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Daz vs shadow
Battle Rules:
10 lines. Now more or less. lets make this shit quick. No biting recycling. Crew Votes allowed chuz we in the same crew. Post in 15 mins? Check In. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-09-04 at 08:16 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Daz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 08:17 PM.
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I dont have time for this.
Heres my ten Key'd Shadow merk me? i give him the cold shoulder.. chuz he was slept on, snored and rolled over.. no one knows u,kid u suck..now so what clown.. and even ur name shows that u follow me to sundown.. Fag ass herb. my reasons are all put.. lay mines around ur bed, so u cant start off on the wrong foot.. everyone knows that im better sir.. and i'd call u has been..but bitch u never were.. Im full of oxy morons like Heated winter.. I got in A.I chuz im Dope.. u got in chuz we needed members.. Key'd |
shadow has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 08:54 PM.
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admit your wack or lose the battle witch will come faster??
becuz DAZ if you tired of losing..your heading for a dazaster.. been here a year yet ur not a vet..you just wack-son... cant touch me! stick 2 ur day job touch lil boys like jackson... that rhyme was played^yet ur wack enough to be defeated.. strobe even thinks ur wack thats why ur verse will be deleted... im sick of going easy on you im gonna have to spit witty.. cuz the only thing u spit is breast milk from ya moms titty... |
Voted For: shadow
shadow got this.... better punches, an mad flow to the brain cells, pretty decent drop... ya may have lacked a lil creativty in the opener, but that was ya only flaw... daz, ya verse was aight, punches never really connected an ya finisher was kinda weak.... on the whole the battle was pretty close, if it wasnt for dazs poor finisher, he may have had this battle... but on punches an flow shadow got this... return the fave in my sig p e a c e |
Voted For: Daz
wow...can you say one sided? daz completly merked shadow. Daz... Shadow merk me? i give him the cold shoulder.. chuz he was slept on, snored and rolled over.. ha! not hard hitting though no one knows u,kid u suck..now so what clown.. and even ur name shows that u follow me to sundown.. ok...could of had better wording. Fag ass herb. my reasons are all put.. lay mines around ur bed, so u cant start off on the wrong foot.. heh...not feelin it much..i get it though everyone knows that im better sir.. and i'd call u has been..but bitch u never were.. funny...ok i guess Im full of oxy morons like Heated winter.. I got in A.I chuz im Dope.. u got in chuz we needed members. decent close Shadow... admit your wack or lose the battle witch will come faster?? becuz DAZ if you tired of losing..your heading for a dazaster.. played opener...blah been here a year yet ur not a vet..you just wack-son... cant touch me! stick 2 ur day job touch lil boys like jackson... wack! that rhyme was played^yet ur wack enough to be defeated.. strobe even thinks ur wack thats why ur verse will be deleted... you use wack to much...this line sucked too im sick of going easy on you im gonna have to spit witty.. cuz the only thing u spit is breast milk from ya moms titty... the fuck? nope. umm shadow came horrible and speakin of wack you used it to many times in your verse which made me lose interest in readin it. You had no good lines just a bunch of filler or weak/played lines. Daz won with a better overall verse less played lines and harder hitting punches. V/ Daz |
hahahaha yea ^^ madd dickriding uppin
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Voted For: shadow
Breakdown Shadow merk me? i give him the cold shoulder.. chuz he was slept on, snored and rolled over.. what?....weak opener no one knows u,kid u suck..now so what clown.. and even ur name shows that u follow me to sundown.. good meta but...but no punch Fag ass herb. my reasons are all put.. lay mines around ur bed, so u cant start off on the wrong foot.. Seriously stretched...no punch everyone knows that im better sir.. and i'd call u has been..but bitch u never were.. wow u don't get worse than that Im full of oxy morons like Heated winter.. I got in A.I chuz im Dope.. u got in chuz we needed members.. Opener was nice...2nd line killed it...weak personal Breakdown: admit your wack or lose the battle witch will come faster?? becuz DAZ if you tired of losing..your heading for a dazaster.. lol...nice play off his name..first decent line I seen been here a year yet ur not a vet..you just wack-son... cant touch me! stick 2 ur day job touch lil boys like jackson... NO!!!!jackson lines seriously played that rhyme was played^yet ur wack enough to be defeated.. strobe even thinks ur wack thats why ur verse will be deleted... NO!!!!!again...where's punch? im sick of going easy on you im gonna have to spit witty.. cuz the only thing u spit is breast milk from ya moms titty... weak...an rhyming witty & titty?.....blah Flow: Shadow Structure: Shadow Punches: shadow Personal: Shadow(only decent line in battle) Metas: Daz(oxy moron..nice) Vote: Shadow |
U sway. And all of ur votes are D/R. Stop swaying and getting ur gay friends
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lmao daz murdered here..
