Ice Pick vs Elusiv G
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

a Battle dta been a long time in the making

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-09-04 at 09:01 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 03:02 PM.

1)hes 24 and wastes time wit lil net beefs
2)He been casin me 4 time wantin 2 battle, david blaine tha magician
3)In his sig dere is a girl strippin
4)his record
5)under his name on left side it says god-like, in tha 30's niggaz were slaves
6)Hes got mad posts but yet not highly considerd on site
7)dogs get lil bumps/ticks on them
8)Smauel L Jackson fil-shaft

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 05:16 PM.

Explaining his punches and shit what a fuckin wack job

lucky i dont have a feild day on your ass......



Hit U in the dome with a frying Pan then I'll Cut Ur Head in Half & Give U Splitting headache U K
Man u play with More Street Balls Then a AND1 Mix Tape
Close Ur Foot In a ELEVATE OR DOOR and ur one step to the Next the Level
You Couldn't Write Killer lyrics if You wrote ur Verse on ur chest with a scalpel
With those ryhmes you really think you cant be caught your elusive
Well this is murder in the first brought to you by ICE PICK as a frontlinez Exclusive
There's no escaping-tha-stress that Ill causes-wit-a-verse
So damn good....G dies...but he still applauding-in-tha-hearse,
He'll be dead without-his-fame... I'm simply iller than he'll ever-be,
His family are born losers....so I guess tha defeat is heriditary
secondly, my rhymez like corpse jeans, dead-lee(deadly)
good thing ya only do text, cuz yu would never make it as an emcee
yu bitin my style like a toddler, which meanz yu teethin
and its like i turned yu into saturday and sunday the way i leave yu weekend(weakend)
Your Wack lyrics are in effect . Hit from behind like car fenders...
Gentle queer must work in a club, cause ya "bars-tender."

^ i killed u, ha i beat ICe Pick, u been beaten by me,lol, yeah upppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn mothafuckas, lol, yes!

YEAH YOU BEAT ME WITH THAT FAKE ASS SISTER LINE

YEAH SHE IS <MY SISTER YOU FUCKIN HERB

I LIKE HOW YOU SHRANK YA FONT SO IT DIDNT LOOK LIKE THIS



This nigga is 24years old,by then lord knows ill hav assumed a higher role
I'll be a doctor of pharmacology,researchin a cure 4 ice picks facial deformities//

U dun spent time trackin me,callin me, searchin for the fabled elusive.. Elusiv G
U hav gained wat you wished to attain, but afta dis u'll c u ned 2 elevate as if u were david blaine//

His sig, depicts his sista strippin',"Incest through tha fam" reads 2moros newspaper clippin'
Its great for our masturbation, jus sad how he gotta pimp his sista, 4 his posts to be worthy of observation//

Despite ur record i aint impressed, cos nigga confess, u can cause MC's no stress
Every battle u had gainst newbs in a dress, u act blessed, well we'll c wen your verse is filled wit slugz like yo chest//

Subtitles claiming your god-like,must be a mistranslation,dats blasphemous, it undermines many religious foundationz
Believable as a nigga in the 30's claiming to be tha owner of a cotton plantation,we can safely assume dat shit isnt a credible quotation//

You got 2000 odd posts and thread to your name, yet unfoertunately, your hardly recognised in tha RV game
Well shit, it aint like your skills are being dismissed, cos you know your on some ghost writers waiting list//

Ice Pick, ima dog and ur annoying tick, annoyingly persistant, skills nonexistant, levels neva consistent
Well ima merk u wit ease, close this case, no need 4 a legal assistant,lyrical punches leavin u needin a dental assistant//

Your da Ice Pick held by Peoples in Shaft, u break easily, your rhymes created by poor workmanship and craft
U can poke urself a hundred times, but @ da end of da day ill bitch slap ur ass, even tho im supposedly outta ma class//

How Stretched Is That You Wack Ass Fuck


Gun Talk And Shit

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Hahahahaha

^yo i shrank it to make it easier to c wat iwaz sayin to niggaz, stop hatin pick, i spose u did jus take a dent to yo rep, hahahaah lol. WAT DID I SAY COUNCIL 4EVA NIGGA LOL

^haha dis is hectic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!COuncil nigga, Ice Pick been merked y'all, his verse had no personals and punches were simple and few and far between, it was ll jus rhyimng and shit basic bollocks, hahahahah. Peace nigga R>I>P

With those ryhmes you really think you cant be caught your elusive
Well this is murder in the first brought to you by ICE PICK as a frontlinez Exclusive
Personal about your wack name\

There's no escaping-tha-stress that Ill causes-wit-a-verse
So damn good....G dies...but he still applauding-in-tha-hearse,
another play off ya name. elusive meants to escape or not get caught.....


