OAKLEY vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



A VET FROM R.B HUH?WELL TIME THAT I SEND YOU BACK

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-06-04 at 11:53 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Oakley has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 12:00 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 03:38 PM.

Empire, You pointless like when blind people Blink...
Your whole "IMAGE" is more played than a highlighted Link.
Quit playin, Curve your hat. Your as white as my Hanes.
And do this site a favor and pick an element of Chains!
From silver to gold, to your body tone in Bold
Answer this one for me, Since when do "thugs" Bowl?
Your a disgrace, a waste, an Idol for what is bad taste
Equivalent to what I place when I scroll-select "double space"
You can rest asure your less, And no...I'm not CarsonJet...
And I can sit back and laugh, At your claim's of a Vet.

ill drop tonight........................................... ...........................................

Spit the hardest?no yous a 'ARTIST' so the closest yall ever be is a 'PRINCE'
Respect the ruler ya punches like zab judda lightweight should give you a hint
Yous a vet? no i checked you just a big mouth rookie with posts
Trash herb like wins protected by passwords and ya cookies is broke
This is a joke as for 'OAK'......i burn trees in daily rotation
Its so sad too bad you stare at my picture with jeoulous hatrad
Its basic ya elevation is off facing a moment of crisis
Ya text dont connect like broken computer devices

FINISHER-

Rap battles should supply saddles all the dickriding going on in the site
Couple 1000 posts winning off D.R votes no wonder you think that you nice


EXPLANATIONS-
bar 1-prince changed his name to the artise this dude oakley is a artist making sigs and shit little wordplay metaphores and his title says lightweight zab juddahs a lightweight boxer
FINISHER-hes from rapbattles madd dr shit going on over there he gots hella posts and gets madd dr votes maybe thats why he thinks hes nice when he comes over here

Spit the hardest?no yous a 'ARTIST' so the closest yall ever be is a 'PRINCE'
Respect the ruler ya punches like zab judda lightweight should give you a hint
Yous a vet? no i checked you just a big mouth rookie with posts
Trash herb like wins protected by passwords and ya cookies is broke
This is a joke as for 'OAK'......i burn trees in daily rotation
Its so sad too bad you stare at my picture with jeoulous hatrad
Its basic ya elevation is off facing a moment of crisis
Ya text dont connect like broken computer devices

FINISHER-

Rap battles should supply saddles all the dickriding going on in the site
Couple 1000 posts winning off D.R votes no wonder you think that you nice

pretty stretched when u don't size it down.
doesn't flo either.
horrible wordplay in first line.

not swayin. they can't read this. But, Im guessin 5-0 me.

UPPIN

higly boubt it structure is only 5% of a vote while punches are 40%and i own you in punches as well as the 12%vocab part of the vote and creativity i own you as well 8% more thats 60% of the verse i dropped is better i see 5-0 me :gfy:

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Voted For: Empire

Spit the hardest?no yous a 'ARTIST' so the closest yall ever be is a 'PRINCE'
Respect the ruler ya punches like zab judda lightweight should give you a hint
^^^^nice opener!!


Yous a vet? no i checked you just a big mouth rookie with posts
Trash herb like wins protected by passwords and ya cookies is broke
^^^^^wasnt feeling it

This is a joke as for 'OAK'......i burn trees in daily rotation
Its so sad too bad you stare at my picture with jeoulous hatrad
^^^^not bad

Its basic ya elevation is off facing a moment of crisis
Ya text dont connect like broken computer devices
^^^^NICE!

Rap battles should supply saddles all the dickriding going on in the site
Couple 1000 posts winning off D.R votes no wonder you think that you nice^^^^^ LOL good closer!

Empire, You pointless like when blind people Blink...
Your whole "IMAGE" is more played than a highlighted Link.
^^^^^nice opener!

Quit playin, Curve your hat. Your as white as my Hanes.
And do this site a favor and pick an element of Chains!
^^^^^nah

From silver to gold, to your body tone in Bold
Answer this one for me, Since when do "thugs" Bowl?
^^^^^mmmm, ok

Your a disgrace, a waste, an Idol for what is bad taste
Equivalent to what I place when I scroll-select "double space"
^^^^good

You can rest asure your less, And no...I'm not CarsonJet...
And I can sit back and laugh, At your claim's of a Vet.
^^^^^ ok closer

vote goes to empire, his punches came harder and they were funny. good job

please return honest vote on oe of the battles below

Voted For: Empire

Good Battle But Empire Takes This One.He Had Harder Punches And The Better Disses.Oak Did Come With Some Nice Lines Like The Hanes Line But That And Another Were About It.He Didnt Have Enough To Keep Up With Empire.


Vote- Empire

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Lmao at this.
UPPIN.

wait till the vets come an peep this.

