Ceas vs shadow
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 09:16 AM

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Ceas has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 08:47 AM.

shadow has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 08:49 AM.

i dont have to kill him.juss let my rhymes inslave him..
i made it 60 posts..not even his aliases can save him..
you think ur a rapper man even ur head must be hollow...
sit back n lernathingor2 ill drop a spit u can just swallow...*
newb comes on my doorstep like a damn jahhova's witness...
askin to battle thinkin he can win.. juss add it 2 ur wishless....
i let you see my skill and im definitly sure ur inspired....
........u have 2 choices get used to loosing or..........
...have ur name retired.......

* lernathingor2 is his aim screenname

ya don't come hard enough.. and i'm laughing mean while
i got this clown callin it quits.. and he's tapping speed dial
i'm new to the site.. but hell, i got to get this clown i check
and for real i did get it twisted.. but i'm talkin bout ya neck
but im serious tho, ya shit sucks.. so just put down ya text
so i'll handcuff ya fucking tongue.. to give ya mouth arrest
there might be some hope tho.. but fool this is it for now
but that shit thats behind me? yea.. its a shadow or doubt

Voted For: Ceas

Ok easy to vote.. Shadow ya shit wasnt bad, but you needed to come a lot harder on this one. Ceas had some good wordplay and the flow was all pretty good too. Thats why he won it.

Vote- Ceas

Peace.

Voted For: shadow

Pretty weak battle:

Ceas......your flow was good, an your sturcture was good....from there its downhill...u had no punches, no personals, no multies, no metas, your closer was not a personal jus cuz u said shadow in it...nothing hit man...u really need to elevate.

Shadow....you weren't better by much....your flow was good, structure coulda been better...u had a few punches that kinda hit nothing real strong but u had them...a few personals that kinda hit again nothing real strong...a few metas...good vocab tho...I liked that but nothing special.

Neither had anything really but shadow had a little more...he at least had punches all thought weak.

Vote: Shadow

do u have any idea what wordplay happens to be?...

This was feedback posted for Ceas
 

just checking shit out and uppin.........................

Voted For: shadow

i think shadow won dis battle because of his harder punches and flow. his structure was good, overall weak battle but shadow won

aight uppin ceas quit complaining..

This was feedback posted for shadow
 

blah cant vote im in A.I.

shadow pob won...bleh....

bleh...both verses were okay........both need some personals...blah im being accusmtomed to the verses wit all the hatred and perosnals bleh...

Voted For: shadow

i dont have to kill him.juss let my rhymes inslave him..
i made it 60 posts..not even his aliases can save him..
decent opner here, punch hit
you think ur a rapper man even ur head must be hollow...
sit back n lernathingor2 ill drop a spit u can just swallow...*
decent punchline here
newb comes on my doorstep like a damn jahhova's witness...
askin to battle thinkin he can win.. juss add it 2 ur wishless....
nice…
i let you see my skill and im definitly sure ur inspired....
........u have 2 choices get used to loosing or..........
...have ur name retired.......
decent closer…punch was on point

ya don't come hard enough.. and i'm laughing mean while
i got this clown callin it quits.. and he's tapping speed dial
decent opener
i'm new to the site.. but hell, i got to get this clown i check
and for real i did get it twisted.. but i'm talkin bout ya neck
decent, weak punch though
but im serious tho, ya shit sucks.. so just put down ya text
so i'll handcuff ya fucking tongue.. to give ya mouth arrest
nice punch
there might be some hope tho.. but fool this is it for now
but that shit thats behind me? yea.. its a shadow or doubt
decent closer

Overall shadow took this one by a hair
punches were harder & the flow was good…plus
he had a persona…

RTF shadow
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Voted For: shadow

both had a lot of good wordplay, but this cats was alot more directed at the other guy and was just more of a diss oriented battle rather than just sayin a few none realated clever things.

Voted For: shadow

Good Verse Shawdow

Openor=Shadow,Good Punch
Strukture=Tie,Easy Ta Read
Personals=Shadow,Onli 1
Punches=Tie,Both Had Ok Punches
Wordplay=Shadow,Ok Wordplay
Vokab=None
Closer=Shadow,Good Punch And Good Way Ta Close It

Shadow Came Harder Threw Out Tha Whole Verse.........

/V Shadow.............