str8_hood vs bradley_thomas
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 75

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 10:45 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

str8_hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 07:46 PM.

don’t even know Bradley Thomas and already he’s talking crap/
I’m a little scared to battle cause I got a phobia of cats(pussy)/

So keep running that mouth ima leave you stuck with stitches/
Let me keep this short and sweet like homosexual midgets/

U cant beat me son, so why even try/
Shove my hands down your throat so you can throw up your gang signs/

Your missions to beat str8? You know that you’re gonna fail/
This kids butt is like a “box”…all that enters is “mail”(male)/

Knew you was gonna lose when I seen your name I aint no fool/
I’m killing this kid like “Jordan” but this here aint no “Bull”/

bradley_thomas has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 10:41 PM.

hey u bitch lets go//ur a fag and move too slo//ur nuttin but a home-o//ill kill ur wit my arrow and bow//its my time to shine//ur fozen in a slime//ur nuttin buy a circul-round not straight//u got me to date ur gurl- ur nuttin but bait//ur useless//ur like a stool-on u i take a piss//i take ur mom and shove her down//shes so fat they sent her to da pound// im srry if i win//im jus better and u can send me to the pin//its not a sin//im the better man//i can crush u wit one hand//this is the end ur life is done//it was great it was fun//

This was feedback posted for str8_hood
 

hood killed this kid........ but there was some battle no no's in both verses......... still trying to attack sexuality wit "homo" lines and shit.......... hood connected better with punches... bradley didnt flow at all........ docta zues rhyme styles........ terrible...........

count it or dont count it....... its all good

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152363
return the favor yall please drop a vote on this thread

ayo make sure yall vote in the polls. ay tito could u vote in the polls so it counts

i dont see you dropping votes on my thread........ and if you didnt have a 75 post count min to vote i would have polled it....... its the way the battle is set up it wont let me vote....

'easy'

still uppin 4 votes

This was feedback posted for bradley_thomas
 

WOW....... Weak battle ... First guy decent.. second guy....
Super weak.. find a new hobby... this is not a vote

Voted For: str8_hood

one sided battle.........

don’t even know Bradley Thomas and already he’s talking crap/
I’m a little scared to battle cause I got a phobia of cats(pussy)/
that was pretty weak you can do alot better 4/10

So keep running that mouth ima leave you stuck with stitches/
Let me keep this short and sweet like homosexual midgets/
that was sick... lmao 9/10

U cant beat me son, so why even try/
Shove my hands down your throat so you can throw up your gang signs/
no bad at all..... 8/10

Your missions to beat str8? You know that you’re gonna fail/
This kids butt is like a “box”…all that enters is “mail”(male)/
hahahahaha lmao 8/10

Knew you was gonna lose when I seen your name I aint no fool/
I’m killing this kid like “Jordan” but this here aint no “Bull”/
alright, not bad 7.5/10

36.5/50


hey u bitch lets go//
ur a fag and move too slo//
ur nuttin but a home-o//
ill kill ur wit my arrow and bow//
what the fuck is taht? that was horrible 2/10

its my time to shine//
ur fozen in a slime//
once again, what the fuck are oyu doing? 1/10

ur nuttin buy a circul-round not straight//
u got me to date ur gurl- ur nuttin but bait//
what in the hell, think aobut stuff before you write it 1/10

ur useless//
ur like a stool-on u i take a piss//
an attempt at a punch? lmao 2/10

i take ur mom and shove her down//
shes so fat they sent her to da pound//
what in the hell? 1/10

im srry if i win//
im jus better and u can send me to the pin//
its not a sin//
im giving oyu points for attempting a multi 2/10

im the better man//
i can crush u wit one hand//
almost there....... 3/10

this is the end ur life is done//
it was great it was fun//
that was shit for a closer... 1/10

13/80

this may be the most one sided peice of shit ive ever seen, str8 you took tihs kid way to seriously, i tihnjk you tried too hard in this battle

my obvious v/ str8_hood

ok ok . uppin 4 votes

This was feedback posted for str8_hood
 

U merked him mayun gud jubz...fix yo shit brad... dont put those '//' things and make it better

ayo make sure yall vote on the polls man. still uppin 4 votes.

uppin 4 votes........................................

Voted For: str8_hood

battle was whack, punches were very weak, sorry no hate doe, but i think str8 hood won dis because his verse was easier to read and da structure and flow was way betta

still uppin 4 votes.................................

Voted For: str8_hood

St8 got this..

Structure - St8
Punches - St8
Wordplay - St8
Flow - St8
Opener - St8
Closer - St8

he dominated every category, so i gota give it to him.. nice battle from both, but st8 had more in his verse.. bradley, just elevate a little, good try tho..


return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153028

come on yo. vote up. still uppin. lets close this.

c'mon im uppin for votes here, i need some votes

still uppin 4 votes...................................

Voted For: str8_hood

damn this like crushin a ant with a escelade y


BT no offense dog but that is the worst
verse I ever SEEN on RV

if you need help i can help you
IM me at ProVerse

you verses weren't even a punch lol

hey u bitch lets go//ur a fag and move too slo

^what da fuck does movin slo have to do wit
bein a fag????LMAO
and its not an insult

"wow i run faster then you"

damn man really weak lines

str8

you came way to hard for this battle
you prolly kiickkin yoself wishin you woulda
came weaker to avoid tryin

you had wordplay which is very nice
and makes people go OOOOOOO
and flow so u def win

yo BT

im me so i can helpu out

ProVerse

pc

ok man still uppin 4 votes..lets close this one.....

hey evryone i have a story i need to tell ya bout st8 fag here

hes gonna walk away from tis battle it a limp//
hes da hoe and his dads da pimp//
ur nuttin but a baby son//
atleast i have balls to stand up, but u aint got none//

i was jus havin a bad day

im uppin fo votes here

me vs. x-on
me vs. lil g bro

Voted For: str8_hood

ok bradley structure is fucked up flow is wayyyyy off punches aint hit work on those no hate vocab is good disses are decnt but could be worded much better a 4/10
str8_hood good opener ender was decent also here structure a little off but ok as is the flow vocab decent the mail line was funny as fuck a ok verse better set uo easier to read and better punches and disses gave you a better verse here 6/10

i always vote honest yall should do the same and return honest votes thank you