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VALOR vs Mistic-Rogue
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no bulll shit!! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-08-04 at 11:35 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
yo please accept, i dont like it when people drop there nutz!!!! as soon as i see you have accepted i will spit and eliminate you!
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VALOR has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 11:45 PM.
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shot lets go!!!
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Mistic-Rogue has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 11:55 PM.
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QUIK 8 LINES
This newb has a huge ego of a fuckin retard So im gonna have to merkem pretty fast like his avatar You aint hard,im gonna make you sick like a can of sarz Your innitials says it all....kid your a fuckin MR Got ya feeling real big...but ya just another herb kid You want proof that ur a newb,you have smilies in ya sig And in this battle i feel bad cus your gettin worked Then you can tell your friend i battled VALOR and i got merked |
aight check it out...
yo yo... Im *Freestyling* this verse, waiting to see what you *prepared*// Ill beat you into *shape* Like and *MC squared* (E=mc2) This bitch is pretty confident, and doesnt reckon he'll choke// Well lets see how he goes, with a tight rope around his throat// Hasnt accepted this battle, hes looking pretty hesitant// This guys raps are *Re-occuring disastors*, like every time *Bush makes Presidant*// VALOR'S thinks hes all tough, spitting dumb ass rymes// 14-6 from battling newbs!! Try elevated front lines// yo... |
good batle, uppin for some votes!!!
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uppin number 1
why the fuck u chenge ur avatar u pussy ............ |
This was feedback posted for Mistic-Rogue
valor i think mistic-rogue rilly took it to yah i think valor had weaker punches but a better struct and mistics punches hit harder but werent great
think you guys could vote on my battle wit cyriuzcyr need some honest votes |
Voted For: VALOR
Vote - Valor Reason: NO NO NO @ Rogue's verse...drop the **** and the ///...you insult the readers intelligence when you try to point out the obvious...you had old metaphors and nothing that stood out much at all to me....Valor at least tried to carry in with decent hits here and there and a better structure and PUNCHES that were up to date...which is why he gets my vote... |
uppin number 2
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
I'm voting for mistic-rogue........ Valor came really weak...... This newb has a huge ego of a fuckin retard So im gonna have to merkem pretty fast like his avatar ^^^^dry and played opener.... You aint hard,im gonna make you sick like a can of sarz Your innitials says it all....kid your a fuckin MR ^^^^aight punch Got ya feeling real big...but ya just another herb kid You want proof that ur a newb,you have smilies in ya sig ^^^^eh.......not feeling this one And in this battle i feel bad cus your gettin worked Then you can tell your friend i battled VALOR and i got merked ^^^aight closer ^^^^.....blah! Mistic had a harder hitting verse...... Im *Freestyling* this verse, waiting to see what you *prepared*// Ill beat you into *shape* Like and *MC squared* (E=mc2) ^^^^nice opener This bitch is pretty confident, and doesnt reckon he'll choke// Well lets see how he goes, with a tight rope around his throat// ^^^^aight....... Hasnt accepted this battle, hes looking pretty hesitant// This guys raps are *Re-occuring disastors*, like every time *Bush makes Presidant*// ^^^LAMO! VALOR'S thinks hes all tough, spitting dumb ass rymes// 14-6 from battling newbs!! Try elevated front lines// ^^^^ehhhh.... Mistic had harder hitting punches, and I wasn't feeling his verse |
*editing the last sentence*
mistic's punch hits harder, while Valor had some weak punches, his structure was better, but mistic's had nice metas, and etc |
herb^^^^^^^^
uppin number 3 ..................... |
upiinn!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: VALOR
Mistic-Rogue... Im *Freestyling* this verse, waiting to see what you *prepared*// Ill beat you into *shape* Like and *MC squared* (E=mc2) played...dont like it This bitch is pretty confident, and doesnt reckon he'll choke// Well lets see how he goes, with a tight rope around his throat// nope... Hasnt accepted this battle, hes looking pretty hesitant// This guys raps are *Re-occuring disastors*, like every time *Bush makes Presidant*// Nope. VALOR'S thinks hes all tough, spitting dumb ass rymes// 14-6 from battling newbs!! Try elevated front lines// Nah... VALOR... This newb has a huge ego of a fuckin retard So im gonna have to merkem pretty fast like his avatar nah... You aint hard,im gonna make you sick like a can of sarz Your innitials says it all....kid your a fuckin MR played. Got ya feeling real big...but ya just another herb kid You want proof that ur a newb,you have smilies in ya sig ehh.. And in this battle i feel bad cus your gettin worked Then you can tell your friend i battled VALOR and i got merked ok. dont like Rogues verse he came pretty played and with old concepts...Valor came more consistent and harder punch wise...Rogue get rid of thos brackets makes your verse look bad and the starts too. V/ VALOR |
Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
