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Ill-Grammatix 10-09-04 05:21 PM

Ill-Grammatix vs Spektikul
 
Battle Rules:

Your rules:

UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
1 day to check in
15 minutes to drop

My rules:

No comments about the battle after the posts...uppin only...
anything other than an up will constitute swaying and one vote will be deducted from you

explained votes only : who one and why... in detail... all other votes will be dq'd

no beef afterwards...it's just the net

As you can see, I care little about the rules except for herb votes and swaying...Most of these are your rules... make it worthwhile since you were the one talking trash... all I wanted was a battle

GL and shyt, no hard feelings afterwards

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-10-04 at 05:21 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 10-09-04 06:27 PM

Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 06:27 PM.

Spektikul 10-09-04 06:28 PM

BTW...If you read MY rules in bitch slapped...it said 10 lines...no more, no less...you made a miostake in the official rules but you should already know to follow what we agreed on so I will be only expecting 10 lines from, each of us...otherwise its DQ'ed.

Spektikul 10-09-04 06:32 PM

Your actin like your "fresh"...when really your rhymes are "stale"
Been "dropped" on this site so much, Ima start callin you "air-male" (mail)
Said you need to find a vaccine, battling me, a choice well chosen
But you ain't got no "flow", your like a "river".. when its frozen
Maybe you could start paying for wins....but then you'd be in debt
Only way "grammatix" could be "ill"....if he threw up the alphabet
If I was to call you "phat", liposuction would be your best attack
Like old Batman shows, your punches are like "boom".."pow".."WACK"
I accepted your callout, waited almost 24 hours..your sure hot son
Your skills are like you tryna get lucky on a date..you "got none"

Ill-Grammatix 10-09-04 07:44 PM

cool...i'm dropping right now aiight?

System 10-09-04 07:45 PM

Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 07:45 PM.

Ill-Grammatix 10-09-04 07:52 PM

it's incredible that spektikul thinks he can test-da-flow
with pathetic edible lines actin' like he "respect-da-bull" (respectable)
ya steppin' to hungry kats and you looking delectable
17-4? ... It's time to knock ya off ya pedestal
split ya in half, disect ya, leave ya like a vegetable
discredit ya noobie battles til ya try a vet-or-2
you'll prolly say some shyt about me being 8-5
but i'm battling real contenders while ya shyt is based on lies
chain sizzle, big gz, sindrome, perplex and lil rip?
they 14-31... so how you thinking you the shyt?!!

Ill-Grammatix 10-09-04 08:11 PM

iggidy up...lol

Spektikul 10-09-04 11:43 PM

Upping on this...GL ill...

Ill-Grammatix 10-10-04 05:39 AM

Word...GL, yo... uppin again.... let's get the voting started y'all

Ill-Grammatix 10-10-04 04:01 PM

50 views and no votes?...damn, y'all kats is foul! this shyt coulda been over...holla back... both will return the favor... leave links

Spektikul 10-11-04 12:38 AM

Uppin this battle for some honest votes ya'll...lets gett'em started...

big GZ 10-11-04 02:18 AM

Voted For: Spektikul

this battle easily goes to an Spektikul...
your flow was good...your structure was good...i like your punchlines (they had me laughing)...and most importantly you were focused on eating this dude alive.

as for ILL-Grammatix...your verse was aight...nothing stood out...u need to be more focused...it seemed as if you were trying to hard to make all of your bars rhyme...next time just focus on meta4's and punchlines becuz that is wut wins battles.

A little word of advice: if you're one of those emcees that take long as shit to write a verse (according to Spektikul), make sure it was worth the time.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Spektikul 10-11-04 01:45 PM

Uppin this again for more honest votes............

Spektikul 10-12-04 04:38 AM

Uppin ya'll, damn...back to 0-0 for fuck sake when it shoulda been over, come on ya'll me an Ill will return honest votes...lets get crackin...

Ill-Grammatix 10-12-04 12:12 PM

uppin for honest votes...where's the luv y'all? spek's right, too much time gone by for this to still be open... leave links and we'll hit y'all up on y'all battles

Ill-Grammatix 10-12-04 08:23 PM

uppin 4 honest votes

Adam 10-12-04 11:40 PM

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 
checkin the polls.................................

Hitchcock 10-13-04 01:30 AM

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

nice drop grammatix i think u take this battle easily. Ur structure was on point and ur punches n wordplay were pretty nice n everything just flowed pretty well. Spektikul's verse was ok but some of his punches didnt hit hard enuff to counter Grammatix's use of multies so thats how it goes down.
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154456

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Ill-Grammatix 10-13-04 08:59 AM

up.....................

Ill-Grammatix 10-14-04 03:55 PM

holy shyt!!! 4 days and no votes? y'all gonna need my vote one day... drop an honest one here and leave links... me and spek will definitely hit 'em up!

Spektikul 10-17-04 02:31 AM

just ridiculas...still waiting on votes ya'll, g's...lets see some honest voting and explained feedback please...payce..

Ill-Grammatix 10-17-04 03:43 AM

can we get some honest votes here... we been waiting forever... shyt's crazy... not one vote for either one of us?

