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Qidd MinX 10-07-04 01:35 PM

Qidd MinX vs Scenario
 
Battle Rules:

10-16 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-08-04 at 01:35 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 10-07-04 01:37 PM

Scenario has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 01:37 PM.

Scenario 10-07-04 01:38 PM

ATTENTION VOTERS: the battle is 12 lines only, explain ya votes peeps

System 10-07-04 01:40 PM

Qidd MinX has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 01:40 PM.

Scenario 10-07-04 01:46 PM

aiming direct~my punches red ya like flower designs on dinner plates
beating me~blind kids have better chances of crossing interstates

u a newb so everyone knows that there's no doubt that i'm crushing ya
strike a match to ya dead body u'll look similar to the trees with usher *

kid's talent don't exist like doctor's delivering babies for he-she's
ya lost cause my punches and metas"ll red ya eye like ya glasses were 3d **

i know ya type, u try to act hard but nigga if u really want then it's ok kid
take me, lol~i'm getting away with this murder~leaving evidence like oj did ***

look at that~it's ashame when the site system starts to predict ya record
ya rocking a white-tee but i'm reding ya sternum like ya shirt was checkered

u accepted this~ya stuck in my grasp like tapes in vcr's trying to fast forward
i got cruel intentions so i'm planning to outline ya body like nba backboards



*usher's burn video the trees were on fire
**3d glasses have one red lense
***oj left the glove at the murder scene

Qidd MinX 10-07-04 01:54 PM

the chance of you winning is impossile you scary hoe/
cuz to me your not living like sinning with chronical hows that for a scenario/
im not the one to mess with next youll get wrecked with the techs/text
its like your goal is playin hockey the way you gettin checked on the net/
ill put your rhymes to silence as i roll with the violence/
ill have you gone without a blink like i just stole your eyelids/
yo you aint chillin with thugs your an honor roll student in school/
how are you hard when Micro. paint is the only time u usin a tool/
oh and fuck your vest cuz i send steel in your mug/
the only time you get claps for your raps is someone is killin a bug/

finisher
i grab and slash at your verbs the way i blast and ash all you herbs/
im only here to give you an El like masucline spanish words/

Scenario 10-07-04 02:01 PM

uppin for this shit even though he recycled his verse from the battled i was cheatingly d'qd out and the rules stated no recycling but i guess we uppin

Qidd MinX 10-07-04 02:11 PM

i didnt mean to recycle i mean he said that he was cheated and wanted to battle again i already had my verse posted and i was rushed i could have easily thought of something else with a whole hour of time im just tryin to make things fair

Qidd MinX 10-07-04 03:38 PM

c'mon why wont people vote on battles
UPPIN 4 VOTES PLEASE

Kawn Flixx 10-07-04 04:08 PM

Voted For: Qidd MinX



ok I hope this isn't considered
inaquedite feedback...but damn i can't
write an essay for a vote but I DID read both verses



structure:Senario-6.7-QM-5-6
wordplay:Senario-9.3-QM-8.7(both good)
punch's impact:Senario-6.5-QM-7.2
flow:Senario-9,9 (nice) QM-7.1
overall enjoyed verse-Senario-8.5-QM-7.0

winner senario

pc

~explained~

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Kawn Flixx 10-07-04 04:12 PM

oops fucked up

i meant to make it a vote for senario oviusley

do't worry it'll be changed

Scenario 10-08-04 01:54 PM

uppin for more votes, honest votes will be return

Soul Sickness 10-08-04 02:03 PM

Voted For: Qidd MinX

good battle here the break down,........

punches Qidd
opener scenario
closer Qidd
personals Qidd
multis scenario
wordplay Qidd
structure scenario
flow Qidd

this was a good battle....no hate but i think Qidd barely took this 1 but that was def a good battle....no hat return the favors on the links in the sig.......

