wish vs BIGPAPPA76
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-07-04 at 04:02 AM

Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in.

BIGPAPPA76 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 04:03 PM.

wish has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 04:04 PM.

aight look...

Nigga by the time im done wit you, ya gonna "wish" u was never born
this faggot spits raps like Mike Jackson spits kiddy porn
just anotha bitch reppin the council, you know they take herbs
nigga best step tha fuck back when Pappas spittin these action verbs
cause imma bout to take yo' bitch ass back to school
fuck, this retard be in special ed, nigga whipe up that drool
this bitch is so wack his ass aint worth a fuckin dime sack, nigga step back fo' pappa put you on yo' back, i aint here to spit kiddy rhymes cause skillz you lack...

aight yall imma bout to rip this bitch with a rhyme killin verse
his faggot ass is about to take a one way trip in lyrical herse
bitch yo own momma wont reckonize you when im done
but dont worry... her and i are gonna have tons-o-fun
how do you want yo' casket closed or open?
soon tha devils dick is what you gonna be chokin
fuckin faggot only "wish" he was half as good as my crew
50th brigade lives on with out you so FUCK YOU
you aint shit lil nigga so dont let anything go to your head
cause when i spit these lyrics you be left face down and dead

are you "wishin" for death yet? cause its commin soon
nigga imma bout to bring you to your fuckin doom
haha, dont mean to rip you so fuckin hard
just remember its you who called me out you fuckin retard
You asked for this battle son, and yo' "wish" is my command
nigga imma murda yo' ass like a rag head in tha sand, Pappa brings this back by popular demand, 50th brigade packs AKs in they right hand..............
man i bring these linguistics all simplistic to ya brain
nigga imma leave yo ass so fucked up youll be deemed insane
get tha straght jacket for this lil rookie faggot
throw his ass in tha cell and let big bubba straight up taggit
cause we all know you just a prison bitch..no doubt
nigga always rememba that it was BIGPAPPA76 who KNOCKED YOU THA FUCK OUT!!

YOU-SAY-NOTHIN; Yor 17 wins: You OBVIOUSLY-BIT
IF THIS is yo' HOBBY-THEN-QUIT, YOU COPY-n-SPIT SLOPPY AS SHIT!/
You LICK da' FLOPPIEST-DICKS and COPY-DA'-PICS TO FLOPPY-DISKS/
You're such a biter that after you LOSE you'll prolly CHOOSE to COPY-THIS
FROZEN-FLAMES EXPOSES-DAMES-n-SLAYS CHOSEN-LAMES wit' BROKEN-CHAINS
We CHOKE-and-MAIM, DEMOTE-YA'-NAME and DRAIN blood thru VEINS-OF-OPEN-BRAINS/
Theres NO-HOPE-TO-GAIN cause "big pappa" can't COMPETE OR-COPE-WIT'-PAIN
We're SO-INSANE that da tracks we've twisted are enough to CHOKE-A-TRAIN/
DON'T COMPLAIN because you're CONFUSED and can't CHOOSE FROM 2-GENDERS
How is your crew called 50th Brigade and only CONTAINS 2-MEMBERS?/
Now You Aint EARN-A-GLANCE-AT-MY-LYRICAL-CUTS, I Don't Mean Ta BURN-YA-CHANCES-BUT-BEG-FA-MIRACLES-FUCK ,incinerate ya remains then TURN-YA-ASHES-TA-LITERAL-DUST!/
I got RASH-SPITS,MY-SHITS-COLD So Im Breakin ya HABITS-TIL-YA-GET-OLD,and who gives a fuck about big pappaI-HAD-THIS-FROM-THE-GET-GO./ Like "elementary school teachers" wish MEDIATIN-THE-LESSONS/I guess it's safe to say you're 'Clueless' cause even your ABRIEVIATION'S-A-QUESTION-My 'WRITTIN'S-KILLIN' like a HOM-I-CIDE-NOTE.and i'm always "Blowin up the Vocals" like someone put a BOMB-IN-MY-THROAT-u FUCKED-N-PAWNED get stabbed wit TUSKS-AND-PRONGS cuz im "puttin an end to big pappa" like the DUSK-OR-DAWN!/

ayo uppin this shit, yall know i KOd this clown... uppin................

