RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=63)
-   -   str8_hood vs SubtleTee (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153480)

SubtleTee 10-04-04 10:59 PM

str8_hood vs SubtleTee
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-07-04 at 10:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Old battle close.. win given to leader

System 10-04-04 11:00 PM

SubtleTee has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 11:00 PM.

System 10-04-04 11:21 PM

str8_hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 11:21 PM.

Implicit 10-06-04 05:37 PM

ok man here it is...10 lines

This kids so subtle so I’ll break him in half
Wouldn’t be ‘plain’ sick if you threw up on ‘air crafts’

You got 1 win up against me u got no chance in hell
The only ‘gun’ wars u been in is ‘pump’ing gas at shell

You rappin like ja rule you belong in the kids choir
Even if you was tony hawk you couldn’t spitfire(a skating company)

this the easiest battle ima burn you the fastest
Thinks hes some sorta of icon(eye-con) cause he jacked someones glasses

Like Hersheys chocolate man your simple and plain
Ignite a flame on ur dick jus to see you coming with flames

SubtleTee 10-07-04 10:03 PM

Have niggas ~left in pain~ my opponents ~wrecked and maimed~./
Because your funeral’s the only time folks gonna “respect ya name”/

I’m payed to ~slay and dismember,~ “Str8?” I’ll ~end her.~/
And Sub’s gonna “rip hood” like blades taken to KKK members./

Spittin to an audience as if ~we cared,~ kid’s shaking, ~he’s scared~/
Just check his inventory, Stiches? Jeez, this kid came prepared./

You’re lyrics just ~ain’t good~, my lines so strong they ~break wood~/
I wanted a battle, but you know a nikka gets hungry, so I “8 (ate) hood./




Explanations:

Line 2: His title is "respect tha name"
Line 4: KKK has white hoods
Line 6: His Rapperz inventory has stiches in it

BkBrawla 10-07-04 10:22 PM

Voted For: SubtleTee

This kids so subtle so I’ll break him in half
Wouldn’t be ‘plain’ sick if you threw up on ‘air crafts’

You got 1 win up against me u got no chance in hell
The only ‘gun’ wars u been in is ‘pump’ing gas at shell

You rappin like ja rule you belong in the kids choir
Even if you was tony hawk you couldn’t spitfire(a skating company)

this the easiest battle ima burn you the fastest
Thinks hes some sorta of icon(eye-con) cause he jacked someones glasses

Like Hersheys chocolate man your simple and plain
Ignite a flame on ur dick jus to see you coming with flames

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE "OK" VERSE HERE "OK" PUNCHES NOT REALLY HITTIN IT DAT WELL,,,,,,,,ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES,,,,,,,,NICE FLOW USE PERSONALS NEXT TIME



Have niggas ~left in pain~ my opponents ~wrecked and maimed~./
Because your funeral’s the only time folks gonna “respect ya name”/

I’m payed to ~slay and dismember,~ “Str8?” I’ll ~end her.~/
And Sub’s gonna “rip hood” like blades taken to KKK members./

Spittin to an audience as if ~we cared,~ kid’s shaking, ~he’s scared~/
Just check his inventory, Stiches? Jeez, this kid came prepared./

You’re lyrics just ~ain’t good~, my lines so strong they ~break wood~/
I wanted a battle, but you know a nikka gets hungry, so I “8 (ate) hood./


^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE U HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES GOOD FLOW

SUB-HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW MADE IT AN GOOD VERSE


STR8_HOOD-U HAD AN OK VERSE PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT DA FLOW WAS GOOD,,,,,,,BUT ELEVATE ON DEM PUNCHES,,,,,,,,,,USE PERSONALS NEXT TIME DATS HOW SUB GOT U IN DIS BATTLE HE USE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES



V-SUB CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND USIN PERSONALS

RETURN AN FAV SUB

Mistic-Rogue 10-07-04 11:17 PM

Voted For: str8_hood

vote goes to str8_hood, you subtle tee, stop using shit like '*-and all them things to show your punches, thats just saying that you think were all to dumb to relize were your punches arre ok so cut them out ok!!

there were no real punches here, str8_hood attempted a few, not bad but need improve ment, but str8_hood had some very nice flow so thats why he wins my vote, good job!

please return an honest vote on one of the battles below

SubtleTee 10-07-04 11:18 PM

^ You just proved your point.

"Stop using symbols like we're too dumb to recognize punches. I didn't see any punches."

Implicit 10-07-04 11:56 PM

ha ha. ok ok uppin 4 votes. nice verse subtle........

Implicit 10-09-04 09:07 PM

can we get some votes...............................

