Socrates vs SPuL
 

Battle Rules:

30 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 10-13-04 at 04:06 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

ill be ready whenever you are...
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Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 10:48 PM.

Nah fuck this prewriting bitch gotta wait till Wednesday just cause your in Canada? sorry ho, that doesnt make sense. Get sonned.

First off, SPuL aint spit a hot line in so long
And now the bitch is gassed, thats just an oxymoron
jumbo shrimp for a dick, never gunna be fuckin
Most girls would mistake it for a really low belly button
you are shit to me, something mist be wrong in your skull
so here goes nothing bitch.........................SPuL
man im better and thats how it will always be duke
of course my verse is whack man, its all about you!
and youve been banned already, dont forget that b
wanna joke around with you but youll use it against me!
for real SPuL bites so much youd figure hed be full for days
Iight ill put away the jokes, i dont need personals anyways
fuck ill be even nicer in my lyrics, prolly wont even curse
his name in my lines is the closest he ever gets to a freakin dope verse
come on all, watch SPuL get his ass beat, everyones invited
but please dont say i fucked him, he might get a little excited
plus im sorry for calling you nothing, i must have mistaked shit
Cuz you ARE challenging according to your coach for the special olympics
god damn contradictory bitch really you fuckin dummy quit
wanna have beef but still have me on your buddy list
nobody likes your whack lines so ill be the one to stop it
bitch you couldnt CURRY a tune with a vase on your noggin
Dont know SPuL? heres a quick bio: everybody fuckin hates him
While others continue to raise the bar, he continues to take them
of course you dont have ghostwriters, too good for help
youre dope as fuck man......oh sorry for talking to myself :rolleyes:
feel sad for your grandpa? fuck ill leave you in worse health
say you put my L'S uP? nah thats just you twisting yourself
man i wanna finish you off for real so just gimme some time
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Damn SPuL you sure are quick with jacking my tight lines^^^

*Socrates drops the mic and bitchslaps SPuL*

Goodbye. :)

aiight, so I guess you dropped yo verse, cuz it says you checked in. and NO I can't see yo verse. So fuck off wit that feeding shit. But yea, when I get back tommorow, night I'll start writing. pc

oh yea, try to refrain from using a ghostwriter....looch told me bout that :thumbup:

nah, I don't do that shit. Don't kno what the kids problem is. But yea, he ain't votin' though, like he did last time. :thumbup:

fine. just quit talking and drop, i wanna see if you can match me :)

*looks at time and scratches nutsack*

you can drop sometime soon, dont no-show, if u do im using the same verse :)

SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 11:00 AM.

Voted For: SPuL

Well a long ass battle needs a long ass vote...so here it goes...

Socrates...um i wasn't feelin ur verse overall ya know infact i seen both spit b4 and ya both coulda came better but anyways...sum lines were a lil sefl-glory in places but some seemed like filler jus makin up the numbers and ur flow was off a lil u need to work on that it did fall off in a few places but u did have sum aight punches u mainly used personals which were used effectively...structure, flow and consistancy is all i say u could've improved on in this battle...

SPuL...definitely had him on flow and structure kept it aight...some punches weren't as strong as others but u looked more focused for this battle...the links u used in the verse was funny & also the pics helped understand the punches betta good lookin for that...overall i'd say it was a good verse but u have put out better before...

V/SPuL for more consistancy in his rhyme...RTF in ma sig

Voted For: SPuL

aiiiight
pretty close battle.....
lets analyze all this huh...
aight...