i gott go with mistic on this one tight battle but Hasnt accepted this battle, hes looking pretty hesitant// This guys raps are *Re-occuring disastors*, like every time *Bush makes Presidant*// that was the best punch in this battle soild N good N effective which to me took this win, plus he had good flow and was preety creative as-well valor not a bad verse but ya punches lack a few decent personals decent flow but u need better punches and get a little more creative u was at a basic level to me no hate or disrespect just what i think nice battle fella's.... |
Herb Uppin Number 4
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Voted For: VALOR
This newb has a huge ego of a fuckin retard So im gonna have to merkem pretty fast like his avatar You aint hard,im gonna make you sick like a can of sarz Your innitials says it all....kid your a fuckin MR ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA PERSONALS AND PUNCHES NCIE MAYNE Got ya feeling real big...but ya just another herb kid You want proof that ur a newb,you have smilies in ya sig And in this battle i feel bad cus your gettin worked Then you can tell your friend i battled VALOR and i got merked ^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCHES DECENT ONES NICE FLOW AND GOOD WORD-CHOOSIN Im *Freestyling* this verse, waiting to see what you *prepared*// Ill beat you into *shape* Like and *MC squared* (E=mc2) ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH This bitch is pretty confident, and doesnt reckon he'll choke// Well lets see how he goes, with a tight rope around his throat// ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD FLOW BUT NOT KNOCKIN VALOR OFF GOOD PUNCH THOUGH Hasnt accepted this battle, hes looking pretty hesitant// This guys raps are *Re-occuring disastors*, like every time *Bush makes Presidant*// VALOR'S thinks hes all tough, spitting dumb ass rymes// 14-6 from battling newbs!! Try elevated front lines// ^^^^^^^^^^ OK DAT WAS AN PERSONAL AND A PUNCH NICE CLOSA GOOD FLOW IAM I HAVE TO GIVE DIS TO VALOR IN MY OPINIION HE CAME HARD WIT DEM PUNCHES AND PERSONALS MISTIC- U HAD FLOW AND GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS BUT DA PUNCHES JUST WASN'T HITITN HARD KEEP IT UP THOUGH ~PEACE~ |
O and return an fav valor (honest vote)
~peace~ |
Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
Mystic Mystic Mystic....there really is no need for an explanation....but to make it a valid vote here we go....Valor you had a good endin and that was it....there wasnt anything else that i was feelin....i have mos def seen 100 times better from you....Mystic great openin,middle, and closin line........"Im *Freestyling* this verse, waiting to see what you *prepared*// Ill beat you into *shape* Like and *MC squared* (E=mc2) This bitch is pretty confident, and doesnt reckon he'll choke// Well lets see how he goes, with a tight rope around his throat// Hasnt accepted this battle, hes looking pretty hesitant// This guys raps are *Re-occuring disastors*, like every time *Bush makes Presidant*// VALOR'S thinks hes all tough, spitting dumb ass rymes// 14-6 from battling newbs!! Try elevated front lines//"....there was nothin dude could do to that.....again, no hatin just honest fb....1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
ok mistic flow and structure was choppy as fuck here punches and disses couldve been much better but were decent and vocab good basically a ok verse a 5/10 valor wack punches and disses aint connect at all structure flow and vocab good but your punches are madd weak and you should use multis since they dont work smoothly toghther as they should your weak punches made you lose3/10 basically yall both need to use better personals and work onpunches mystic came harder in that department and got my vote return honest votes both of you |
upiinn!!!! for!! votes!!!
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uppin number 5....
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
iight sorry fam but this is what happend Punches/Personals-Yo valor straight up got the Personals...he dissed on you more MR....you didn't reallly diss him you just talked the talk...But every one needz to elavate so... Flow-Overall it was a tie here...both structures were hot on it....good job fam... Enjoyment-i admitt i enjoyed MR's more....its what won the battle right here...if you woulda won this Valor...straight up... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
THOSE WEARNT INADIQUIT VOTES YOU PUSSY!!!!
unnpin for votes again, THX TO VALOR! |
^^^^^hahahaha...................
i dunno whats wrong wit it either..... free uppin for ya |
oi man VALOR!! can take losing??? why did you diquaify them votes?? they were fine, and what the fuck is a herb!!
UPIING FOR SOME VOTES! |
Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
oh shnap to be real mistic had a better flow check it he kept it all together and stayed on just dissin you plus he had some good punches and shit and he had some good word play a neat structure word up mistic got my vote right on here |
thx, uppin!!!!!!!!!
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uppin for some votes, lets get this battle closed, honest votes will be returned!
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
wasn't really feeling either verse... both were pretty basic... structure wasn't too good on either one... Valor, i know you do way better shyt than this... disappointed in ya man... no real metas thrown... no multies... no real punches thrown from either side... the only line that really stood out (and even this one was suspect and stretched a little) and won this battle was this one: Hasnt accepted this battle, hes looking pretty hesitant// This guys raps are *Re-occuring disastors*, like every time *Bush makes Presidant*// sorry Valor, man... but Mistic won with that bullshyt line just off the strength that it was original and it was thebest line in the whole battle no hate...return the favor |
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