Technical 10-10-04 02:11 PM

This was feedback posted for SubtleTee
 
yo very weak battle, i think both mc's need to elevate(no hate)

Implicit 10-10-04 05:17 PM

ok .upppppppin for some votes...........................

Implicit 10-11-04 08:35 PM

ok can we get some votes?

Dirty Nigga 10-12-04 09:58 AM

Voted For: str8_hood

aight subtle ya had killer multies but ya punches lacked creativity, overral ya flow was decent an this should be a close battle...

str8 ya flow was sick, ya connected bars an dropped hard hittin punches, ya got my vote kid....

no hate just tellin it how i see it
return the fave
peace

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Implicit 10-12-04 09:48 PM

ok lets see some more votes.........................

Replay 10-12-04 09:50 PM

Voted For: str8_hood

damn this is one sided str8 took this
every: Str8
nothing except flow: tee

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

the_DukE 10-12-04 10:39 PM

Voted For: str8_hood

str8 hood spit some hard shit, no offense to the other guy, but you got smashed.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Replay 10-13-04 04:48 PM

yo str8 i hate this pussy ass bitch cat that get mad cause some one voted against them so they dq all the votes. and i don't like how now you don't get a second chance to vote right but o well we all no you kicked ass.

Dirty Nigga 10-13-04 05:14 PM

not enuff feed huh?
okay...........................................

str hoods opener an finisher had better punches n personals than his oppenent, his wordplay was more complex on a whole.....
structure was decent from both of yall.........
subtlee, the flaw in your verse was the fact your punches wernt creative enuff, they seemed effortless, but str hoods punches connected well an had more wit an humour...
that is the reazon i vote for str8 hood...

return the fave in my sig

p e a c e

shake-spear 10-13-04 05:21 PM

Voted For: SubtleTee

im goin wit subtletee he came wit some fire punnches and personals and i really like his flow on this one str8 ya verse was hot too but i think subtle came jus a lil bit harder in this one

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

*KiRô-æ-PhY§iX* 10-15-04 10:25 AM

Voted For: SubtleTee

This kids so subtle so I’ll break him in half
Wouldn’t be ‘plain’ sick if you threw up on ‘air crafts’
3/10 not really feeling it.....

You got 1 win up against me u got no chance in hell
The only ‘gun’ wars u been in is ‘pump’ing gas at shell
nice punch but gun and gas dont have much to do with each other......5/10

You rappin like ja rule you belong in the kids choir
Even if you was tony hawk you couldn’t spitfire(a skating company) spit fire and tony hawk yes both have to do with skate boarding but not with eah other.......
3/10

this the easiest battle ima burn you the fastest
Thinks hes some sorta of icon(eye-con) cause he jacked someones glasses
best bar from u by far.......7/ 10 i liked

Like Hersheys chocolate man your simple and plain
Ignite a flame on ur dick jus to see you coming with flames
nah forced not really hitting.....2/10

sabotage....20/50 [40%]



Have niggas ~left in pain~ my opponents ~wrecked and maimed~./
Because your funeral’s the only time folks gonna “respect ya name”/
nice multis and punch......8/10

I’m payed to ~slay and dismember,~ “Str8?” I’ll ~end her.~/
And Sub’s gonna “rip hood” like blades taken to KKK members./
same as first one.......but not as good....6/10

Spittin to an audience as if ~we cared,~ kid’s shaking, ~he’s scared~/
Just check his inventory, Stiches? Jeez, this kid came prepared./
not really feeling this one kinda forced......4/10

You’re lyrics just ~ain’t good~, my lines so strong they ~break wood~/
I wanted a battle, but you know a nikka gets hungry, so I “8 (ate) hood./
hell no horrible bar .....3/10 just i dunno.....it suxed


suble tee....21/50 [42%]



subtle tee came with multis to go along with his hitting punches hes had 2 good bars.....while str8 hood only had one..... i say all a round subtle tee took this battle not by much but he did.......

v/ subtle tee..... no hate plz return favor\/=\/

*KiRô-æ-PhY§iX* 10-15-04 10:26 AM

my bad 21/40.....he only had 4 bars but they were just harder nice battle both of yall

Implicit 10-17-04 05:09 PM

still uppin 4 votes.....lets close this battle........

Implicit 10-23-04 05:02 PM

can we get some votes?.............................

LIL'DREW 10-26-04 09:48 PM

Voted For: str8_hood

neither was very good...gave it to sabotage though...betta flow and structures...both had weak punches...

sabotage...u shouldn't have to explain your punches...
subtletee...weak...nuff said...


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:48 AM.