distilled vs Inception
 

Battle Rules:

8- 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate
No D/R
No pussyin about

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 10:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

distilled has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 09:00 PM.

Inception has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 09:00 PM.

aiiight yo, I'ma drop 2mrw or some shit. Sortin out Writer's Block now.

pc

when itz beef thiz bum claim he muslim an itz againzt hiz religion
take out the routez of hiz eyez so he can see past thiz winnin vision
should be a nurse at a mental hospital u so good at handlin nutz
he nbc before 93 thiz cat got no friendz even ya name stutter klutz*
only time u fuck a pussy when u stuck ya middle finger up in a mirror
reflect on ya homo tendencies look at ya dick an see shit clearer**
e style nerdz ubsurd for fuckin wit deztruction like sex wit satan
he contemplatin shakin from fear of death like psychic analization


* hes got 2 L's in his name together yall get it? :huh:
** homo and shit on is dick from fuckin niggaz in the ass blah blah :laugh:

Woooah forgot about this one, meh

First two lines you gonna realise the mistake you made,
I liived a life of sin, now killing you is the blood being repaid.
Punch holes through your lines like a messed up typewriter,
Ignite this page with flames you done never seen brighter,
Inception's already shaking, nervous like a virgin's firt time,
This guy aint a newb, so theres no excuse for his worst lines,
His verse aint the worst he'll say 'it's good enough to beat ya'
Kid I dont do opposites, but If I did, I wouldnt defeat ya
You got a lot to learn kid, that wack, and yet you been here a while,
Crackthis fool With a Soul Clap, y'all know I'm merkin E-Style.

meh not too much there, y'all know I had to throw in the E-Style!!

vote hoes

uppin . . . . . .

vote people

Voted For: distilled

incept- man that was not enjoyable. bring down ya font size, make punches wittier and harder and try harder in general cuz that was whack. only close to good line was the closer and it was only like 5/10..........4/10

distilled- i liked yours better much better structure and i chuckled at one of the punches so you basically get the win. last line was self glorification so try not to do that anymore, other than that try to get more complex and witty and u got battles on lock......7/10

V/distilled
RTF...pz.

Voted For: Inception

i think inception won dis battle dawg. inception had betta punches and betta wordplay. stilled was good as well he had some hard ounches, but inception was more consistent wit his punches. inception had a more expanded vocabulary and also he had da more complete and diverse verse. my vote is inception

If you can tell me what the word diverse means then I wont think that is DR

i dont know that kid but your first shit as to be d/r

he said get witty punchs..... the fuck im not a nerd nigga
nigga said u won cause he chuckled at 1 of your punchs lol be seriuos nigga

i aint trippin though i dont care

Voted For: distilled

Distilled took this easy I thought....

Inception came pretty weak..explanations of punches are always gay....and not needed....an der iz no need ta talk like dis....in a battle..it jus makes you look newbish..punches and concepts were weak

Distilled...looked like you came half assed but yous till took this cause of your much harder hitting punches, better concepts and more consistency......decent verse

Vote=distilled

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I wouldnt be bothered man, thing is, he was talkin kinna, not right if you get me, and then he says diverse???

Kinna wierd thas all

Upping this ish namsayin

Blah! !

uppin once more.

Just want to say RIP to you Smoka.

Voted For: distilled

Ok. This wasnt hard to vote on.

Interception, a lot of your lines were slightly stretched, your opening line was pretty played. Some lines didnt make sense and only a few of your punches hit properly.

Distilled, your verse was better, some punches wernt amazing, but it was enough to beat interception.

Elevate to both, but the vote has to go to Distilled on this one. Peace.

uppppin peeeeople

namsayin

Blah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow my punchs didnt make since kind of a lie is that i dont see where they dont make since


uppin this shit

Uppin again.

Spect to those who voted, you keep Front lines alive.

Everyone else is twats

Voted For: distilled

pretty weak by both

Distilled....your flow was great, structure was great, punches not so great....they hit but they hit weak...personals same thing they hit but hit weak...your metas were a lil better they was decent...didn't really have multies.

Incep...your flow was good, structure was good...punches I didn't see any...you bragged about your skills instead of clowning your opponent...nonoe of your lines were directed at him...its as if u thought u were writing a open mic<---what I mean by that is u didn't aim your lines...u coulda said them to anybody...makes u suspect of prewriting but I don't think u prewrote jsu think your new to this so much respect an continue to elevate.

Flow: Distilled
Structure: INcep
Punches: distilled
Personals: Distilled
Metas: Distilled
Vote: Distilled

This was feedback posted for distilled
 

checkin the polls an uppin the battle for ya......

This was feedback posted for Inception
 

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WEeed Dopeman, spect.

SPuL, hoe.

uppin this ish once more

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This was feedback posted for distilled
 

uppin this shit nice drop son

Voted For: distilled

not much there but better then his. you had persons and a hot flow if you can read then you can tell who won way to got didtilled