caliph vs BkBrawla
 

Battle Rules:

6- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

AIGHT QUICK BATTLE LETS DO DIS 15 MINUTES AFTA U ACCEPT

G-LUCK

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-05-04 at 09:33 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

caliph has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 09:04 PM.

BkBrawla has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 09:05 PM.

This rookie wanna push me damn he suicidal as fuck
Its over like 4 leaf clovers he survive me its luck

One zero on both sides its hopeless for you to keep it the same
If you threw up gasline on a bonfire you still couldnt spit flames

Ya elevations placement underground like dearly departed
And i ended ya rapverse career before it even started

...Spittin out raps soundin like malarky, invisible... gettin stop by my rap dimocracy, hipocracy alls ya spit, when my flows put ya out miraculosly/
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...Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times, ya raps be like dirty pipes, how ya spittin resinated ryhmes/
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...Poppin this newbs top like a shampagne cork, bendin and twistin An's more then bikes on torque, / ya never gone all the way, only cummin to a fork/
To the end of the week I live by the beat like you live check to check, and if you no move yo feet then I dont eat so we like neck to neck. (OutKast)..................

aight uppin fo votes holla~!!

come on peep'z dont sleep uppin fo votes

This was feedback posted for caliph
 

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errrrrrrrr w/e uppin fo votes peep'z and empire u could at least throw in an feedback

Voted For: BkBrawla

ok here it goes

Punchez/Perzonals-I belive that BkBrawla got this one...i mean Caliph you need some more...your lyricallly weak...you know....So Upp on that shit....

Enjoyment-BkBrawla's lines were better at the most....you need some uppin on this caliph....

Flow:Bk This is Where Caliph had it his lines weren't has long and carried out

Overall-Bk Gets my vote cuz his drop was more complex...

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Voted For: BkBrawla

aight both good flows i gotta say though
i was feelin this foo better

BkBrawla
Openin Verse good
Punchlinez need it where they need it to be
came hard, though u came a bit weak on a line
structure kinda slackin but passes

keep doin ya thing BkBrawla

Caliph
Gotta good Structure
Punchlines hmm i don't know they were fair
came hard at opponent
though i gotta say Bk B. won ya on your punchlinez

no hatin what so ever or notin aight caliph
both of yall keep doin ya thing

Aight Danks For Da Vote

Uppin Few More Votes Uppin

Voted For: BkBrawla

bk ur punches were alot harder and ur flow was sick. ur vocab was alright and the verses werent to short.
i think u got this one.

caliph if ur not a rookie then u need to step it up cuz i dont know how u can win a battle spittin like that.

so all in all i think this one goes to bk. and yo vote on my battle but honest votes only. i wanna get that thing closed.

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^lmao he had no flow at all i see you joined his fucking voting ring damn this is funny as fuck

why u talkin shit dawg.... not their fault they didn't vote for you

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppin

Voted For: caliph

punches-c
stukture-c
pers-none
best-c
caliph wins
pz

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Voted For: caliph

...Spittin out raps soundin like malarky, invisible... gettin stop by my rap dimocracy, hipocracy alls ya spit, when my flows put ya out miraculosly/
Didn't Rhyme^ No Punch. 0/10
...Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times, ya raps be like dirty pipes, how ya spittin resinated ryhmes/
Is It Just Me Or Did That Not Make Scense^ 2/10
...Poppin this newbs top like a shampagne cork, bendin and twistin An's more then bikes on torque, / ya never gone all the way, only cummin to a fork/
To the end of the week I live by the beat like you live check to check, and if you no move yo feet then I dont eat so we like neck to neck.
^The Flow Was Off Mad^ Not Reall A Great Punch 3/10

Ya Flow Was Off Structure Was Bad Too......No Punches And Half Didn't Make Scense......

This rookie wanna push me damn he suicidal as fuck
Its over like 4 leaf clovers he survive me its luck
Nice Punch^ I Heard That Before But Still A Good Punch..7/10
One zero on both sides its hopeless for you to keep it the same
If you threw up gasline on a bonfire you still couldnt spit flames
Lmao! Dope Bar. Nice Use Of Metas. 8.5/10
Ya elevations placement underground like dearly departed
And i ended ya rapverse career before it even started
Nice Closer Punch Hit Hard. 7.5/10

Cal, Ya Structure Was Betta, Flow Was Better, Punches Were Better.
BK Fix Ya Structure And Be More Creative Wit Ya Punches.
Overall Cal Took This Wit a Better Verse.

