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KingKenoDNC vs XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
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6- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting QUICK BATTLE HERE Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-03-04 at 10:47 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
KingKenoDNC has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 10:18 PM.
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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 10:18 PM.
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toxic verbs think he toxic well ya brain im go rock it//
if toxic say he can beat keno then we'll call him a false prophet// this aint the pen but you bout to get lyrically raped// i aint listenin to ya bullshit like nerds on blinds dates// let it be known i spit flames so dont test, or get burned// the king is here now so there is alot of lessons for u to learn// |
my rhymes are sweet (nice) i punch u so hard make holes in yo teeth like cavaties//
yo rhymes wouldnt shine if u waxed dem clean even if u ride an skateboard yo rhymes wouldnt be extreme dan me// Yo rhymes wouldnt be tighter dan mines if u wore bill cospy sweata// my rhymes cutt yo verse like an papa shredda,,,,ur not gettin betta,u like an broken elevata// Yo rhymes wouldne be fresh if u took some "winter fresh" iam makin u hot and sweart givin u hot breath//(RHYMES STINK) call me an surgery doctor,,,take da "scapel" and incinsion through yo organs killing befo yo heart stops,cerbal death// done~! errrrrr rusty |
Voted For: KingKenoDNC
King K wins this battle with his 3 bars alone punches were better and structure was on point. Toxic's flow was pretty wack n juvenile. He should work on his creativity alot and that structure was turrrrible. |
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Voted For: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
this battle goes hands down to toxic for better wordplay and wittier punches.He didn't have any personals but the punches made up for that.Hella stretched lines too,better watch that/ King,your shit didn't make much sense and 90% of it should've been reoworded.The nerd blind date line....um no. you had one ok line in your verse and it was the opener.Apart from that,your verse was weak.You need to work on structure,complex wordplay,and hard-hitting punches. V/ Toxic verbz. |
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aight preciate the feedback ill try to elevate 1-1 uppin for more votes |
aight peep'z uppin for more votes ~!!!!!!!
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Voted For: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
umm this is pretty one sided.... opener - toxic closer - toxic flow - toxic punchez - toxic vocab - toxic structure - king v - no hate king but toxic won this shit easy...... watch ya line lenghts toxic.... |
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Voted For: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
Emcee:KingKenoDNC Verse: toxic verbs think he toxic well ya brain im go rock it// if toxic say he can beat keno then we'll call him a false prophet// this aint the pen but you bout to get lyrically raped// i aint listenin to ya bullshit like nerds on blinds dates// let it be known i spit flames so dont test, or get burned// the king is here now so there is alot of lessons for u to learn// Comments:hm...yeh you were pretty consistant ill give you that but you just didnt come hard....you should write ya verse then read it again to see if it makes sense then rewrite it with better multis and metas...although i did like the blind date one lol/ Marks: Wordplay - 5/10 Metas - 6/10 Vocabulary - 5/10 Structure - 7/10 Punches - 5/10 Opener - 4/10 Closer – 5/10 Personals – 3/10 you said "if" not good word choice.. Enjoyment – 5/10 Creativity - 5/10 Overall - 50/100 ----------50% Emcee:XxToXiCXxVeRbZ Verse: my rhymes are sweet (nice) i punch u so hard make holes in yo teeth like cavaties// yo rhymes wouldnt shine if u waxed dem clean even if u ride an skateboard yo rhymes wouldnt be extreme dan me// Yo rhymes wouldnt be tighter dan mines if u wore bill cospy sweata// my rhymes cutt yo verse like an papa shredda,,,,ur not gettin betta,u like an broken elevata// Yo rhymes wouldne be fresh if u took some "winter fresh" iam makin u hot and sweart givin u hot breath//(RHYMES STINK) call me an surgery doctor,,,take da "scapel" and incinsion through yo organs killing befo yo heart stops,cerbal death// Comments:aight aight not bad verse..um ya structure was kinda fucked up but that doesnt matter too much to me its what its comprised of...i liked some of the metas and i think thats what won this.. Marks: Wordplay - 6/10 Metas - 7/10 Vocabulary - 7/10 hott cerbal death Structure - 5/10 coz i dont care about structure Punches - 6/10 Opener - 6/10 Closer – 8/10 Personals – 5/10 Enjoyment – 7/10 Creativity - 7/10 Overall - 64/100 ---------64% return the favor..... |
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Voted For: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
More effort on xx part.. more punchlines, more quantity. the quality of boths were so so, but xx had more in his/hers and i gotta give it to him.her because of the content.. nice battle from both, but xx disses were stronger.. plz return favor with an honest vote in my thread here.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153028 |
Voted For: KingKenoDNC
Hard one to call, neither were too good, Toxic had some decent punches, Keno had some better ones. Keno gets my vote, even if he didn't actually do good enough to lyrically rape toxic. |
Voted For: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
XxToXicXxVeRbZ good job dawg this vote goes for him he had a kinda weak openin verse kinda not dat weak though structure good, try not 2 write alot though punchlinez good came at him around there KingKenoDNC openin verze also good didn't really come dat hard i don't think i saw any punchlinez but good structure though both battler's we're da same but i gotta give it 2 Toxic |
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