skano vs J-Will
 

Battle Rules:

12-14 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
your droping 1st

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-08-04 at 01:00 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

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skano has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 01:02 AM.

J-Will has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 01:06 AM.

this is not my verse
Leave your family in the triage, second guessin
graf artist, I'm good with sketchin weapons
Leave emancipations for lacerations
With bunks to gun a pump like...... I'm half Jamaican

J-Will

Nigga I ain't got respect for you please
You ain't sittin on dough, you fallin off like sesame seeds
Cause you can't bear pressure... if you don't wear vestes
Crime unit find you and.. I hope they got air freshners.

Im like lloyd banks im on "Fire"... u think otherwise then u'll get put in the trunk like spare "Tires"....i bit u ... pass out venom like a fucking spider....Skano more softer then some baby "Diapers".... i'll shoot atcha head like i was the "DC "Snipers".... .nigga you st8 "herb"... and I'll put ya face to the "curb" see u remind me of the wild coyote always chasin the "Bird" I never made pizza but i'll flip ur fucking head like "Bread" ...i aint a hair dresser nigga but i will put a clip in your "Forhead"... And the only time ur goin to be the best is after im..... "Dead"....

Word of Advice

Don't stop ur day job ..... cuz u garbage in "spitten"and half the shit u saying is probably "written" and not even yours ...
i leave dead in the streets ...next to the "Curb"
and.... i 'll shoot at you nigga like hunters shoot at
"birds,"....

watz good nigga u scare.




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i cant believe this nigga talk all that shit then chicken out
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stfu...your wack ass is droping 1st you dumb fuck.
drop your fucking verse then i will drop stop freeposting dumbass.

pz

I didnt know i wasnt able to see your verse, i just found
out sorry for the wait, enjoy your lose.

ur flows wack, if u want, i'll take that chrome gat
treat ya frames like yay & bakin soda....i make bones crack
you winnin it aint happening cuz u take old rhymes
this couldnt be a close call..battlin on the same phone line
thinks hes off the wire, your right so apparently this is so
since when didnt herbs light on fire with their cherry tips smoked
yea I’m coming half-assed, fa’real this text shit bores me
plus if I exposed both cheeks, j will get too horny
You're a boring opponent..you're not favored & such..
and J tried to come sharp, but ended with a paper cut
fuck it your done with.... grace done want you no more
might as well take a leave, and no i dont mean the medicine

Voted For: J-Will

vote for j will,
had flow and he had some aight punches,
skano had the structure
open and closer was j will cuz his closer rhymed
and thats some shit him trying t read yor vese

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iight good looking
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yea i need to work on my structer but thats it

wow you must be shitting me...oreo voted completly of rhyming and flow
this is one of the reasons why i dont like RV wow...

face the truth
dont hate ....
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.....just face it u lost this battle

lmao i didnt lose this battle kid...i fuckin ripped you a new ass hole
its just the newb voters who have no idea what wordplay means
nor do they know what a metaphore or creativity is.

pz

Voted For: J-Will

i vote for jwill cuz he took this battle the hole way his structer was alittle off but his wordplay was iight vocab was good punches was on point not jwill best of battles
skano ur was doin ur thing but u didnt write enough
next time write more
honest vote
return a favor

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Voted For: skano

Lol..

Jay:That shit was dumb wack, your like a generic Cassidy...your punches were weak as fuck, and you kept talking in your verse and splitting the shit up...shits gay...dont do that ever again. And then the structure...gay...go look at other battles to see what type of structure you should use.

skano: Ok, i liked the 'phone line' line, and the paper cut was witty...you had harder hitting punches, the verse was less boring and the structure was actually readable...so vote.

Skano

Voted For: skano

Vote: skano, both came wack, but he had some wittier things in his verse, so basically, he just takes it. i was close tho, both were wack.

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Voted For: skano

skano
good structure.. flow was on target.. no multis.. dope wordplay.. dope concepts.. most of ur punches connected.. no personals..

J-Will
wack structure.. like, all of ur lines were stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchness.. good multis.. decent wordplay.. bad concepts.. they werent original at all.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
J-Will had more multis.. neither had good personals.. skano had the better structure.. the better flow.. the better wordplay.. the better concepts, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. skano gets my vote..

VOTE - SKANO

Voted For: skano

i liked Skano's verse A LOT more, the other kids concepts were so old and played and just everything, i have no idea how he even competes with this, good job to the both of you but Skano CLEARLY took this i mean the other kids structure was just terrible you need to fix that and your punches were the same too, good job to the both but Skano took this due to punches and structural differences..

v/ Skano

This was feedback posted for J-Will
 

i think yall niggaz need to elevate cuz yall rappin is SHIT(no hate)
but yall do need to eleveate yall game

Voted For: skano

ha ha
punches-skano
pers-none
met-none
mul-none
stukta-skano
skano won his punches actuly land the other guy was 100%wack ha ha that guy got beat by a 100% newb ta ha he kicked ur ass
pz

Voted For: skano

skano owned jwill cause he ad better wordplay and punches in his verse.J's verse had a bizzare tructure and his wordplay was very basic with nothing complex to it.It made it even more boring to read when you added the .... and the "'s and all the elementar vocab in your verse.
skano,you came pretty hard even though you half assed(if its true).You pretty much won with your first bar wich was witty and original.J will,elevate with your punches and your vocab.
V/skano
return the fav.