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Ratbag vs BkBrawla
Battle Rules:
6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-08-04 at 05:17 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Ratbag has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-08-04 04:49 PM.
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BkBrawla has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-08-04 04:52 PM.
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Aight Listen,
Ima go and say dis fo yo own fuckin benefit, You say you freestylin, yet you prewrote 90% of it, So fuck dis illiterate piece of shit, cuz Ima break yo ligamint, Cuz BKs mom and dad made a mistake, and he was born wit it, You battlin my ass, but dis dude is somehow afraid of cussin, Ima leave you more wit envy worse den a jealous husband. 6 Lines dosent seem worth it but there ya go. |
Oh shit, sorry I meant wit more envy den a jealous husband, not more envy worse den a jealous husband. Dat dont make sense.
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Ratbag i'll clown you and give u nightmares have yo sweat stickin to yo bed-sheets like that movie "it" no mayne dis not an wet-dream//
I'll kill dis newbie in an violent death,,,,he havin an asma attack he losin his breath,,,my rhymes shines like agleam,,,make yo rhymes disappear by usin vanishing cream// he said "i hope your not the best on the site" iam not the best but i'll destroy yo life have yo insides lookin like yo outsides i'll subside yo health// like linkin park iam breakin your habit yo luv of hip-hop,,,,,,,flows u cant stop u cant even dodge my punches if u moved stealth//(moving carefully) its ova puttin dis rat in an bag i caught dis nigga by the head with an mouse trap// iam da kat ur da mouse dont run nor hide i will scratch// |
Uppin for votes peep'z damn that last line i didnt have more time to think~! shit lol
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Aight cool shit, think ya beat me therr, wasnt pushin myself... Gud battle homie. But yo, dis goes to every1 dont call me a nigga cuz Im white and Im Irish. And Im 11.
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Voted For: BkBrawla
i think dis def goes ta bk cuz his flow was better n he had sum hot punches. he also threw sum nice vocab n personals in there. ratbag he had to many words that rhyme within the like 4 lines n it jus got borin n bk also had a longer verse so my vote... vote-bk |
Yeah Im usually betta den at but its all gud... Thanx fo the vote anyway.
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"OK" thanks for the vote certifiedthug
elevate ratbag "ok" uppin for some mo votes |
Come on peep'z dont sleep on this battle uppin for mo votes
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Voted For: BkBrawla
YO BKBRAWLA U WIN THIS BY DEFAULT.... this guy bit his verse from eminem in the rap olympics... ima go report him... congrats on ya win |
O Werd Omg He Bit An Verse Damn Lol See Peep'z Use Personals And Everything Will Be Alright
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Voted For: BkBrawla
vote goes to BkBrawla i didnt like this mattch, ratbag had nice flow, but his punches werent there, but BkBrawla had good punches, BUT YOUR DAMN SENTENCES WERE TOOOOOO STRETCHED!!! make you sentences shorter and it will be all good ok!!! punches nice by BkBrawla so you win this over good ideas and nice wordplay vote to BkBrawla return the favour and vote on one of the battles below thx |
Voted For: BkBrawla
Weak Battle BkBrawla- yo punches were hard & they landed against Ratbag.. tha structure fuckin lack'd...(too stretchy..) tha flow fell off a-little and tha vocab was pretty decent... Ratbag- yo shit was decent too.. tha punches werent as hard to get my vote tho... tha structure was better than Bk's..but u should've add more lines tho...u would gotten my vote if u came harder tho... Overall- Brawla won this piece tho.. His (or Her) punches came way-harder than Ratbags.. |
This was feedback posted for Ratbag
^Eminem said most of that shit in a freestyle battle you noob.
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^yeah i reported him ;) ...............................
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oops my bad someone already said that my comp was fucking up
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