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poison vs SenesIzIt
Battle Rules:
6 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting verse do no more than one hour after drop Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-02-04 at 11:41 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
SenesIzIt has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 11:12 PM.
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poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 11:21 PM.
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i'll win this battle with no risk//
leave a hole through ur centre like a compact disk// the fact is u need some more practice// somebody crack his jaw b4 I crack his// with a brass nuckle// cuz id love to see yo ass strugle// whatever votes u get imma get double// if u front, i'll pull the tech and squeez// im unexpected like a sneez// cool as a light breeze// im not just spitten, im poison spitten// u probably give more head than the boys in prison// yo i'll make u fall like a dry leaf// im known to hit meat so dont start beaf |
you shouldnt have called me out...knowin that yer as soft as tits
after this ima have you reachin for a bra...like a topless bitch with hips that switch...how in the fuck can you say yer a man with the same fuckin name as a long haired eighties band when i pull out my nuts...just open up and say aah as i expose yer guts with these blades from my chainsaw put yer blood on ice...sip it as i eat yer spleen you coulodnt spit hot with a match and a mouth full of gasoline |
Voted For: poison
voted for poison close battle but i had to give it to poisen poisen's best line im not just spitten, im poison spitten// u probably give more head than the boys in prison// SenesIzIt's best line with hips that switch...how in the fuck can you say yer a man with the same fuckin name as a long haired eighties band funny shit there but poisen had more flow |
alright alright...im one down...still uppin though...
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Voted For: SenesIzIt
Verse: you shouldnt have called me out...knowin that yer as soft as tits after this ima have you reachin for a bra...like a topless bitch with hips that switch...how in the fuck can you say yer a man with the same fuckin name as a long haired eighties band when i pull out my nuts...just open up and say aah as i expose yer guts with these blades from my chainsaw put yer blood on ice...sip it as i eat yer spleen you coulodnt spit hot with a match and a mouth full of gasoline ---- whack battle ... both verses was lacking with punches. there were NO personals and whack methaphors ... but the overall winner goes to this guy ^ His punches hit slightly harder ... |
upiiinnnnn fffffoooooooooorrrrrr votes
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This was feedback posted for SenesIzIt
yo i tol u i wanted to battle u cuz of u i lost 2 battles. i aint even noe we had da battle nigga. so anyway lets battle
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uppin for votes
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^just Uppin again^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuk
whats wrooonnng with u ppl we need some dammmmnn votes!!! are u all dead or something |
alright we need to get this shit over with....it really aint that hard to vote....you just look at the two verses and then the one that you think is better, thats the one you vote for....i mean damn....isnt that the reason you joined this site?....to get feedback on your shit and your battles voted on....well us too....show some loyalty to yourself and vote....that is all....1
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Voted For: SenesIzIt
vote goes to SenesIzIt, poison, your flow was what let you down, punches were ok but your flow needs work!!! SenesIzIt you had nice flow, and some good and original punches, last line was nice..... put yer blood on ice...sip it as i eat yer spleen you coulodnt spit hot with a match and a mouth full of gasoline well done, vote goes to SenesIzIt please return the favour |
ps.....retun the favour PLEASE and vote on one of the battles below, i am trying to get them closed the help please. thx
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Voted For: SenesIzIt
this was a good battle but sene has this wrapped up his flow was much better although poisons was good as well. some of poisons lines seemed like he put them down just for the sake of rhyming. punches goes to senes as well his were alot more creative then poisons and made more sense wich in turn made the flow overall alot better. not much for mutli's in either one. the opener goes to senes it just hit alot harder. as for closer this definetly goes to senes "put yer blood on ice...sip it as i eat yer spleen you coulodnt spit hot with a match and a mouth full of gasoline" yo i'll make u fall like a dry leaf// im known to hit meat so dont start beaf senes was way more creative and flowed super nice poisons was kinda weak the leaf line was way off point as were alot of his other lines. so overall this vote goes to senesizit. VOTE: SenesIzIt Return the favour.....honest vote |
uppin for votes...we really need to get this shit over with...thank you for your support....1
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Voted For: poison
i'll win this battle with no risk// leave a hole through ur centre like a compact disk// the fact is u need some more practice// somebody crack his jaw b4 I crack his// with a brass nuckle// cuz id love to see yo ass strugle// whatever votes u get imma get double// if u front, i'll pull the tech and squeez// im unexpected like a sneez// cool as a light breeze// im not just spitten, im poison spitten// u probably give more head than the boys in prison// yo i'll make u fall like a dry leaf// im known to hit meat so dont start beaf ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" PUNCHES NICE FLOW ELEVATE SOME MORE ON DEM PUNCHES "OK" you shouldnt have called me out...knowin that yer as soft as tits after this ima have you reachin for a bra...like a topless bitch with hips that switch...how in the fuck can you say yer a man with the same fuckin name as a long haired eighties band when i pull out my nuts...just open up and say aah as i expose yer guts with these blades from my chainsaw put yer blood on ice...sip it as i eat yer spleen you coulodnt spit hot with a match and a mouth full of gasoline ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE ELEVATE ON DEM PUNCHES,,,,,,,,CAUSE YO PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT AT ALL,,,,,,,,,,,STRUTURE WORK ON DAT TOO,,,,,,,,, V-POISON ALL AROUND BETTA VERSE |
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Voted For: SenesIzIt
neither had good punches both were weak that seni\esizit line bout the 80s band was a dope personal feeling that enders were both played punches and disse as well as structure vocab and flow senes was better in all catogorys poison shit was all over the place here and there and he had no good punches or disses vote to senesizit return my honest vote both of you |
i need one more and dude needs three more....so im just uppin this shit to get it closed.......1
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Voted For: SenesIzIt
flow: senes structure: = multis: tie (both very few punches:= personals:1 by senes enjoyment: i liked senes a bit more |
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