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intensify effect vs BIGPAPPA76
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10-20 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no recycling no hate 30 mins to check in and 30 to drop a verse, good luck hommie :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 10-09-04 at 01:19 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 12:50 PM.
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BIGPAPPA76 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 12:52 PM.
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you lost in this world of men,boys and emcee.....no mic..4ever a textcee...
you a text book dick sucker so i guess you prefer da term testie (dick sucker ) Beat me? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts 'fall short' like midgets in 'high jumping'.... Rhymes bumping...Face it...u 'aint real' enough to 'fuck' with me like 'dry humping'.... im hood atomic, your about nothing like tracks without a put topic.. on stage your the laughing stock of the arena like a good comic.. *haha* kid aint seen in crowds like them cats that enjoy peace.. why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee... It's over...close the folders...behold...your facing the lyrical champ holder... Stressed out...?...I'll decapitate you'r head just to take some of that weight off your shoulders... Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent 'Mulder' but watch as your 'Files' get 'X'd in disclosure ... Lost your composure...I'd 'snap' on bigpapa by taking 'pics'...just prove that he's nothing but a 'poser'.... |
why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" like un-employee...
forgot to add the like in the bar but ya get it still.... yo i gotta go so good luck fam one....... |
aight look...
Its "intence" how my rhymes "efect" ya brain waves nigga this shits gonna leave you scard and fucked up fo' dayz lil faggot ducked when he repped violent type he was scared of 50th brigade and couldnt live up to his hype just anotha bitch made nigga who thinks he can flow fuckin homo cant even come close to my shit and thats fo sho intensify we know you a fag, your emotions run softly nigga when you took this battle you should have known it was gonna be costly Intensifyin your effect wont even help you now cuz this shits about done this niggas on tha run, his tail between his legs, you just a bitch son aint even got tha balls to stay in violent type when he made himself a fool been duckin me for weeks nigga and now you layin in tha "dead pool" bitch after this shit our beef will be clean, its all good cause i know you gonna be to scared to fuck wit me again in my own hood played ass bitch imma bring it straight old school to end this shit illa nigga FUCK YOU and you just been MURDAD by tha real lyrical rhyme killa!!! BIGPAPPA76 |
Voted For: BIGPAPPA76
Its "intence" how my rhymes "efect" ya brain waves nigga this shits gonna leave you scard and fucked up fo' dayz lil faggot ducked when he repped violent type he was scared of 50th brigade and couldnt live up to his hype just anotha bitch made nigga who thinks he can flow fuckin homo cant even come close to my shit and thats fo sho intensify we know you a fag, your emotions run softly nigga when you took this battle you should have known it was gonna be costly ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT I C PERSONALS AND PUNCHES GOOD FLOW "OK" PUNCHES BUT ITS ALL GOOD Intensifyin your effect wont even help you now cuz this shits about done this niggas on tha run, his tail between his legs, you just a bitch son aint even got tha balls to stay in violent type when he made himself a fool been duckin me for weeks nigga and now you layin in tha "dead pool" bitch after this shit our beef will be clean, its all good cause i know you gonna be to scared to fuck wit me again in my own hood played ass bitch imma bring it straight old school to end this shit illa nigga FUCK YOU and you just been MURDAD by tha real lyrical rhyme killa!!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" NICE VERSE HERE GOOD CLOSA NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES DA PUNCHS WERE "OK" DA FLOW OF IT WAS AWSOME KEEP DOING YO THANG you lost in this world of men,boys and emcee.....no mic..4ever a textcee... you a text book dick sucker so i guess you prefer da term testie (dick sucker ) Beat me? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts 'fall short' like midgets in 'high jumping'.... Rhymes bumping...Face it...u 'aint real' enough to 'fuck' with me like 'dry humping'.... im hood atomic, your about nothing like tracks without a put topic.. on stage your the laughing stock of the arena like a good comic.. *haha* kid aint seen in crowds like them cats that enjoy peace.. why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee... It's over...close the folders...behold...your facing the lyrical champ holder... Stressed out...?...I'll decapitate you'r head just to take some of that weight off your shoulders... Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent 'Mulder' but watch as your 'Files' get 'X'd in disclosure ... Lost your composure...I'd 'snap' on bigpapa by taking 'pics'...just prove that he's nothing but a 'poser'.... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE VERSE HERE GOOD PIECE NICE FLOW DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD BUT I DONT C ANY PERSONALS BIGPAPPA-U HAD GOOD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND FLOW THAT WHAT EDGE ME TO GIVE U THIS VOTE INTENSIFY EFFECT-NICE VERSE CLOSE BATTLE HERE BOTH OF U HAD GOOD PUNCES AND GOOD FLOW BUT EFFECT THERE WAS ONE CATEGORY THAT U MISS DA "PERSONALS" DIDNT SEE ANY OF THAT IN YO VERSE V-BIGPAPPA CAUSE OF HARD PERSONALS AND PUNCHE EFFECT-USE PERSONALS NEXT TIME,,,,,,,,IT ALWAYS BRINGS OUT GOOD VERSE AND IT CAN EDGE DA BATTLE AND GET U AN WIN NICE BATTLE,,,,,,,,CLOSE BATTLE ~PEACE~ |
Voted For: intensify effect
BigPappa76: aight, i've seen better from u, ok punches, nice personals, not multi's, no meta's, structure could have been better so could ur flow, elevate a lil more and use better wordplay. overall 5.5/10 Intensify Effect: i liked this, all ur lines seemed to hit, what sealed it for u was the dry humping line, lmao, that had me rolling, punches were hitting, wordplay was there, meta's were crazy, multi's was nice, hot opener/personal, hot closer. overall 8.5/10 vote: Intensify Effect no hate, return the honest votes, battles r in sig |
ayo im uppin this shit.... good verse IE but its a close one... lets see some votes people
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why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee..
