Dopeman vs ••••Dice••••
 

Battle Rules:

3 - 5 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding


Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 10-05-04 at 07:46 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Wait to check in if you want its 30 min to check in and 15 to drop after that so, 45 total time max...

Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 07:16 AM.

••••Dice•••• has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 07:20 AM.

Fuk it, want to keep this fair just saw that you accepted so I'ma do the same, you musta not seen my earlier post, all good homie.

man, ya rhymes are comin up dumber than 'larry'..which proves i'm the man an you the mice..
the first round u beat me an that was luckier than rollin double 6 on the 'DICE'..*1*
ya 'nice' rhymes are gonna be proved to 'finish last'...
ya retard texts wouldnt be 'bright' even if u turned up the screen Contrast!..*2*
better grab ya gas mask cause i'm bout to set a 'gasoline dream' like 'outkast'..
an if the 'vast' majorety should vote for u then its obvious u kiss there ass!..*3*
bitch, this is like a dog track, an ya was lucky once, now u truely are ''trynna gamble''..
this aint no beef, cause i know your addicted to my 'Lines' like naomi campbell!!

explanations....

the larry line, cause mice an men an larry isdumb
outkast have a song called gasoline dreams..
people are always lucky when they win on dog tracks
an naomi campbell is a coke fiend

if ya dont understand any of our verses
then dont vote

p e a c e an dont sleep

They say stubbornness seeps only skin deep,
If this were true, why this peep want round 2 with me?
Your bars starve to death with no biting and no feeding,
I cut off his life support, he’s weak when he ain’t been feasting
Cause your rambling antics are anti-fantastic,
Flows dried up in desperate need of chapstic
See Dice be Serta-fied like the mattress,
Alas, you hold no hope to surpass my class,
So if I kick my flow free and I keep it locked off the top,
Howcome I’m white with a mic yet your cheddar-bob and I’m Poppa-Doc?


~ Damn, that was rushed to shit, quick fuk'n key, so all yall mutha fukas start to notice me!!!

hahah, same here dice
just nice n quick, no hate, just doin this for fun
s'all luv n rhymes
can we get some votes yall?
g'luck dice

Upin yall
this round 2 right here, once again a quick key from e n my oppenent, can we get some votes?
honest no bullshittin votes will be returned
p e a c e

Voted For: Dopeman

this goes to dope man,
his punches were way harder and the flow was decent,
he murdered dice with all this luck shit and dice didnt even mke a good come back,
the structures were both good, dope takes the closer and the opener cuZ DOPES OPENER ACTAULLY RHMED

This was feedback posted for Dopeman
 

They say stubbornness seeps only skin deep,
If this were true, why this peep want round 2 with me?
Your bars starve to death with no biting and no feeding,
I cut off his life support, he’s weak when he ain’t been feasting
Cause your rambling antics are anti-fantastic,
Flows dried up in desperate need of chapstic
See Dice be Serta-fied like the mattress,
Alas, you hold no hope to surpass my class,
So if I kick my flow free and I keep it locked off the top,
Howcome I’m white with a mic yet your cheddar-bob and I’m Poppa-Doc?

^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT U HAD WORDPLAYS AND PUNCHES GOOD SPITTIN QUICK KEY VERSE........PLUS GOOD FLOW AND GOOD STRUTURE KEEP IT UP MAYNE



SHOTTA-


man, ya rhymes are comin up dumber than 'larry'..which proves i'm the man an you the mice..
the first round u beat me an that was luckier than rollin double 6 on the 'DICE'..*1*
ya 'nice' rhymes are gonna be proved to 'finish last'...
ya retard texts wouldnt be 'bright' even if u turned up the screen Contrast!..*2*
better grab ya gas mask cause i'm bout to set a 'gasoline dream' like 'outkast'..
an if the 'vast' majorety should vote for u then its obvious u kiss there ass!..*3*
bitch, this is like a dog track, an ya was lucky once, now u truely are ''trynna gamble''..
this aint no beef, cause i know your addicted to my 'Lines' like naomi campbell

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DATS HOT GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW AND GOOD STRUTURE


OVERALL=DOPEMAN CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND FLOW I THINK HE GOING TO WIN DIS BATTLE

DIS JUST AN FEEDBACK PEACE

This was feedback posted for Dopeman
 

not bad juss checkn this out...........................

Aight thanx yall
it was just a quick key from us both, so dont be expectin no killer ass rhymes....
just playin around
but we still need votes yall
p e a c e

upin yall.........
dont sleep
round 2 an it needs votes
honest votes will be returned
p e a c e

Upin this here yall
dont sleep
honest votes will be returned
p e a c e

upin yall
dont sleep...........
we need us some votes an honest ones will be returned

Upin this battle yall, dont sleep, an honest votes WILL BE RETURNED

Voted For: Dopeman

chekin polls... nice drop from tha both of yall...

Removed

^^Dq That Vote That Was Supposed To Be FeedBack...

can we get some honest votes yall, they will be returned if yas leave a damn link

lol what was ut hinkin dia? haha, upppin yall......

Voted For: Dopeman

DopeMan
um shotta had weak stucture but he had nice punches...a few vocabulary not bad verse orgainize yer stucture adn flow dawg...then you'll be fuckin dope man...word...yuo won easly tho dice was also off on stucture but you were closer and dice flowed better but you still had better punches...

Dice:
you had an aight verse not good enough to win tho...you had flow..better flwo then shotta but yer sturucture was way off...man...trey fix that add some vocab in derr you would be dope dawg...make yer punches better to eleavate realy thatsall to say...

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Voted For: Dopeman

both were pretty wack, spits Dopeman's lines were too stretched and dice's didnt flow very well in this battle. But ima have to give this battle to Dopeman cuz he had punches that actually hit even if they were not very hot n didnt hit hard. Dice def won on multies but his spit didnt really flow or rhyme well to me.
holla at the kid

yo uppin yall, can we get some votes?
honest votes will be returned

sleeping is very bad...
''but i'm tired tho'' (j-kwon sorta intro, ya know?)
ha
i'm bored
yo upppin

can
we
get
some
votes

the fave will be returned

p e a c e

Voted For: Dopeman

that screen contrast line was pretty ill. u had sum pretty good wordplay. nice job

dice, summa ur shit didnt even rhyme, still good, but felll apart at sum points so my vote goes 2 dopeman

Voted For: Dopeman

props to both battlists but here's the verdict

flow:dopeman
vocab:dopeman
punches:dopeman
structure:dice
Hunger:dopeman
verdict:dice, this verse seemed either like a rush job, or your hunger for a win was on zero. Which even though you won last time, i don't respect, every battle should have you hungry, and this verse lacked true effort.
feeding and feasting does not rhyme sir.
mattress does not rhyme with my class
'tress does not rhyme with class.
You MUST at least rhyme, and you lost huge points for this. Huge points.

dopeman-i sensed a huge amount of hunger in this one, which i and many others respect a lot. I can tell you really went at it with him, which showed in the fact that you had a lot more punches.

this aint no beef, cause i know your addicted to my 'Lines' like naomi campbell!

that was a nice closer. But there is definate room for improvement, many of the punches lacked power, they were light jabs, but strong enough to score you the win in the end.