the closer finished him off.. then the opener was cool, and the land mines one.. daz got this.. some one poll my vote, this an alias cuz i aint have my other names no more, i have way then more posts to vote umm.. all together around 3,000 so poll my vote.. Daz got this, more creative.. Shadow came blah, not enough for the win. |
Going for 20!!!
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9 more niggas.. reconize!!!!!!
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Voted For: Daz
ok shadow good start then your punches slacked and really made your verse wack here structure and flow was good vocab decent a 4/10 daz good opener here good sundown personal lol at the ender haha that was fucking dope punches couldve been better but were good structure and flow off vocab good 6/10 basically i always say this punches and disses win battles and daz won in those therfore he gets my vote return honest votes |
Voted For: Daz
shadow structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but most of it was played and/or wack.. none of ur punches connected.. that dazaster line is played, as is jackoson, as is mom jokes, and that one about deleting veres is just wack.. attempted personal, but came out wack and played.. Daz structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty dope.. ive seen some of the concepts before, but some were good.. most of ur punches connected.. the only one i didnt really like was the last one.. u attempted a personal in ur last bar, but i didnt like it that much.. Overall both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. both attempted one personal.. neither had multis.. Daz had better wordplay as well as more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Daz gets my vote.. VOTE - DAZ |
This was feedback posted for shadow
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573 |
Voted For: Daz
Shadow: I expected u to come better than this, the opener was aight, it involved an ok personal in it but most of ya verse seem played such as the jackson line and the titty line, the strobe line was ok, structure was on point, flow was good but punches weren't hitting hard, not much else to say is that it could have been better, 4/10 Daz: i was feeling ya verse, structure was good except for the 2 stretched lines, flow was on more or less on point, liked the sundown and heated winter line, good meta's such as the wrong foot, good personals, punches was hitting good, all in all it was good, 8/10 vote - Daz return the honest votes, battles are in my sig, no hate |
Voted For: Daz
Daz: Shadow merk me? i give him the cold shoulder.. chuz he was slept on, snored and rolled over.. Nice opener, first line played well into the second one, which was damn clever, 4/5 no one knows u,kid u suck..now so what clown.. and even ur name shows that u follow me to sundown.. Nice play off his name, punch was aight nuthin' special 3/5 Fag ass herb. my reasons are all put.. lay mines around ur bed, so u cant start off on the wrong foot.. Nice meta here, punch didn't really come but other than that it was good, 3/5 everyone knows that im better sir.. and i'd call u has been..but bitch u never were.. A little self-glorifying, but you made up for it with the punch, 3.5/5 Im full of oxy morons like Heated winter.. I got in A.I chuz im Dope.. u got in chuz we needed members.. Nice personal here, but the "heated winter" could've been replaced with something better...say, "repenting sinner"? oh well, 3/5 Total: 16.5/25 shadow: admit your wack or lose the battle witch will come faster?? becuz DAZ if you tired of losing..your heading for a dazaster.. Nice opener, good play off his name, ok punch, 3.5/5 been here a year yet ur not a vet..you just wack-son... cant touch me! stick 2 ur day job touch lil boys like jackson... Ok multi in the first line, but Jackson lines are played, 2/5 that rhyme was played^yet ur wack enough to be defeated.. strobe even thinks ur wack thats why ur verse will be deleted... Punch didn't hit hard, even callin' yourself wack, 1.5/5 im sick of going easy on you im gonna have to spit witty.. cuz the only thing u spit is breast milk from ya moms titty... Punch wasn't hard, but it was ok, 2.5/5 Last 2 lines are missing so you'll get a 0/5 Total: 9.5/25 Winner: Daz with harder punches, better wordplay, and 10 lines. No hate shadow, it just looks like you didn't try at all in this battle. Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only... |
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