Emcee vs oreo
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-13-04 at 02:56 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 02:57 AM.

Emcee has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 02:59 AM.

aight this my verse, hail the unedible oreo

you must be scared of hieght cuz you caint get on my level,
noone could dig you dog if they read this battle with a shovel,
words dont hurt me, stick and stone caint break me,
you got the mind of a burner? naw you still on saftey,
we knew you were on line by your shiityflow aroma,
lyrically my punches will leave you in a lifetime coma,
caint even post a battle man, you lost already,
leaving Textual nightmares on your street like my name was freddy,
you an emcee yet all your shit you spit is irrelevent,
part of a.i. of course cuz your nothing but artificail intellegence,

man is you gonna drop afta all that complaining, probally aint worth me battling, shit you caint evn set one up!!!

Voted For: Emcee

Emcee - good spit man, a nice tight flow.. and punches hitten hard.

Best Line - Like Kerosine, ya Burned-Quick! Expect ya Heart-Soon-Shattered
Like Sewin'-Letterz-From-Bookz, ya L'z-Got-A-Pattern
Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There
My Verbal Anticts, Putting Lyrical Stress On Ya Heart, Verbal Attack
Cerebal Extract,Oreo Sucks Dick, Now Put A Sticky Thread On Dat

Worst Line - NONE

Oreo - good spit man, flow was a lil off, punches were on tho.

Best Line - you an emcee yet all your shit you spit is irrelevent,
part of a.i. of course cuz your nothing but artificail intellegence,

Worst Line - you must be scared of hieght cuz you caint get on my level,
noone could dig you dog if they read this battle with a shovel,

OVERALL - good battle, but I was fellin Emcee more, he had a better flow.. and his punches were alot better. Oreo you came wit some good shit, just work on the punches and on the flow a bit.

VOTE - Emcee

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^oh shut-up..sick & tired of newbs keep sayin that...

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uppin this.....

Voted For: Emcee

you must be scared of hieght cuz you caint get on my level,
noone could dig you dog if they read this battle with a shovel,
words dont hurt me, stick and stone caint break me,
you got the mind of a burner? naw you still on saftey,
we knew you were on line by your shiityflow aroma,
lyrically my punches will leave you in a lifetime coma,
caint even post a battle man, you lost already,
leaving Textual nightmares on your street like my name was freddy,
you an emcee yet all your shit you spit is irrelevent,
part of a.i. of course cuz your nothing but artificail intellegence,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE FLOW GOOD 'OK" PUNCHES NICE PERSONALS AT DA ENDIN


Like Kerosine, ya Burned-Quick! Expect ya Heart-Soon-Shattered
Like Sewin'-Letterz-From-Bookz, ya L'z-Got-A-Pattern
Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There
My Verbal Anticts, Putting Lyrical Stress On Ya Heart, Verbal Attack
Cerebal Extract,Oreo Sucks Dick, Now Put A Sticky Thread On Dat
^^^^^^^^^^ WHOA NICE VERSE HERE HARDER PUNCHES GOOD WORDPLAYS,,,,,,,,,NICE FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD

V-EMCEE CAUSE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES

OREO-U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE FLOW GOOD PERSONALS 'OK" PUNCHES BUT IT WASNT REALLY HITTIN IT THOUGH BUT NICE VERSE KEEP IT UP

EMCEE-NICE MAYNE U HAD GOOD DECENT HARDER PUNCHES AND NICE FLOW GOOD WORDPLAYS NICE MULTI'Z

V-EMCEE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES

~PEACE~

wat the fuck? he said the same exact shit in my other battle man

dont whine mayn.....

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This was feedback posted for Emcee
 

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Voted For: Emcee

you merked this foo

emcee: you had dope vocab and wordplay..your punches hit hard...good flow and structure....dont like the font though but its still dope...overall this shit was nice youve elevated alot

oreo: your shits too basic dawg..bad structure ok punches..no personals..no wordplay...you'll get better fam..

can ya say d/r, and hat bk vote shoulnt count, he is in my crew

uppin..........

Voted For: Emcee

whoa emcee took diz hands down
much more complex verse an da structure wuz way bettr
da flow n puns were hot

oreo ya came weak, ya need elevation
ya finisher wuz horrible oreo an ya vocab was weak no offence

This was feedback posted for oreo
 

checking polls,

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Voted For: Emcee

wow!!! emcee MURDERED you dawg...wayyy better wordplay, and better punches...he also had better mutlies in there. near the end, his lines started to stretch, but he fit everythin he had to say in a quick 3 bar/6 line battle, and i like that, not too much reading
oreo- had some nice shit in there, but on the first 2 bars, i think it was over for you, no contest. this was a one sided battle to me...good shit


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