forgot to put the like after "walk-throu" like in-employee.. upp'in this battle honest votes with good brake-downs.. nice dop good battle.... |
im uppin this shit..............bring on tha votes people
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This was feedback posted for BIGPAPPA76
chekin polls... good drop n good luck to the both of yall
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Voted For: intensify effect
aight well from what i see bigpapa got the personals with a smoth flow that was preety basic vocab which was basic punches which lacked inpacked diss's that was ok originality so so all around average verse but need levation in certine spots plus ya verse aint keep me intertain now intensify had no personal diss which aint really a big-deal if ya verse is still tight but really do help if they good one he had good punches i enjoyed and effective flow was smoth originality was good and had a few lines that i was feel'in alot plus i was entertain with hes whole verse which is why i picked him as the winner good drop |
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I need elevation do i? you are 1-4 suck my dick... this was a solid battle but dont tell someone to elevate who is 18-13 when you are 1-4 biatch |
Voted For: BIGPAPPA76
hmmmm weak battle but close big pappa ur wordplay was garbage..u had none,ur flow was good however..includin ur structure...it was good,u had ok punches...u started off slow at first the started to land them....u also had acouple good personals but not great man. intensity effect ur flow was good,ur structure was okay,u had basic lines tho ur punches weren't hitting effectively at all,u might of had a personal here and there but they werent usefull if they were thay were played..... both need to work on landing and throwing there punches effectively...cus they are not workin to good...but they do have potential...... CLOSE BATTLE v/bigpappa76 |
Voted For: BIGPAPPA76
Big papa good shit man i remember you way back u defintly a vet at this site and i can see youve really elevated since back then i like the punches and real good word play i dont like how u stretchin ya bars man shorten them up its ckilling ur verse Good shit tho u still won this Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin this shit................1 more vote needed, lets hear ya people
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Voted For: intensify effect
wow... I.e. I was feeling that.... great job... you lost in this world of men,boys and emcee.....no mic..4ever a textcee... you a text book dick sucker so i guess you prefer da term testie (dick sucker ) ~that was funny shit right there....lol Beat me? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts 'fall short' like midgets in 'high jumping'.... Rhymes bumping...Face it...u 'aint real' enough to 'fuck' with me like 'dry humping'.... ~LMAO... sorry that was just 2 fetti im hood atomic, your about nothing like tracks without a put topic.. on stage your the laughing stock of the arena like a good comic.. *haha* ~Alright... kid aint seen in crowds like them cats that enjoy peace.. why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee... ~Eh... again... average... It's over...close the folders...behold...your facing the lyrical champ holder... Stressed out...?...I'll decapitate you'r head just to take some of that weight off your shoulders... ~Better... Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent 'Mulder' but watch as your 'Files' get 'X'd in disclosure ... Lost your composure...I'd 'snap' on bigpapa by taking 'pics'...just prove that he's nothing but a 'poser'.... ~Excellent closer 7.3/10 Okay... big pappa... you talked way too much about him ducking and I really didn't think that verse was too great... definately not your best. you need more personals than just him ducking... it's about a 5.8/10... really... I expected better. Good battle... stay up. |
Voted For: BIGPAPPA76
okay break down.... Personalz - Pappa (tha duckin dissez got it) Punchez - Pappa (personalz helped wit this) Structure - Pappa (easy 2 read more matchin then effect) Flow - Pappa (structure helped wit this) Multiz - Effect (pappa didn't realli have none) pretty one sided pappa got this at least i think so Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upp'in for more votes..............................
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
juss checkin the polls n stuff....................
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what is this fuckin shit? this was closed 2 days ago... what the fuck?