Hit U in the dome with a frying Pan then I'll Cut Ur Head in Half & Give U Splitting headache U K

Like get it you got a head ache u ok U K
Your from the UK


You must be fucking stupid,

ohh yeah you were real personal

Im 24 wow, i have 2000 posts Nice personals


ALso the line about god like, HA HA HA that was a wack attempt at trashing my sub title, had no driection and completely wack in this battle

I battled newbs in a dress

Ok you lost to a ton of NEWBS and your talking trash,

ALso trying to sways votes is useless until they read and vote, dumb fuckin retard

and how many times you gonna say NI__A to me, are you white, God i hope not

You are too fucking much

Voted For: Ice Pick

To Me It Was A One Sided Battle
Punches: Ice... Shit Hit Pretty Hard Man.. N Ppl Said You Fell Of :laugh:.. Elusiv Keep Practicin
Vocab: Pretty Good The Both Of You.. Tie
Word Play: Ice Pick... Nice Word Play.. Ive Seen You Do MUCH Better.. But This Will Do.. Elusiv I Had Trouble Following On Wif Urs.. Keep Doin Ya Thing
Personal: Tie... Cant Chose This Category
Multis: Ice.. What Was That? 4-5 Lines Straight? Nice Shit.. Elusiv I Didnt Really Feel Your Verse...

As You Can C.. 1 Sided Battle... Props To THe Both Of Yall.. No Hate... No D/R.. Honest Vote.. REturn Tha Favour

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Hit U in the dome with a frying Pan then I'll Cut Ur Head in Half & Give U Splitting headache U K
Man u play with More Street Balls Then a AND1 Mix Tape
Close Ur Foot In a ELEVATE OR DOOR and ur one step to the Next the Level
You Couldn't Write Killer lyrics if You wrote ur Verse on ur chest with a scalpel
With those ryhmes you really think you cant be caught your elusive
Well this is murder in the first brought to you by ICE PICK as a frontlinez Exclusive
There's no escaping-tha-stress that Ill causes-wit-a-verse
So damn good....G dies...but he still applauding-in-tha-hearse,
He'll be dead without-his-fame... I'm simply iller than he'll ever-be,
His family are born losers....so I guess tha defeat is heriditary
secondly, my rhymez like corpse jeans, dead-lee(deadly)
good thing ya only do text, cuz yu would never make it as an emcee
yu bitin my style like a toddler, which meanz yu teethin
and its like i turned yu into saturday and sunday the way i leave yu weekend(weakend)
Your Wack lyrics are in effect . Hit from behind like car fenders...
Gentle queer must work in a club, cause ya "bars-tender."

nice line cant be beat man need more wordplay tho but still took it...





This nigga is 24years old,by then lord knows ill hav assumed a higher role
I'll be a doctor of pharmacology,researchin a cure 4 ice picks facial deformities//

U dun spent time trackin me,callin me, searchin for the fabled elusive.. Elusiv G
U hav gained wat you wished to attain, but afta dis u'll c u ned 2 elevate as if u were david blaine//

His sig, depicts his sista strippin',"Incest through tha fam" reads 2moros newspaper clippin'
Its great for our masturbation, jus sad how he gotta pimp his sista, 4 his posts to be worthy of observation//

Despite ur record i aint impressed, cos nigga confess, u can cause MC's no stress
Every battle u had gainst newbs in a dress, u act blessed, well we'll c wen your verse is filled wit slugz like yo chest//

Subtitles claiming your god-like,must be a mistranslation,dats blasphemous, it undermines many religious foundationz
Believable as a nigga in the 30's claiming to be tha owner of a cotton plantation,we can safely assume dat shit isnt a credible quotation//

You got 2000 odd posts and thread to your name, yet unfoertunately, your hardly recognised in tha RV game
Well shit, it aint like your skills are being dismissed, cos you know your on some ghost writers waiting list//

Ice Pick, ima dog and ur annoying tick, annoyingly persistant, skills nonexistant, levels neva consistent
Well ima merk u wit ease, close this case, no need 4 a legal assistant,lyrical punches leavin u needin a dental assistant//

Your da Ice Pick held by Peoples in Shaft, u break easily, your rhymes created by poor workmanship and craft
U can poke urself a hundred times, but @ da end of da day ill bitch slap ur ass, even tho im supposedly outta ma class//



had some good wordplay but punches sucked man... need to come harder next time...


so my vote goes to Ice Pick...

Voted For: Ice Pick

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Ice Pick
1.Punches were hard & connected
2.Structure was decent..kinda lack'd a little
3.Flow was pretty nice
4.Multi's were play'd out good in there

Elusiv G
1.Punches were hard..not hard enuff
2.Structure was too stretchy
3.Flow kinda fell a little
4.Vocab was aight in there

Overall
Ice Pick took this one..wit harder punches
..sum nice multi's
and a nice flow to it..

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Ice Pick got this one due to he came harder with his lines punches good vocab neat structure nice flow mayn you got skill cuzz i like this line

There's no escaping-tha-stress that Ill causes-wit-a-verse
So damn good....G dies...but he still applauding-in-tha-hearse

^^^good flow himmie

Elusive G had it goin on too mayn his flow was neat nice good vocab structure put Ice Pick came harder mayn good luck bot yall

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WEAK ON BOTH SIDES.....Wasnt really feelin it.......

Voted For: Ice Pick


elusiv
u had nice structure u had punches that were kinda hard
u had metas and ya personals werent really there u can
still elevate a lil and u woulda had a nice victory if u could
of came a lil more harder
focus on setting up your setup with a meta or personal
and finishing off your punch strong or witty

Ice pick
ya structure lost u points cuz it was kinda fucked
ya personals were pretty good u had some nice
meta's and wordplay
ya setups were nice and were the key in why u won
u jus didnt go for the punch u set it up nice so ya punch
would fully deliver

....Nuff Said....