Voted For: Oakley

Empire, You pointless like when blind people Blink...
Your whole "IMAGE" is more played than a highlighted Link.
somewhat decent
Quit playin, Curve your hat. Your as white as my Hanes.
And do this site a favor and pick an element of Chains!
first part nice personal
From silver to gold, to your body tone in Bold
Answer this one for me, Since when do "thugs" Bowl?
lmao this was nice
Your a disgrace, a waste, an Idol for what is bad taste
Equivalent to what I place when I scroll-select "double space"
decent
You can rest asure your less, And no...I'm not CarsonJet...
And I can sit back and laugh, At your claim's of a Vet.
decent but not hard



Spit the hardest?no yous a 'ARTIST' so the closest yall ever be is a 'PRINCE'
Respect the ruler ya punches like zab judda lightweight should give you a hint
stretched
Yous a vet? no i checked you just a big mouth rookie with posts
Trash herb like wins protected by passwords and ya cookies is broke
2nd is nice
This is a joke as for 'OAK'......i burn trees in daily rotation
Its so sad too bad you stare at my picture with jeoulous hatrad
decent but not hard
Its basic ya elevation is off facing a moment of crisis
Ya text dont connect like broken computer devices
played

FINISHER-

Rap battles should supply saddles all the dickriding going on in the site
Couple 1000 posts winning off D.R votes no wonder you think that you nice
aint feeling

This was feedback posted for Oakley
 

juss scheckin this out...................................

This was feedback posted for Oakley
 

Took this easily i mean Empire didnt throw punches just meta's.
nothing made me go oh shit dope.
Oakley didnt have punches that made me think Oh shit dope but he had some good punches.
Finisher was class decent personal punch.

Just calling it as i saw it.
Pz.

Voted For: Empire

he had much better wordplay, was a little off at times, but the explanation helped a little:)

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Voted For: Empire

OAKLEY:
Empire, You pointless like when blind people Blink...
Your whole "IMAGE" is more played than a highlighted Link.

booo... not a good opener or punch... pointless like when blind people blink?... blind folks ain't got fingers?

Quit playin, Curve your hat. Your as white as my Hanes.
And do this site a favor and pick an element of Chains!

no punch... chains ain't gonna help this site at all... what ya tryna get at?

From silver to gold, to your body tone in Bold
Answer this one for me, Since when do "thugs" Bowl?

filler... weak punch again...

Your a disgrace, a waste, an Idol for what is bad taste
Equivalent to what I place when I scroll-select "double space"

nice try...but still fell short... kinda understood it after i read it a few times

You can rest asure your less, And no...I'm not CarsonJet...
And I can sit back and laugh, At your claim's of a Vet.

weak closer... ya almost dissed yaself with tha one
structure was a little off... one personal about the bowling but not very effective... no multies, no metas, punches were weak, build on ya vocab... see the potential but not quite ready for the bigger kats yet...overall 5.0/10

Empire:

Spit the hardest?no yous a 'ARTIST' so the closest yall ever be is a 'PRINCE'
Respect the ruler ya punches like zab judda lightweight should give you a hint

funny shyt...good opener

Yous a vet? no i checked you just a big mouth rookie with posts
Trash herb like wins protected by passwords and ya cookies is broke

decent personal... nice effective punch... watch the forced use of multies though

This is a joke as for 'OAK'......i burn trees in daily rotation
Its so sad too bad you stare at my picture with jeoulous hatrad

i understand where this was going (looking at ya pics in member mugshots...lol) but didn't hit as hard as it should have... set up was nice but ya ended it weak

Its basic ya elevation is off facing a moment of crisis
Ya text dont connect like broken computer devices

again good set-up but the rest fell short.... connect lines w/ computers has been done to death


FINISHER-

Rap battles should supply saddles all the dickriding going on in the site
Couple 1000 posts winning off D.R votes no wonder you think that you nice

hard-hitting finisher... way to end a verse...
watch out for line stretching... you can say the same shyt with less words and still keep a good flow... personals were hitting... nice use of wordplay here and there...overall 7.8/10

Voted For: Oakley

oakleyz flow flowed bettr n wuz reel tite, he had hot punchlinez an disses dat hit real hard an empirez flow wuznt az creative as oakley so oakley getz my vote

This was feedback posted for Empire
 

blah...........................checkin' the damn polls:)

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Voted For: Empire

Empire
his flow was mad nice he came harder structure was cool punches was cool personals was aiight good battle both yall came at it good was this a beef or just for fun??

This was feedback posted for Empire
 

checking polls, meh, im not alloud to vote!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Empire

I think that Empire got this battle because i feel that Empire came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Empire got it they were used effectifely and were on point OAKLEY u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Empire good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Empire and flow and structure i'll give to Empire.

V/Empire There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly