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Ice Pick vs Ennovy
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6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Beef No Bitching gd luck... :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-05-04 at 10:04 AM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Ennovy has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 10:35 AM.
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Now I don’t wanna fuck ur brain up so ima use a simple lang* Its crazy how u wash out 58 stains..ur mouth has gatta be big bang You zombie walking in d rap game,b4 u know it u soon get a ball on ya face** The only place u rap is in my ass..cos on herre oldies aint got no more space*** This dude thinks he got eyes to see muh fuckers on the RapVerse site When its his skull we see..cos he been sucked dry outta too much B-bite**** Ur punches will never burn a livin flesh..they just ICED b4 u thro ‘em in ya spit So,im astonished how u PICK me thinking 2 rip,when I just knocked u out like in ya sig *his sig…got a man whos head blows up in to pieces **y’all shud know how zombie’s walk..and in his sig he got a lil gurl who gets hit with a ball on her head ***his got an asses in his sig….and oldies =vets..he been herre long enuff…lol ****b-bite=blunt bite..dats how we say it over herre be honest and so shall we be in ya battles....thanx |
Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 10:37 AM.
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13-16 huh ::ha-doo-kin:: i-assault-with a fire-ball-hit you wack bitch
Vonne now just sit back and continue to admire-raw-shyt you cant spit like elves i "(w)rap-with-skill-and-accuracy" while you sit in your crib So? i'll bring u "down to earth" like atmospheric-gravity busting you with real lines Ho rate me just a 7 or an 8.. i wont be upset cuz i'm still "above U" on-the-keyboard i'm not a fuckin horse so why are u "jockin-me-for?" you fuckin R V whore i'll leave u roped-in-knots then pull ur "ears" like shoe-laces ,you dont eat emcee's Yvonne stop lying You switched ya name so much like saimese twins ur known for havin two-faces and look at ya record you should start trying |
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Voted For: Ennovy
this was a bit better than ice picks, his wordplay wasnt that good apart from the "above U" line.... yvonne came a lil harder wit a better flow even though this can still be worked on! not many great punches from anyone but yvonnes were just a lil harder so im'a give it to her... peace,, return the favor - check my sig! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo ice i do vote in peepz battles chill...
uppin this thing!!! |
wasnt talking to you
saying in general for one some newb finally does vote sl no i wont chill |
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Voted For: Ennovy
Okay Imma Give This To Yvonne. Ice Pick: Ya Structure Was Kinda Streched But Ya Had Multies So It Was Ok. Until Ya Last Bar No Multies And Streched Like Fuck. Flow Was Off In Tha Last Bar. Punches: Ya First B. Was Just A Statment No Punch Second B. Again Just A Statment But Ya Had Some Nice Wordplay And Multies. Third B. This Was Ya Best Punch Nice Meta And That Punch Hit. Last B. It Was A Tight Bar I Just Felt That It Was Really Streched And The Flow Was Off. Yvonne: Nice Structure And Ya flow Was Nicely On. You Had Some Multies Here Too Also Nice Metas And Wordplay. 1st Bar: Kinda Weak Didn't Think It Hit At All...... 2nd Bar: Good Bar Was A Lil Betta Than Ya First One.... 3rd Bar: Nice Punch I Think This was A Personal: Ice's Old Avy Closer: This Was Ya Best. Nice Wordplay On His Name And Personal About His Sig. Overall I Give It to Yvonne Cause She Had Some Nice Personals Although I Do Recommend That You Word Ya Shit Better Next Time. Vote: Yvonne |
Voted For: Ice Pick
pick took this one easyily, harder punches, nice wordplay, and some nice personals that i caught in there... yvonne got better from what i seen, but yo structure was wack...good flow tho...good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
also i nerver had a zomnbie for anything so that isnt reffering to my old avy, that was FILLER to the 10th power
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Voted For: Ice Pick
this was an easy win i think................. no offense yvonne, u were just outclassed............. Ice Pick.............. tight ass verse, hot wordplay as usual, flow was gud, structure cud have been better, couple lines stretched, hard punches and personals, overall a good verse. 13-16 huh ::ha-doo-kin:: i-assault-with a fire-ball-hit you wack bitch Vonne now just sit back and continue to admire-raw-shyt you cant spit nice lines, gud punch, the first line i liked better with the ryu shit in it!!!! i'll leave u roped-in-knots then pull ur "ears" like shoe-laces ,you dont eat emcee's Yvonne stop lying You switched ya name so much like saimese twins ur known for havin two-faces and look at ya record you should start trying nice punches, but the lines are pretty stretched man!! gud shit though!!! yvonne, u spit aight, a couple of nice punches in there but nuthin too special. ure flow was gud, ure structure too cud use a little work. try more complex rhymin and better wordplay though, and most importantly stop explainin ure votes. people dont like that!!! Ur punches will never burn a livin flesh..they just ICED b4 u thro ‘em in ya spit So,im astonished how u PICK me thinking 2 rip,when I just knocked u out like in ya sig u attempted to play on his name, but i dont think it worked out that well. try bein more creative, like, an ice pick is used in the film Basic Instinct, try incorporatin it into a punch, or just think of wat ice pick's are used for and use it like that or sumthin!!!! pointer yvonne, rap against ppl who are more ure own level before u start goin after the big guns!!! |
This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
Ice Pick...
