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.com vs The Disciple
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Follow em... 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Bitching Dont Underestimate. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-09-04 at 07:54 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
.com has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 05:36 PM.
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The Disciple:
i think i speak for this community, our unity reads ya rapture sieces. ya couldnt capture thesis within agression, most def. since ya rap for jesus. couldnt hold a spit, ya just a nun with dick. a prude disciple. rewrite ya belief as a judas bible, that way all ya christians are few and suicidal. its dumb & dumber how a jews his idol, ya soon be dropped like the culture lloyd. ya jewish servant. i aint white but i still admit, ya just a german's burden. ya black and white, ya suit n tie. ya punchlines weak, ya dont have style. your wack despite the new prewrites. face it, preachers dont freestyle. ya just a german's burden. id see you dead, but ya not worth the vision. this aint no worship serman, only way rv accepts you..is thru ya circumcision. |
ah i fucked it up.
the line after ...the culture lloyd. is spose to be...: ya think ya hot but ya not that gifted, some one adopt this alter boy. |
The Disciple has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 06:43 PM.
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Your Wackness-At-Nice! thought he had a skill to beat me so he Practiced It 'twice'.....
But Noone Even likes Com ..Cause Noones 'Reading Scripts' Like Actors on strike..... Flows-is-just-too-Text! 'and this kid's Scripts gonna be 'flowing alright' with his Bones on the Cruise-deck..... THis Whore is no new Threat! thanks for making me going on to my 25 win, hey Daddy! is my rec 'Older-than-you-Yet?' ..haha... Leave ya Javelin Crooked from a fucking Jab that'll turn ya abs into Babblin Mucus..... Then Shove ya Head up ya 'Ass' intell you can see my fucking 'Knuckles Travelin through it!!..... Shatter ya dome Tile! 'Cause com gettin W is mystery' like Madison Home Files..... You've Been on since oct? Your slow I even Managed to 'Master ya own Style!..... disciple stays 'Murderous each bar'!!! so why u mergin with me for?..... i extract ya 'lungs with caps' and turn ya 'vocal sytem into a PERSONAL KEYBOARD!!..... |
uppin this shit............................
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uppin for some votes...........................
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uppin for some votes here..................
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Voted For: The Disciple
Alright. Deciple won it. Both of you have styles that are flowing pretty well, so it was an easy battle to read. Infact skillwise, you both were the same. So I voted on punches. Which to tell the truth, I thought deciples hit harder. .com your stuff was good, but it was focusing all on religion.. There were some disses that sort of seemed more aimed at bringing religion down instead of your oponent. Whereas in the deciples verse, he stayed dissing his oponent with his punches. Thats how he won this. No hate, just truth. |
uppin for some more fucking votes............
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This was feedback posted for .com
.com had better vocab and punches lol flow was better to he will KO the disciple...
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no ofense but trigga you lost dawg...i would of voted for .com... no hate but you lost man...but i aint votin cuz i aint wanna
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This was feedback posted for .com
type of gay verse was that...lmao..................
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Voted For: The Disciple
The disciple Flows-is-just-too-Text! 'and this kid's Scripts gonna be 'flowing alright' with his Bones on the Cruise-deck..... THis Whore is no new Threat! thanks for making me going on to my 25 win, hey Daddy! is my rec 'Older-than-you-Yet?' ..haha... <That line killed him...HaHa Nice wordplay and punch .com i think i speak for this community, our unity reads ya rapture sieces. ya couldnt capture thesis within agression, most def. since ya rap for jesus. <<Nice but still man keep elevatin... Wordplay: D Multis:D LMAO factor: D V/ d |
Uppin this battle for these cats
Hey guys return the favor on my battles if u would...Just peep it honestly.... -Wreckage- |
uppin for more votes.......................
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This was feedback posted for .com
Woah For A Newb.. Your Pretty Good....
I'd Voet But I'm Too Lazy |
uppin for somemore fucking votes here........
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Voted For: The Disciple
aiight here's the breakdown. Disciple, nice verse, man. Although that boldin' the shit, gets fuckin' annoyin'. lol But punches were pretty nice. I loved yo closer. Tight shit. Keyboatd, weerd. Your flow was pretty nice too. But I felt it went off in a FEW spots. Not bad though. tight verse. .com, you remind me of someone, don't kno who. But anyways, your structure was much better than TD's. But yo punches didn't hit as hard as his did in my opinion. They were aiight, but some really didn't hit that hard. Flow was nice though. Bout the same wit TD's. nice verse Overall, though, I think TD took it. It was close, but punches outweighed it. pc |
uppin for fucking votes in this bitch..............
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This was feedback posted for .com
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm alias...................................?
not here for voting................ |
uppin for fucking votes...damn.............
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uppin for more fucking votes...come on people........
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holy shit...someone fucking vote.....
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uppin for more fucking votes in this unactive site......
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OMFG.....someone for on this damn battle......uppin.. |
Voted For: The Disciple
nice verse disciple you had good personals and i liked your verse very much... opener:disciple closure disciple multies:disciple punches: disciple personals: .com flow:.com Structure: disciple ok nice battle .com you had good personals but disciples multies murked you now hate... return the favour links in the sig... peace! |
Voted For: The Disciple
Wow...I see why he calls himself The Disciple...It looks like he had the fuckin power of God in this verse...shit was holy...HOLY SHIT!! Disciple came with the metas, the punches, the flow, the punches, the wordplay, and the punches...YOU KILLED IT DAWG...not a wack line in ya whole verse....com your verse was aight, but you need to come up with more punches and not say the same thing over and over again (you kept talkin about the name Disciple)...and to be honest, ya verse wasnt that hard...it flowed well, which is a plus, but it lacked what battles need the most...the punches...so just keep at it and elevate...no hate dawg so dont get nuthin twisted aight? But my vote goes to Disciple...We're not worthy!!! |
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