Voted For: caliph

i think caliph came a lil harder n had a betta flow. he also has sum better personals so im givin it to......
vote=caliph

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Voted For: caliph

umm this wasnt a very good battle. ok punches. ok battle. caliph had better punches, better flow, better structure.

bkbrawla u forced a lot of the rhymes. your punches werent very hard at all.

work on harder punches and u'll get better

vote-caliph

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Voted For: caliph

caliph: i'm guessing this is a old battle....
decent overall verse nothing special flow=smooth
and nice effectiveness..............DA DA DOO....

bk: decent aswell.....

flow was niiiice and some lines were effective
and some original aswell...but i still have to choose...

blah!

vote/Caliph close in my opinion:)

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ha d/r votes are removed lets get some real votes up in dis shit

Voted For: BkBrawla

caliph...



IP:

This rookie wanna push me damn he suicidal as fuck
Its over like 4 leaf clovers he survive me its luck
played.

One zero on both sides its hopeless for you to keep it the same
If you threw up gasline on a bonfire you still couldnt spit flames
old and played as well.

Ya elevations placement underground like dearly departed
And i ended ya rapverse career before it even started
ok.


BkBrawla...

...Spittin out raps soundin like malarky, invisible... gettin stop by my rap dimocracy, hipocracy alls ya spit, when my flows put ya out miraculosly/
no..dont like it
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...Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times, ya raps be like dirty pipes, how ya spittin resinated ryhmes/
ehh could of been better.
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...Poppin this newbs top like a shampagne cork, bendin and twistin An's more then bikes on torque, / ya never gone all the way, only cummin to a fork/
dont like it muc.
To the end of the week I live by the beat like you live check to check, and if you no move yo feet then I dont eat so we like neck to neck. (OutKast)..................
nah..

i see BkBrawla taking this battle with a more solid verse,
his concepts were better and as well as the setups which
made his punches land harder...both came played and new
to work on wording better and brawla get rid of the "......"
"//" ----" those make your verse less interesting to read.

V/ BkBrawla.

upppin for more votes holla~! leave links if u need honest votin

Voted For: caliph

cal wordplay and flow was a lil more there for me thats why i vote for him

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uppin for some mo votes holla~!

Voted For: BkBrawla

aight brawla got this..........
the structure could have been better, but other then that he got this hands down, better punches, better personals, an decent wordplay....

aliph, ya flow lacked crfeativity an imagination, it was too plain n simple..........

return the fave yall
peace

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Voted For: caliph

caliph takes this one...

better wordplay, STRUCTURE, punches and personals...
an all around better verse... no hate to BK but u gotta get better with that structure hommie cause thats what puts it togeather and makes it flow.....

no hate brotha.

VOTE- Caliph

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Voted For: BkBrawla

This rookie wanna push me damn he suicidal as fuck
Its over like 4 leaf clovers he survive me its luck
^ Elementry rhyme, weak punch with the clover

One zero on both sides its hopeless for you to keep it the same
If you threw up gasline on a bonfire you still couldnt spit flames
^ Weak, played concept

Ya elevations placement underground like dearly departed
And i ended ya rapverse career before it even started
^ Again, no real punch weak

2/10


...Spittin out raps soundin like malarky, invisible... gettin stop by my rap dimocracy, hipocracy alls ya spit, when my flows put ya out miraculosly/
^ Terribly stretched, alright punch

...Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times, ya raps be like dirty pipes, how ya spittin resinated ryhmes/
^ The rejected punch was aight

Poppin this newbs top like a shampagne cork, bendin and twistin An's more then bikes on torque, / ya never gone all the way, only cummin to a fork/
^ Hard to understand

To the end of the week I live by the beat like you live check to check, and if you no move yo feet then I dont eat so we like neck to neck.
^ Aight closer


Basically, caliph's rhymes were weak and he didn't have any punches. BKBrawla had some strong punches even though some of them were whack.

Vote- BK

Voted For: BkBrawla

bawla u gay bitch i will murder yo azz u bastard u r whacked u lost diz battle bitch

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flow:C cali had more structure and smoothness in this battle
personals:C cali had a few that help him stand out ove bk
metas: BK had the only one good meta in the battle "Ya gettin rejected like kids to small for rides, commin up short at designated times"
punches:C all punches were played or old but cali played with them more
multis:BK BK played on the multis a lil while cali was simple wit it

win: Cali he protrayed a lil more in this battle even though Bk couldve took it as well If his flow was a lil betta put together