KaNg kOrRuPt vs jmsbnd07655
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-11-04 at 03:49 PM

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jmsbnd07655 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 08:15 AM.

i aint sufferin but when i do i automatically boost my vitality,
i'll knock you out so bad, you'll forget that this is reality,
actually, im one of the illest mc's in the UK, to see me you gotta pay,
you cant say shit, so jus move outta my way,
i remix my rhymes puttin in delay, when i kill you everyday,
to make you get critical tooth decay,
my rhymes puzzle your brain with hints of lyrical perplexity,
kang, you should just quit rhymin and go for studying hysterectomy, dont lecture me
im clearly pointing out all of your lyrical flaws,
you could do metaphorical backflips and still take 2 days for you to get some applause, i settle the scores
your lyrical chords will leave me bored
im layin down more than you can afford and im gettin you floored,
my metaphors, are unreadable, unspeakable
my vocabs scientifically dope and insanely unbelieveable

KaNg kOrRuPt has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 07:27 PM.

aight here goe no beef to anyone it's just a battle...

Ay kid you’re one and one that already shows that you’re weak
You’s a newb that can’t elevate your situation’s bleak
You let your lyrics speak so all you say is crap
But you’re from the UK no wonder you can’t rap(no offense to any UK rappers)
Instead of RV try I just got merked.com
Cause besides eminem white rapper’s an oxymoron(no offense to white rappers)
Jmsbnd I don’t even want to waste my time
I’ve heard your rhymes what makes you think you can compete with mine
It’s about time I slaughtered you like cattle
For a wise man it was pretty dumb to except this battle(he’s in the wise men committee)
And it’s sad to see bad emcee’s, that think they good on R.V
Battle me, and after postin get rattled cuz we straight G
My fun is over you just can’t beat me son
After about the third or fourth line I already won

aight uppin this battle vote up ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice verse
 

yo, that woz a nice verse man, decent punchlines.
uppin for votes.........

thanks... UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

JMS BAD STRCTURE FLOW WAS OFF NO GOOD DISSES OR PUNCHES BASICALLY A SELF GLORIFICATION VERSE WHICH MADE it worse a 3/10
kang ok structure flow ok vocab bout even with jms punches and diisess also need work but he actually tried to insult his oppenant which is basically what your suppose to do therfore winning him the battle with more effective punches and disses 5/10

uppin this ya'll!!!

uppin 4 votes ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin errbody vote up !!!!!

uppin....
 

.......uppin for more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

i liked jsmbnds flow, but it didnt really have any punches in it.
kang korrupts verse was flowin all the way and i think that is like a 1st round k/o...

uppin uppin uppin i'm back uppin to close this battle!!!

Voted For: jmsbnd07655

jmsbnd07655 - iight spit, your punches wernt to bad and you had a good vocab.

Best Line - im clearly pointing out all of your lyrical flaws,
you could do metaphorical backflips and still take 2 days for you to get some applause, i settle the scores
your lyrical chords will leave me bored

Worst Line - my metaphors, are unreadable, unspeakable
my vocabs scientifically dope and insanely unbelieveable

KaNg kOrRuPt - you had a good verse with some good punches and flow.

Best Line - It’s about time I slaughtered you like cattle
For a wise man it was pretty dumb to except this battle

Worst Line - And it’s sad to see bad emcee’s, that think they good on R.V
Battle me, and after postin get rattled cuz we straight G

OVERALL - this battle wasnt to bad but I gotta vote for jmsbnd07655. He had a better vocab and good punches. Kang you need to not say sorry to all your punches.. and add some personals.

Vote - jmsbnd07655

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^^^D/R^^^ lol naw just playin homie! ^^but are you serious man? i really think i won this one. oh well uppin for votes!!!!!! please vote honestly.

Voted For: jmsbnd07655

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww shit wat phat lines....damn mah fukazzzzzzzim layin down more than you can afford and im gettin you floored,
my metaphors, are unreadable, unspeakable
my vocabs scientifically dope and insanely unbelieveable
^^^^^the dopest line in agez man u kame hard wif punches and gud structure but krap flowz ddawg,,,,,,,,,,, cumon ............lacked the personalz though

kang cmon dawg ive seen u in action b4 u r betta than that shit dawg u lacked personals had ok flo but really didnt feel ur shit man.,,,,,,,,,, more personals

Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

nice drop man u deffinitely had him in this drop homie i came with way harder punches and he fell off in his rhymes u had better stuctuere and his lines were dragged out in places where they didnt need to be ur flow was superior too where his wasnt really there towards the end when his line swere like 2 in one i dont have that much breath to read that shyt and ur metas were good add some more in there but u know battle isnt about metas so u did a good job homie congratultions....

nice drop man u had complexity over him anyday his shyt was too simple to read but you got this one homie nice drop nice use of vocab and good structure and flow too u had him in all 3 categories in my opinion ur punches obviously hit harder too
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thanks uppin for somemore votes lets get this battle losed already

Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

Yo u was hot you came in strong and you ended strong. re pay the favor and and do a honest vote me and tight.HOLLA

Voted For: KaNg kOrRuPt

Aii I Gi9ve My Vote To Kang Korupt He Has jus A lil Much Betta wordplay And punchez And stuff But jmsbond did great except for at the end its like your punch was kinda weak compared to the rest of your punches but n e way......i give my vote to Kang Korupt
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