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

alright check it. i think that big had harder punches and better vocab. wish u had some good flow but im goin with big on this one.
winner big pappa

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dickrider uppin yo i think they the same person

lol the same person? when you lose this shit you just gonna be bitchin like a mother fucker aint ya? goddamn, one vote against you and u scream DR... lol what a fag... i KOd ya ass.

uppin this shit..............................................

aight i fuckin hate sleepers and i ripped this faggot ass bitch apart! so lets see some fuckin votes in this shit!

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

big poppa took dis even doe wish made a good comeback verse, but pappa took dis one because of his harder punches and better structure dats it

uppin this shit.... dont sleep on me people....................

Voted For: wish

this was actually a good battle....both of the flows were on point with some good lines....

BP-you had some shit goin in the beginnin....then fell off a lil bit....came back....then fell off i think until.................."cause we all know you just a prison bitch..no doubt
nigga always rememba that it was BIGPAPPA76 who KNOCKED YOU THA FUCK OUT!!".... i thought that was a hard ass endin....maybe a lil played but you put it quite well....

Wish-basically you were killin him the whole verse....i still think it was FAIRLY close though....but in the end you mos def came out the winner in this to me..........
......."YOU-SAY-NOTHIN; Yor 17 wins: You OBVIOUSLY-BIT
IF THIS is yo' HOBBY-THEN-QUIT, YOU COPY-n-SPIT SLOPPY AS SHIT!/
You LICK da' FLOPPIEST-DICKS and COPY-DA'-PICS TO FLOPPY-DISKS/
You're such a biter that after you LOSE you'll prolly CHOOSE to COPY-THIS"........
......."DON'T COMPLAIN because you're CONFUSED and can't CHOOSE FROM 2-GENDERS
How is your crew called 50th Brigade and only CONTAINS 2-MEMBERS?/"........
.........two hot ass parts....but this was the killer for me.......
........"My 'WRITTIN'S-KILLIN' like a HOM-I-CIDE-NOTE.and i'm always "Blowin up the Vocals" like someone put a BOMB-IN-MY-THROAT-u FUCKED-N-PAWNED get stabbed wit TUSKS-AND-PRONGS cuz im "puttin an end to big pappa" like the DUSK-OR-DAWN!/"....straight verbal murder....anyway good battle and much love to you both.....1

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

man i dont like these long as battles, try to keep it to under 15!! o well BIGPAPPA76 wins this, much better punches!!!
They hit hard and left bruises!!
Flow: deffinatly BIGPAPPA76,it was well structured and the flow was consistanly good all throughout!! well done

vote toBIGPAPPA76

please return the favour and vote on one of the battles below thx!

ps....drop a vote on one of the battles please, i am dying to get them closed!!

This was feedback posted for wish
 

unreal multi's wish youre the new master of multi's on this iste now.

lol i cant beleive he got a vote.... unreal...... im in shock i really fuckin am.... any way uppin..................

This was feedback posted for wish
 

nice verse son im likin the multis ya verse had a good flow too

Voted For: wish



Flow - wish, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - wish, some were played by both cats, but i felt that wish had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder

Personals - pappa, had alot more, and were alot better, wish's were alright and didn't form together to well.. suggestion wish you shouldn't have to explain your personals

Multies - Obviously wish, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies.

Vocab - both

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses


wish win

Voted For: wish

Flow - wish

Punches - both

Personals - pappa had alot more, and were alot better,

Multies - Obviously wish won this (he bad)

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses =wish

wayne back is Wishes other name on RV, they have the same IP #.... CAN U SAY BANNED! BANNED BANNED!!!!

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

wow
bigpappa
u really elevated since i battled you,ur structure is nice,ur flow is goosd,u had acouple personals,wordplay was also there,i was feeling the opener and closer
good job man

wish
ur structure was ASS,ur flow was okay,aswell were ur punches,u had no personals as i can see sorry,u did had great word play tho,but that structure was crap and with that is why u lost....

v/bigpappa