13-16 huh ::ha-doo-kin:: i-assault-with a fire-ball-hit you wack bitch Vonne now just sit back and continue to admire-raw-shyt you cant spit no..could of been better like elves i "(w)rap-with-skill-and-accuracy" while you sit in your crib So? i'll bring u "down to earth" like atmospheric-gravity busting you with real lines Ho played, dont like it rate me just a 7 or an 8.. i wont be upset cuz i'm still "above U" on-the-keyboard i'm not a fuckin horse so why are u "jockin-me-for?" you fuckin R V whore i'll leave u roped-in-knots then pull ur "ears" like shoe-laces ,you dont eat emcee's Yvonne stop lying You switched ya name so much like saimese twins ur known for havin two-faces and look at ya record you should start trying the "above u" line was ok and the last line was ok as well .................................................. . Yvonne... IP: Now I don’t wanna fuck ur brain up so ima use a simple lang* Its crazy how u wash out 58 stains..ur mouth has gatta be big bang had the idea... You zombie walking in d rap game,b4 u know it u soon get a ball on ya face** The only place u rap is in my ass..cos on herre oldies aint got no more space*** dont like it This dude thinks he got eyes to see muh fuckers on the RapVerse site When its his skull we see..cos he been sucked dry outta too much B-bite**** ok...i guess Ur punches will never burn a livin flesh..they just ICED b4 u thro ‘em in ya spit So,im astonished how u PICK me thinking 2 rip,when I just knocked u out like in ya sig ok....sig punches are weak though Yvonne wins this battle for a better overall verse i felt that she/he has a few more on track less played harder hitting punches then pick did, try to get rid of explaining your verses to people, dont explain why you threw a punch or a personal and pick try not to use so mane brackets or quotes kind of makes the reader not interested in readin your verse much. V/ Yvonne |
YOU CAN SUCK MY DICK
YOU ARE A WACK FAGGOT NO SKILL AND DUDE I WOULD FUCKIN CRUSH YOU PLAIN AND SIMPLE like elves i "(w)rap-with-skill-and-accuracy" while you sit in your crib So? Personal i'll bring u "down to earth" like atmospheric-gravity busting you with real lines Ho also another personal Look at her fuckin PROFYLE SKANO IS WEEK AND THE NBEW RAPVERSE PUSSY |
ice pick i neva xpected u to be this cheeky mayne.....
judge & jury.........i wanna elevate thats y im facin y'all vets...period!!!...cos if i keep battlin nu bees or peeps "of my level" i aint neva gon elevate that would be accumulating wins for nothin sake..... uppin this shit yo.... |
Voted For: Ice Pick
aight...ok battle here...ice pick...good verse....vocab was good...u had some nice wordplay and the punches came quite hard..some alright personals in thurr aswell..flow was ok...structure was ok..overall....decent verse... yvonne....another ok verse....altho..i dont think ya punches were has hard...but u came wit the more personals...u just need to add stronger punches in thurr....increase ya vocab aswell...ya structure and flow was good too...overall ok verse this was an ok battle...but punches take it every time so amna av to go wiv ice pick.... my vote=ice pick |
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lol assasin i would make my vocab phat if i could but take me outta italy first....lol
thanx for the feedback tho :) uppin peeps |
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aiyo...my vote was explained...i dunno what happened, but oh well, i tried
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Voted For: Ice Pick
i thought that Yvonne won this battle, his punches hoit harder and he had A LOT more personals that Ice pick did, good job to the both of you but Yvonne took this one due to his punches, structural differences, and his personals hit a LOT harder.. the other dude barely had any.. v/ Yvonne Switched Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^sorry, change that i meant to vote for Yvonne, get a mod to change it.
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Yeah i had personals asshole
Reads her fuckin profile in her crib so is one real lyrics is another you say you eat emcees is the third YOU FUCKIN WACK ASS FUCKIN IDIOT |
...just cant wait to bring this JOKE to an end....ughh
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Voted For: Ice Pick
- Both had really stretched lines- just one used a tiny font-... Ice Pick had better punches... Ur punches will never burn a livin flesh..they just ICED b4 u thro ‘em in ya spit So,im astonished how u PICK me thinking 2 rip,when I just knocked u out like in ya sig best bar from yvonne... wasn't great- the setup was weak... personal wasn't very clever, even the bold ICE and PICK were basic additions to the verse... Ice Pick- I liked a few of your lines... you show more potential in your verse... just work on line length-- and when you rhymed So with Ho... needs to stop-- need more of a complex rhymin structure to go with your vocab and description... keep workin on ur punches cuz they aint 100% yet, but in the right direction... |
Voted For: Ice Pick
ice pick won this battle because his punches hit harder n were more creative even tho they were stretched "longer than giraffe necks" (lloyd banks). But Yvonne spit was pretty basic even tho it flowed better it didnt really hit that hard cuz the personals were pretty played too. |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
...One-Sided Vote... Ice Pick gets my vote on this one cause... 1.His punches were hard & that they connected. 2.Tha flow on his piece was aight 3.Tha structure was 'ok' (a little stretchy tho) Yvonne..yo shit was pretty good too... 1.Yo punches weren't as hard as Ice Pick's tho 2.Structure was decent (better than Ice Pick's) :D 3.And your flow was ok... Overall... Ice Pick came harder in the punches tho..*that's all that matters* ..Peace |
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