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death tearz vs BkBrawla
Battle Rules:
6-Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting quick battle Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-09-04 at 03:18 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
BkBrawla has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 02:48 PM.
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death tearz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 02:54 PM.
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profile says hes 2 and by his battles I believe it, someone needs to add RIP BKB cuz he needs it*
hes most hated alive becuz of his rhymes, people wont give him time becuz hes under 5** only thing bout him good is he tells the truth, says hes a newb and thats y no one wants him in a crew.*** Personals: *His sig has a RIP and name in it ** His profile says he is 2 *** In a thread he made he said he wuz a newb quick battle enjoy it. honest vote |
I'll pick out yo organs usin an pitch fork like labotomy my punches hittin yo *nerve* befor i serve u the main dish ur gettin *hors d'oeuvre*//(appetizer)
_________________________________________________like i cutt of yo phone cord yo punches wont connect throw an punch in my ribcage it wont have any effect try to touch an ghost yo punch will mis-direct// "OK" u made "death cry in pain" the only way u could've done that if you told them to bend ova in an butt fuckin position//(fuck guys in the ass) my punches got u in an submission u can tap out(quit) you wont get sign and yo wack verse wont even be reconize by the talents scouts// mayne u wack u acted like tha phonix was the best person on the site you posted an "diss list" man it only yo 1st battle but now you on my death list// puttin this kid to rest he dont deserve to live injectin lyrical poisinus into his viens havin him screamin in pain havin tears runnin down his cheeks,,,,death is yo acception u been slain// *he keeps braggin about tha phonix cause he no showed he posted an diss list to bragg about it he acts like tha phnonix was the best person on tha site well peep'z thats my explaination get yo votin on~! |
thats not 6 lines and im not braggin dude i wuz pissed. i wanted that battle to go
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yes that is an 6 line every line has an // i just change that struture it boust to look like this
I'll pick out yo organs usin an pitch fork like labotomy my punches hittin yo *nerve* befor i serve u the main dish ur gettin *hors d'oeuvre*//(appetizer) like i cutt of yo phone cord yo punches wont connect throw an punch in my ribcage it wont have any effect try to touch an ghost yo punch will mis-direct// "OK" u made "death cry in pain" the only way u could've done that if you told them to bend ova in an butt fuckin position//(fuck guys in the ass) my punches got u in an submission u can tap out(quit) you wont get sign and yo wack verse wont even be reconize by the talents scouts// mayne u wack u acted like tha phonix was the best person on the site you posted an "diss list" man it only yo 1st battle but now you on my death list// puttin this kid to rest he dont deserve to live injectin lyrical poisinus into his viens havin him screamin in pain havin tears runnin down his cheeks,,,,death is yo acception u been slain// |
aight wut eva u win. i count a line not by the // but how many words there r. but u win good drop enjoy the W
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Aight Aight Uppin For Votes Dont Sleep Pee'z
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ya close this out. therll be a rematch i promise ya. just not right now
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and when i used that personal of RIP i wuz not disrespectin smoka. the man defined wut rap is, and his legacy will live on. i wuz doin a battle and i wuz dissin Bk not smoka. peace smoka and RIP
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yea ok uppin for votes damn come on stop sleepijn
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yo stop sleepin uppin on this shit yo uppin for some more votes
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smoka im disappointed and i wish i had been dissin u. though u r here, my respect for you isnt.
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uppin come on people vote close this up^^^^^^^^^^^
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quit sleepin damn come on^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Voted For: BkBrawla
brawla got this.... overrall lyrical content seemd complex, hard hittin an the flow an bars connected... nice punches, overrall solid drop... tearz ya flow was aight, nice punches, decent personals, but ya wordplay an overral creativity wasnt as tight as brawla no hate an return the fave |
uppin for votes lets go peep'z
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Voted For: BkBrawla
ok both lose the explanations corny seperate ur lines bkbrawler gets my vote he was far more complex better punches they actually hit even out ur lines a bit death work on vocab its horrible work on personals and multis u came far too simple and played elevate bk for bein complex throwin hard punches |
aight danx mayne uppin for more votes holla~!
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Voted For: BkBrawla
Yea here it is.... Punches/Personals-In this one DT has more personals but you had more punches BK.....So it was a tie here.... Vocab-Bk had a lil bit harder vocab here...it was more complexx then Dt.... Enjoyment-It was a tie...but Bk's kept my attention a lil bit more |
w/e uppin for votes holla uppin lets go uppin for more votes honest vote will be returned
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Voted For: BkBrawla
now both of u gatta FUCK Xplainin ya verses...if peeps dont get it then tell 'em to visit a shrink... i read both verses twice...and came to the conclusion that BK gets this hands down...his verse surely had lota of punches...which connected and were mixed with his personals...very good job BK...ya structure was slightly stretched...but was better than ur opponent's...DEATH got u on flow cos his verse had that better than you...but apart from that ur verse made a lil more sense..and had what it takes to win a battle..im talkin about PUNCHES...prevent xplainin all ur verse like i said^^^..but keep doin ur thing...both werent that good...but BK defanatly gets this... wun |
Voted For: BkBrawla
death tearz....ok verse..punches werent too hard tho..could be alot harder...structure needs to be improved...i can see u got potential tho....get a few better personals...like i said..ok verse......elevate tho.... brawla...a better verse from you..punches just hit harder...structure was a bit funny tho....to me.....but a good verse....ok wordplay too..... aight...ok battle.....a few decent punches....but brawla takes this cos his punches were harder....pz..no hate my vote=bkbrawla |
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