Compose 10-08-04 05:53 PM

Voted For: Scenario

flow-scenario, much more together qidds was off here and there in most lines stretched

punches/personals-scenario, lot harder punches here, qidds i saw like 2 punches that were hard hitting and made sense, but the rest were kinda eh, scenarios basicaly every punch hit hard and was understandable

basically the rest doesnt really apply to here, scenario had the more creative punches in my opinion for creativity, both did good no hate but scenario got this harder hitting punches

good luck peace

Mistic-Rogue 10-08-04 10:20 PM

Voted For: Scenario

Scenario wins this, aiming direct~my punches red ya like flower designs on dinner plates
beating me~blind kids have better chances of crossing interstates^^^^^ nice intro, most of your punches Scenario
were good and had some nice wordplay, because of your good intro it was good write from the begining,

flow was good to, it was consistant and well structured,

please return an honest vote on one of the battles below

Red Stroke 10-09-04 05:14 AM

Voted For: Scenario

aiight i gotta give this one up to Scenario he had better punches and he had some aiight vocab

Scenario
u accepted this~ya stuck in my grasp like tapes in vcr's trying to fast forward
i got cruel intentions so i'm planning to outline ya body like nba backboards


aiming direct~my punches red ya like flower designs on dinner plates
beating me~blind kids have better chances of crossing interstates

^^^^ya hardest lines



Qidd
yo you aint chillin with thugs your an honor roll student in school/
how are you hard when Micro. paint is the only time u usin a tool/

^^^that was tha only good line you had cuzzo
so overall this goes to Scenario for better structure ,flow,punches,vocab

Scenario 10-09-04 05:16 AM

uppin for this peeps, let's get some votes

BIGPAPPA76 10-09-04 10:50 AM

Voted For: Scenario

aight this was an ok battle, not too bad...

Scenario takes this one with better punches, flow, personals and structure.. quidds structure was kinda newbish but it was ok. quidd had some what better wordplay but punches and personals win battles.

like i said this was an ok battle... but my vote goes to scenario with a better all around verse..............no hate to quidd tho

VOTE-Scenario

Scenario 10-09-04 01:59 PM

uppin for votes peeps

Implicit 10-09-04 06:04 PM

Voted For: Qidd MinX

this was a really good battle. both came with hard punches, a few personals were attempted. i voted for qidd minx cause i felt his punches a little more and his structure and flow a little more. come of scenarios lines seem kinda crowded. i liked qidd minx's finisher and his line about the hockey thing with nets. good battle for both of you but my vote goes to qidd minx

BkBrawla 10-09-04 06:23 PM

Voted For: Scenario

aiming direct~my punches red ya like flower designs on dinner plates
beating me~blind kids have better chances of crossing interstates

u a newb so everyone knows that there's no doubt that i'm crushing ya
strike a match to ya dead body u'll look similar to the trees with usher *

kid's talent don't exist like doctor's delivering babies for he-she's
ya lost cause my punches and metas"ll red ya eye like ya glasses were 3d **

i know ya type, u try to act hard but nigga if u really want then it's ok kid
take me, lol~i'm getting away with this murder~leaving evidence like oj did ***

look at that~it's ashame when the site system starts to predict ya record
ya rocking a white-tee but i'm reding ya sternum like ya shirt was checkered

u accepted this~ya stuck in my grasp like tapes in vcr's trying to fast forward
i got cruel intentions so i'm planning to outline ya body like nba backboards
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD PUNCHES DECENT ONES NICE FLOW,,,,,,,DA PUNCHES JUST BLEW ME AWAY MAYNE NICE~!


the chance of you winning is impossile you scary hoe/
cuz to me your not living like sinning with chronical hows that for a scenario/
im not the one to mess with next youll get wrecked with the techs/text
its like your goal is playin hockey the way you gettin checked on the net/
ill put your rhymes to silence as i roll with the violence/
ill have you gone without a blink like i just stole your eyelids/
yo you aint chillin with thugs your an honor roll student in school/
how are you hard when Micro. paint is the only time u usin a tool/
oh and fuck your vest cuz i send steel in your mug/
the only time you get claps for your raps is someone is killin a bug/

finisher
i grab and slash at your verbs the way i blast and ash all you herbs/
im only here to give you an El like masucline spanish words/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT GOOD LIL PIECE HERE U HAD FLOW,,,,,,AND PUNCHES NICE



SCENARIO-NICE MAYNE U HAD DECENT PUNCHES,,,,,,,AND FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES ARE THE ONE WHAT BLEW ME AWAY~!



QIDD-NICE LIL PIECE YOU GOT HERE,,,,,,,GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,,GOOD PUNCHES,,,,,,,,BUT,,,,,,,,DA PUNCHES WERENT HITTIN HARD ENOUGH,,,,,,,NICE BATTLE THOUGH~!\\

QIDD- USE PERSONAL AND PUNCHES NEXT TIME

SCENARIO-NICE KEEP DOING YO CREATIVE PUNCHES

~PEACE~


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