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Mistic-Rogue vs (x) CeEd
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no bullshit NO MOCKING MUMS abide by the rules or ill smash you! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-13-04 at 09:32 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
yo, accept this battle soon please, i am giving you some time, but hurry up, as soon as i have seen you accept i will accept and spit
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good luck oi, may the force be with you
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you accepting?????
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if you no show, i will be pissed and make your life a living hell
:cussing: :shoot: :cussing: :shoot: :cussing: :nono: |
Mistic-Rogue has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 11:07 PM.
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good luck, you will need it!
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(x) CeEd has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 11:11 PM.
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yo
This newb thinks hes hot, ill choke him till he cant breathe/ You would grow exceed, even if i put x chromizomes in your seed/ You'll be seriosly "dropping sht" when i dismantle your bow/ Bitch is looking for beef, as if im a full grown cow/ Kid rymes punctilious, yet its the skill that he lacks/ This (x) ceEd charactor gives new meaning to the word "Wack"/ Bitch is spitting bullshit, he'll be merked by the end of the day/ "What a freakshow", nice to no theres a circus not to far away/ This boy looks shy, cuase it took him 4 days to accept/ The way he raps, it like winning is not a main concept/ good luck man |
YO,YO MIC CHEK 1,2,1,2
mYSTK- rogue ,ima strech your neck around the globe// You stilll in a probe, still mystified in by my blows// before u battle chek your priorities,im the major youe style will be the minorites,// your rhyme style is warped it dnt fit the ALPHABET,next thing i know u workin as colaberate,// So spare me the shit 'bout "positive light" ima rip the shit up ahead of you without a MIC, this cums down to the verbal fight, Cuz u musnt be hetro, ur name proves it that ur styles the Retero,You'll still b missin the point when it sayz CONNECT-O, rip u then leave the crowd 2 be sayin AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, RIGHTI-O HOW MANY Os in the 1 befo' leave u stuk between north 2 south pole,// You and wat army can have an infintry,ima lock you outta your quaters and charge you and entrance fee,CUZ I DNT GIV A FUCK BOUT HOW MANY ENEMIEZ, you can be made of kedigree, but x(me) still top pedigree,You the nxt B.RABBIT wit a MYXOMATOSIS,take you for a turn around and put you in TUBORCOLOSIS,FIT U WIT SYPNOSIS, give you a life time off hell which will cause the losses,// People can say we RAP CATS but really u just a rap kitten,still at home purvin' while u get babysitted(u purve on the babysitter) You must be shittin me wit verses you u spit at me,NEXT THING IN cats will be,MYSTIK is a GIRL you see!!!// Cuz ima rip your lamina, stand up and fite why u outta stamina, this wuz the day u marked on your calenda' im just too a bad dream for you, the diffrent caliebur, IMA kill you then eat you alive like a scavenger, to begin wit as a newb not bad peace out R.I.P. bugz |
just a few corrections guys,
You would grow exceed....*you *wouldnt* grow exceed* when i dismantle your bow....*when i dismantle your *bowel** |
yo mistakes i meant "cause" k all gud plz vote NOW.
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yo mystik how long doez it take for resultz man cuz im gettin tired
you kno |
Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
Almost voted for X ceed, his lines were hype and had me reading it like it was an audio, his lines were simple yet very effective, but i didnt vote for x because of the sloppy typing i had to re-read a lot of stuff to get it to flow and make sense , and if you cant at least go back and re-read your shit then i dont know ...... But mistic came good also with good word play and multis ... |
Uppin for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin for some votes!
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uppin for some vote people! honest votes will be returned!
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upin 4 sum votes ppl
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yo ppl cum up and vote plz
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thanx 4 viewin ppl gud battle
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DONT FREE POST YOU FUCK! uppin for some votes!
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
thats shit was aight u should battle me!!!!!!!!!!! |
Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
Mistic takes this... no disrespect to X but this is text, and it seemed like your flow would sound aight in audio, but it dont cut it here on screen. Plus your verse had a lot of filler lines and some things that made no sense... just elevate homie, grab a book and expand your vocab... know what your talking about when you spit, nahmean? rouge had a flow that you could follow... flowed well and that freakshow punch had me rolling. verse was put together nicely so it wasnt a hard for me deciding who gets the L in this one... return the favor yall, link is in the siggy |
thx uppin for some votes!
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uppin for some votes!!
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uppin for some votes people, honest votes will be returned
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uppin 4 votez .................................................. .....
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uppin for some votes people, lets get this battle closed!
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This was feedback posted for Mistic-Rogue
you won but i aint gonna vote until u drop an hoenst vote in this battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154947 |
uppin for some votes people!
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uppin for some votes people!!!! lets get this battle closed!
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yo uppin 4 votez
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uppin for some votes. honest vote will be returned!
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
ce good multis ok punches and disses flow and structure was fucked up fix that for real i see you have alot of potential but you still need work 5/10 mystic good multis also good structure and flow vocab even on both nice punches and disses were even this is a real closed battle tied in all areas except structure and flow which mystic won in so with nothing left to vote by mystic gets the vote with that 5.5/10 |
uppin for some votes!
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uppin for some votes people, lets get this battle closed!
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Voted For: Mistic-Rogue
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