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Voted For: intensify effect
Easy battle to judge... Its "intence" how my rhymes "efect" ya brain waves nigga this shits gonna leave you scard and fucked up fo' dayz ehhh...ok opener... nuffin special lil faggot ducked when he repped violent type he was scared of 50th brigade and couldnt live up to his hype cool personal... stay on him just anotha bitch made nigga who thinks he can flow fuckin homo cant even come close to my shit and thats fo sho pointless... filler line w/self glorification intensify we know you a fag, your emotions run softly nigga when you took this battle you should have known it was gonna be costly no punch... 2nd time ya called him gay already Intensifyin your effect wont even help you now cuz this shits about done this niggas on tha run, his tail between his legs, you just a bitch son a little stretched here... used the play on his name in ya opener in pretty much the same way aint even got tha balls to stay in violent type when he made himself a fool been duckin me for weeks nigga and now you layin in tha "dead pool" already told us he ducked you... that all you got on him? bitch after this shit our beef will be clean, its all good cause i know you gonna be to scared to fuck wit me again in my own hood blah...filler played ass bitch imma bring it straight old school to end this shit illa nigga FUCK YOU and you just been MURDAD by tha real lyrical rhyme killa!!! weak closer... second bar was ya best... everything fell short after that IE: you lost in this world of men,boys and emcee.....no mic..4ever a textcee... you a text book dick sucker so i guess you prefer da term testie (dick sucker ) lol...funny....nice opener...a lil stretched but effective Beat me? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts 'fall short' like midgets in 'high jumping'.... Rhymes bumping...Face it...u 'aint real' enough to 'fuck' with me like 'dry humping'.... lol again... dry humping... not the most original but it's still some funny shyt im hood atomic, your about nothing like tracks without a put topic.. on stage your the laughing stock of the arena like a good comic.. *haha* ehhh..ok... no personals so far.. just disses kid aint seen in crowds like them cats that enjoy peace.. why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee... blah!... weak bar here It's over...close the folders...behold...your facing the lyrical champ holder... Stressed out...?...I'll decapitate you'r head just to take some of that weight off your shoulders... ok... nothing spectacular Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent 'Mulder' but watch as your 'Files' get 'X'd in disclosure ... Lost your composure...I'd 'snap' on bigpapa by taking 'pics'...just prove that he's nothing but a 'poser'.... nice closer... effective use of multies... nice wordplay... whole verse shoulda hit like this (add some personals next time!) |
ok this is bull shit... this battle was over... i won... thats it... i had the win on my record and now its re opend and im losing? what the fuck is this shit? i mean IE is aight with me, he is now in my crew and were cool but this is some bull shit... im not happy about this shit at all
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Voted For: intensify effect
effect wun diz battl he had bettr flow i likd hiz flow it wuz hot wit dem disses an punchlines he cum much stronger den bigpappa in dis battle, pappa need 2 improve on disses Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upp'in this battle for the final vote..................
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Voted For: intensify effect
BigPappa76 Its "intence" how my rhymes "efect" ya brain waves nigga this shits gonna leave you scard and fucked up fo' dayz self-glory no comment lil faggot ducked when he repped violent type he was scared of 50th brigade and couldnt live up to his hype nice personal good diss just anotha bitch made nigga who thinks he can flow fuckin homo cant even come close to my shit and thats fo sho weak punch and weak rhyme intensify we know you a fag, your emotions run softly nigga when you took this battle you should have known it was gonna be costly nice diss not really a punch but good rhyming Intensifyin your effect wont even help you now cuz this shits about done this niggas on tha run, his tail between his legs, you just a bitch son lol @ this line i found it funny and yet it ain't? lol anyway i liked it aint even got tha balls to stay in violent type when he made himself a fool been duckin me for weeks nigga and now you layin in tha "dead pool" More personal there an aight rhyme good diss bitch after this shit our beef will be clean, its all good cause i know you gonna be to scared to fuck wit me again in my own hood filler really no diss jus rhyming really played ass bitch imma bring it straight old school to end this shit illa nigga FUCK YOU and you just been MURDAD by tha real lyrical rhyme killa!!! nice flow for the closer there no punch and a lil self-glory intensify effect you lost in this world of men,boys and emcee.....no mic..4ever a textcee... you a text book dick sucker so i guess you prefer da term testie (dick sucker ) nice opener a good punch there although it's a lil played Beat me? I'll just watch n laugh as ur attempts 'fall short' like midgets in 'high jumping'.... Rhymes bumping...Face it...u 'aint real' enough to 'fuck' with me like 'dry humping'.... damn good punch nice diss and flowed well im hood atomic, your about nothing like tracks without a put topic.. on stage your the laughing stock of the arena like a good comic.. *haha* nice diss and rhyming good flow again kid aint seen in crowds like them cats that enjoy peace.. why attempt to deploy me, when this battle is a "walk-throu" un-employee... lol @ this line good again It's over...close the folders...behold...your facing the lyrical champ holder... Stressed out...?...I'll decapitate you'r head just to take some of that weight off your shoulders... LMAO nice punch specially the 2nd line Rhymes heavy as boulders...not agent 'Mulder' but watch as your 'Files' get 'X'd in disclosure ... Lost your composure...I'd 'snap' on bigpapa by taking 'pics'...just prove that he's nothing but a 'poser'.... Nic closer a couple of multies punch included flowed well damn good verse v/I.F purely because yall both came hard at each other but BIGPAPPA76 was lacking 1 thing...punches...and dawg it's essential that you use them because it's the main part of a battle and if you don't use them u will lose battles like this which you could've easily used and i think if you did use punches...the result would've been very different |
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