Notorious Verses vs MC Rabbit
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-10-04 at 11:36 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 11:08 AM.

MC RaBbIt has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 11:15 AM.

aite mc rabbit u finally checkin, wat a good sign, LMFAO. now lets do dis battle and get it ova wit

Dawg My Lyrics Has Been Revised, Criticized Like Da Insides Of A Killa's Eyes
Stay Cold In Da Mind Like Niggaz Dat Terrorize, Remain Restrained And Victomize
My Flow Sticks To Ur Dome Like Styrafoam, And Leave Virgins Free To Bone
My Thoughts Are Clearly Spoken Out, While U Always Give Closin Statements Like Funeral Homes
My Punches Hit U Lethally, Viciouslly Leave U Breathin Heavily Like Wen U Do Extra Activities
My Hits Leave Ur Lyrics Filled In Like "Cavaties"
Some Rappers Neva Learn, Think Dey Fully Developed And Fully Grown
U A Perfect Example Of Dat, Except Ur Shit Is Fake Like Silicone
I Aint Da Greatest Rapper On Da Site, So Y U B Flinchin G
Its Cuz My Click Is Like A Camera, I Snap And It Produces Instantly
Rappers And Mc's Noe To Respect Me, Unless They Wanna B Violated
Me Beatin Dis Nigga In A Rap Battle Is Highly Anticipated
I Break Ur Structure, Understand Its Body Parts I Rupture
U A Lonely Rabbit So I Get Babs Bunny To Fuck Ya
Im Now Introducin Da Conclusion, To Dis Beatin Im Producin
U Cant Withstand Da Blows, Dats Y U Loosin, Cuz U Copy And Still Make Doe Like Owners Of Bootleg Music!!!!!!1

aite dats my verse, i noe da structure is a little off, but ill work on dat, ok mc faggot lets see ur verse already

actually my structure was on point, nuttin was wrong wit it, aite come on rabbit

This herb callin everyone out, but only battling the newest MC’s in the game,
You can’t even use punches, so I could beat you,
……………………………….............. .......................... without even having to aim,
You say claim that “greatness can’t be taught”, well, certainly not to you,
Coz to every battle you go to, people read ya verse,
……………………………….............. ..............................and think it’s your debut,
How the fuck did you get a positive record? You don’t know how to use a multi,
If you were for sale, people would go to the till and say,
……………………………….............. ....................................is this item faulty?*
You’re going to leave after battling me, and I’ll get a medal for behaviour,
I’ll go into legends, for keeping RV standards up,
……………………………….............. .........................I’ll be named RV’s saviour,**
You so dumb, you try a punch, drop it, then realise it was directed at yourself,
If skill level was placed in height, I’d be top,
……………………………….............. ................and you would be on bottom shelf,
Well since you seem to want to hit back at yourself, it seems you like the idea of suicide,
So I’ma leave you with this,
………………………………..and you’ll wish you didn’t say shit to me, and we wouldn’t collide.


Just in case you hadn’t worked some of these lines out…….

*as in if he was an electrical item or something, people would think he is faulty

**saying that I’m going to be named a legend for making him leave from embarrassment.

well at least you find yaself funny..........uppin for votes

This was feedback posted for Notorious Verses
 

WAcKNESs UR BOTH SO WACK as FUCK With No FloW How U Exspect to rhyem that IN REAL LIFE u wack bitches U SOUND LIKE NERDS

Voted For: Notorious Verses

NV - good spit man, your flow was on, and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - Dawg My Lyrics Has Been Revised, Criticized Like Da Insides Of A Killa's Eyes
Stay Cold In Da Mind Like Niggaz Dat Terrorize, Remain Restrained And Victomize

Worst Line - Some Rappers Neva Learn, Think Dey Fully Developed And Fully Grown
U A Perfect Example Of Dat, Except Ur Shit Is Fake Like Silicone

MC - good spit, you had some good punches but your flow was a lil off.

Best Line - How the fuck did you get a positive record? You don’t know how to use a multi,
If you were for sale, people would go to the till and say,
……………………………….............. ........................ ............is this item faulty?*

Worst Line - Well since you seem to want to hit back at yourself, it seems you like the idea of suicide,
So I’ma leave you with this,
………………………………..and you’ll wish you didn’t say shit to me, and we wouldn’t collide.

OVERALL - good battle here, I have to give my vote to.. NV, I liked his flow better, and he had some good punches in there, both need to work on some personals. Good battle tho.

Vote - NV

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Voted For: MC RaBbIt

MC Rabbit gets my vote. Notorius, you need to elevate, battles are about punchlines, not just saying that you are going to cut someone up and throw their head in bag.
MC Rabbit, your punches were okay, nothing special, except for the behaviour/saviour line, try and make more witty punches and you'll be ill.

V/MC Rabbit

This was feedback posted for MC RaBbIt
 

My vote goes to N.S. he had multis and things. The oter guys structure was wack couldnt get the flow.

LMAO ^^^^ God damn, there is some herbs on RV. uppin.

uppin for votes..........................

This was feedback posted for MC RaBbIt
 

checkin tha polls.................................

Voted For: Notorious Verses

aiight i gotta go with Notorious on this battle he had some good vocab flow came harder metas and a decent structure its was a good flow

Mc rabbit some of ya stuff wasnt workin cuzz whats tha ........................................... for mayn??? so here it go

structure-Notorious
vocab-Notorious
flow-Notorious
punches-Mc

uppin for votes on dis battle, come on people don sleep on dis battle

Voted For: Notorious Verses

okay i have to give my vote to---- notorious
Rabbit has a basic vocb with an iight word flow. Notorious has a good vocb. with an iight word flow and he also has better stucture too. I give notorious a 8/10 and rabbit a 6/10! Notorious could have done better and i've seen it to.

Voted For: Notorious Verses

structure:notorious
flow:notorious
vocab:notorious
punches:notorious
hunger:tie
verdict:the structure of rabbits was very bad, because i didn't understand it at all at first, which is very bad. I got it after close inspection, but it shouldn't take close inspection for me to get it, this was your downfall. Elevate, because i see potential

notorious-good flow, nice use of multi's, generally it wouldn't take much to win against him in this one, and this is no hate to you rabbit, but you came raw on this one, i really like it. But a problem was that you had great flow, just not great punches to match the flow. Put the two together, and your verses will be that much better.

Voted For: MC RaBbIt

rabbit wuz bettr den u verses he had tite punc lines and hiz flow and disses wuz tite i tink he beet u mane

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

Creativity - nice
Punches - strong, elusive
Metaphors- there
Flow- on point, I like
This is a one-sided-battle for the most part my mans came harder and better thats why he get the vote...

V/ NV, return the fav.