t leave.. Like a thorn you stick to my side like a black T on a hot day
Look how you ride Red Bulls dick like a bicycle.. Yet you claim you aint gay
Shoulda stayed outta my way… Mad cuz I voted for Triple N in ya battle
Sendin hate mail like Al queada does senators… sad that 1 vote got ya rattled
Ya lack originality.. Creativity is absent.. need to steal material like wynona ryder***
Drop Bible “verses” on ya ass.. Treat you like “Gamore” and burn down ya Empire****

*Im sayin he gay, so he has AIDS and cums ill

you drop yet?.............................................. .........................................

I can tell you from hell used to getting ya verses burned to ashes
Send viruses till my computer silences you still cant leave my verses crashing

You aint shit to me look through histroy they found a cure for
The Black Plague
We not equal like 2 people in dense fog ya chances of seeing me is vague

Damn ho its bad when ya crew know you a perpatrating imposter
No lie this the answer to why

Never will ya level of skill reach....cant compete hate cuz im better
And my bars sun you harder then rebels in Arbian deserts

Use intelligence whats the relevance when i outclass you on all levels clown
Always gotta beat herbs up ya words suck maybe a loss will settle you down



explanations-
look ay his profile it says hes from hell otherwise dont vote you dont understand my punches

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This was feedback posted for Empire
 

juss chekin it out... BP didtn iight in this verse but emp didnt try that hard.....

Voted For: Empire

Empire, you wonty his battle..... i liekd your verse the best... you had nice structure,, and some nice wordplay,,..... you cam harder with the punches and your verse was easy to understand...

T.B.P. ... you werent bad.. i liked your verse and your structure... you had some gogood punches but empire came harder wityh those.... And you had nice wordplay... but empire came harder with that too.... But nice job..

V/ Empire..

Empire... Return tha favor on my battle down there \/ \/ \/ ... Thanx!

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Voted For: Empire

hard to say...but ima have to give this one to Empire...his punches hit SLIGHTY harder...and becuz ya use of vocab...helped u get this one in my opinion...ya structure was shaky....stretched and that messed up the flow...ya opener coulda been betta...and ya closer was bad...that needed work..seem like u slacked towards the end to me....

Black Plague..
The only time this fag “cums” ill, is when he leaves a sperm deposit*
......ill lines and such are gettin pretty played...so try not to use them...ya verse was ok...but ya structure was stretched..ya punches coulda been betta too man...ya opener was meh..it was an ok personal...but still work on that too..ya closer was ok though...nice and different...by that i mean u used things from the bible to talk about a Empire collapsin..

both of yall semeed like yall slacked so that made it closer to decide..but i gotta give this to Empire...

Voted For: Empire

can tell you from hell used to getting ya verses burned to ashes
Send viruses till my computer silences you still cant leave my verses crashing
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT MAYNE GOOD OPENER NICE PUNCHES

Damn ho its bad when ya crew know you a perpatrating imposter
No lie this the answer to why
Quote:
Originally Posted by The Black Plague
How come i aint on the AI battle roster?

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ PERSONAL&PUNCH GOOD MAYNE NICE SHIT HERE

Never will ya level of skill reach....cant compete hate cuz im better
And my bars sun you harder then rebels in Arbian deserts

Use intelligence whats the relevance when i outclass you on all levels clown
Always gotta beat herbs up ya words suck maybe a loss will settle you down
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ HEY GOOD CLOSA


EMPIRE-HAD GOOD VERSE,,,,,,,,DECENT PUNCHES,,,,,,,,GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,,,,,AND,,,,,,,,,,,,PUCNHES&PERSONALS



I don’t got shit to fear from this queer, afterall, you sport womens watches
You a faggot admit it.. You like crabs in prison…all up in men’s crotches
Don’t pretend to be straight, when u with ya computer hidin in the closet
The only time this fag “cums” ill, is when he leaves a sperm deposit*
Ya look like the white version of Shaq, so treat RV like LA and consider leaving**
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD OPENER NICE PUNCH GOOD FLOW (PERSONALS PLZ)


you a disgrace to society, ya DNA reads "wackness", you diss yaself by breathing
You won’t leave.. Like a thorn you stick to my side like a black T on a hot day
Look how you ride Red Bulls dick like a bicycle.. Yet you claim you aint gay
Shoulda stayed outta my way… Mad cuz I voted for Triple N in ya battle
Sendin hate mail like Al queada does senators… sad that 1 vote got ya rattled
Ya lack originality.. Creativity is absent.. need to steal material like wynona ryder***
Drop Bible “verses” on ya ass.. Treat you like “Gamore” and burn down ya Empire****
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD SHIT NICE CLOSA


AIGHT MAYNE U HAD

GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW

BUT U DIDNT HAD NO PERSONALS U NEED PERSONALS TO WIN BATTLES LIKE SIK NIGGAS LIKE HIM~!

ANYWAY

EMPIRE GET MY VOTE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND USIN PERSONALS

~PEACE~

Voted For: Empire

empire:
k baisicly empire just has better personals and punches he hits like the flames down eyr throat after you eat biger king lol that gives him the nice wordplay but hes weak with vocab dawg wheres it at?

The Black Plugure:
k yer not that bad man but empires just stronger and he has flow his lines are evenly matched and thats what vets need and ya you have some nice multis in there but no to many but none hte less empire just came harder in my eye

VOTE: empire

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lol nice battle nice battle....
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Lmao... look at Empire... haha ok i don't care if i lose to someone who looks like that... just look at the broom in the backround.. it got ducktape on it lmao...

And about me lackin personals, what was the sayin he looks like shaq? what was the D/R vote personal? what was the womens watches personal?

Aite w/e uppin

This was feedback posted for Empire
 

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Voted For: Empire

Alright...

Plague, you had good ideas for punchlines, but calling people gay is one of the most played ideas in battling.. It was really dissapointing that you didnt know that bro cuz you obviously got potential.

Empire, all good punches with personals attached. The quote line was good, only bad line in your verse was the arbian deserts one cuz it was a bit off slant rhyming..

But you still got my vote..

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Voted For: Empire

lol Empire takes this!!!

I thought that Empire was very resourceful in this battle, by quoting somehting that plauge originaly said, lol, that was sooo funny!!

punches: pretty even, i thought they hit about the same but Empires shit was so funny so i give it to him, there was some nice wordplay from both halfs!

Flow was a bit bouny from Empire, but it was consistant so it didnt sound to bad, plauges flow was nice but wasnt as consistant. Flow was equal

Empire gets my vote, good battle

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