K.ontroverz.Y 10-17-04 09:47 AM

Voted For: Spektikul

aiight this was a decent battle

spektikul Your punches was pretty dope...you could of worded it around to make em hit harder but its still dope...your flow was decent your structure was good i was feelin it...your vocab was decent...wordplay is good....best line:

Maybe you could start paying for wins....but then you'd be in debt
Only way "grammatix" could be "ill"....if he threw up the alphabet

nice shit

ill grammatix

im sorry fam but this wasnt that good...your flow and structure messed you up..your puncheswas hard i was feelin em......your vocab was pretty bad your wordplay was ok...personals....didnt see any...

best line:

ya steppin' to hungry kats and you looking delectable
17-4? ... It's time to knock ya off ya pedestal
split ya in half, disect ya, leave ya like a vegetable
discredit ya noobie battles til ya try a vet-or-2

For$akeN 10-17-04 10:15 AM

This was feedback posted for Ill-Grammatix
 
blaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo:)......... ..

Ill-Grammatix 10-17-04 06:41 PM

thx for feedback kon....uppin this again.................

...Apocalyptic Soul... 10-18-04 08:51 PM

This was feedback posted for Ill-Grammatix
 
f.saken alias nuff said can't vote i want money:).

Ill-Grammatix 10-20-04 07:36 AM

lmao... shyt man, wus ya account #... get a job, fucker!....lmao

Spektikul 10-21-04 04:38 AM

Upping once again.... *sighhhh* where are all the voters????

TuNiT 10-22-04 07:23 AM

Voted For: Spektikul

diz wuz a close battle
both came hard as hell

ill, i think yuh flow wuz sickenening, connection of bars wuz nice, da puns n personals were okay, could have been harder, but u'll find diz a real close battle, maybe a 5-4 or sumthin, but my vote goes too spektikul
cause............
his verse had me wantin 2 carry on readin it, multies, metas, puns, personals, it had everythin, da verse wuz nice
da battle wuz dope
an g'luck 2 da both of yall cuz diz battle wuz siiiiiiiiiiiiick

Ill-Grammatix 10-22-04 11:50 AM

good looking out T... i just want this shyt closed out... it's been over a month... one

Dirty Nigga 10-26-04 03:03 PM

Voted For: Spektikul

aight spektiul got this.....

yo ill....
t's incredible that spektikul thinks he can test-da-flow
with pathetic edible lines actin' like he "respect-da-bull" (respectable)
ya steppin' to hungry kats and you looking delectable
17-4? ... It's time to knock ya off ya pedestal
split ya in half, disect ya, leave ya like a vegetable
discredit ya noobie battles til ya try a vet-or-2
^^^^^^^^^
hot ass punches, hot ass disses, nice flow an wordplay..

you'll prolly say some shyt about me being 8-5
but i'm battling real contenders while ya shyt is based on lies
chain sizzle, big gz, sindrome, perplex and lil rip?
they 14-31... so how you thinking you the shyt?!!
^^^
they wasnt so great..
could have used the finisher alot more effectively, ya wordplay let you down in those bars......

Your actin like your "fresh"...when really your rhymes are "stale"
Been "dropped" on this site so much, Ima start callin you "air-male"
^^^
wasnt feelin that bar, feels like te second line was a lil forced..

Said you need to find a vaccine, battling me, a choice well chosen
But you ain't got no "flow", your like a "river".. when its frozen
^^^
the punch was hell anice, but the line leadin up to the punch could have been more effective..

Only way "grammatix" could be "ill"....if he threw up the alphabet
If I was to call you "phat", liposuction would be your best attack
^^^^^
thats nice, thats nice...hella decent wordplay n punch

Like old Batman shows, your punches are like "boom".."pow".."WACK"
I accepted your callout, waited almost 24 hours..your sure hot son
Your skills are like you tryna get lucky on a date..you "got none"
^^^
batman line was nice, wasnt feelin the your hot son line, but the finisher made up for that...

overrall, Ill'z last 4 lines left him down, rest of the flow was decent, but for overrall content an consistency spektikul got this.....
few lines wernt effective, but they were mainyl the lines leadin to the punch, an the punch usually hit its mark, so spek got my vote

could yall return the favor in the sig?
peace

Spektikul 10-28-04 02:11 AM

Yo I really appreciate the explained feed dawg, ima drop an hounest vote on a battle in your sig asap, payce, uppin to close this thing already ya'll...

Re~Verb 10-31-04 02:29 PM

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 
wow.
spektikul ripped it.
the batman line was dope....
couple others hot too.
noice spit son

Spektikul 11-02-04 03:38 AM

Upping on this thing again ya'll, end it already, honest votes, payce.

LIL'DREW 11-02-04 09:02 PM

Voted For: Spektikul

spektikul took it...

multies: no1
Wordplay: spektikal
flow: spektikal
punches: spektikal
structure: spektikal

ill-grammatix: weak man...super basic...elavate and u'll do well though...

spektikal:

"Like old batman shows, ur punches are like boom..pow..WACK"

LMAO^^^ that is a classic line

nice flow and structure...betta punches...betta wordplay...

Spektikul 11-03-04 12:24 PM

Uppin.............................................

Spektikul 11-06-04 03:20 AM

Uppin.............................................

Spektikul 11-06-04 12:51 PM

Uppin.............................................

Delicious_Muffin 11-06-04 01:12 PM

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 
Spekitkul nice beat, nice flow..i added quick beat went real nice, you got some good hsit GL


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