First off, SPuL aint spit a hot line in so long
And now the bitch is gassed, thats just an oxymoron
jumbo shrimp for a dick, never gunna be fuckin
Most girls would mistake it for a really low belly button
^^^
not the tightest opener or punches socrates..

you are shit to me, something mist be wrong in your skull
so here goes nothing bitch.........................SPuL
^^
pretty humouress 6/10

for real SPuL bites so much youd figure hed be full for days
Iight ill put away the jokes, i dont need personals anyways
^^^
pretty damn tight too, 8/10

Cuz you ARE challenging according to your coach for the special olympics
^^^
nice idea, but the usage of the olympics is just a lil played..

of course you dont have ghostwriters, too good for help
youre dope as fuck man......oh sorry for talking to myself
feel sad for your grandpa? fuck ill leave you in worse health
say you put my L'S uP? nah thats just you twisting yourself
man i wanna finish you off for real so just gimme some time
^^^
dope, dope, dope, very creative
8/10

overral verse....8.5/10

spul...........................

Prolly a verse full of bitin' shit, and really not much more
...Yea, I DO bite... but only at Empire's store
^^^
not a bad opener, 7/10

Your verse is so "soft", like it was "sealy" lit
Peep yo last verse, now who's the one who really bit?
Why use a ghostwriter, cuz ain't nobody here better than me
Fashos not you, compared to my "A", you're a letter "D"
^^^^
not really feelin them bars 5/10

Say I like to joke? I guess for you I'll boast love
You wanna see a joke?... Then look at the post above
^^^
real nice, very witty n humouress 9/10

You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
^^^
it was aight, it was aight 6.5/10

You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
^^^
hat off to them lines! hahahaha! humouress, witty, sarcastic, personal, a punch, 10/10, highlight of the battle right there..

He takes his "lil friend" and runs, cuz he knos that I shook them
Cuz his verse blows more times, than a hoe living in Brooklyn
^^
pretty tight, not as creative but it connected well...

Oh, no! It's Phantom on E-looch's dick. Shit, I better run!!!
Scrap that, it's only fruit head and V-Ice wit a water gun
^^^
LMFAOOOO, That was nice, the boy killed it! 9/10

Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity
^^^
haha, aight pretty decent, 7.5//10...

on the whole spul had the better verse, better structured, personals hit harder, both had witty humouress punches, but the opener an finisher from spul came harder

tight ass battle, yall keep em comin n return the fave

p e a c e

Voted For: SPuL

Prolly a verse full of bitin' shit, and really not much more
...Yea, I DO bite... but only at Empire's store
lol nice one
Your verse is so "soft", like it was "sealy" lit
Peep yo last verse, now who's the one who really bit?
lol another good one
Why use a ghostwriter, cuz ain't nobody here better than me
Fashos not you, compared to my "A", you're a letter "D"
good punch
Man, look at yo verse, you're "ass", you only spit "shit"
the only way you get yo wins, is wit yo newb-infested dick
good
I merked yo ass up, but you opened it up again
Pullin' a JT, "Cry Me a River", is yo only way to win
good
Say I like to joke? I guess for you I'll boast love
You wanna see a joke?... Then look at the post above
good
Got a "watermelon" for a head, and no brain, don't be deceived
Yea, you can spit good.... but only when usin' seeds
good
You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
lol...nice
To butt sex you are open, like the shirt of the lil kid
What you got a crush on me? Got my name repped in yo sig
good
You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
nice
Better rumble back to the jungle, he look like a chimpansee
Like windows on limousines... me~him~can't~see
lmao...
He takes his "lil friend" and runs, cuz he knos that I shook them
Cuz his verse blows more times, than a hoe living in Brooklyn
roflmao
We all kno you're a pussy, you're 1/4 my skill, only a quarter
When I come, you hold up more "flags", than the U.S.A boarder
good
Oh, no! It's Phantom on E-looch's dick. Shit, I better run!!!
Scrap that, it's only fruit head and V-Ice wit a water gun
good
Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity
lmao..

[overall:10/10



First off, SPuL aint spit a hot line in so long
And now the bitch is gassed, thats just an oxymoron
okay??
jumbo shrimp for a dick, never gunna be fuckin
Most girls would mistake it for a really low belly button
not there
you are shit to me, something mist be wrong in your skull
so here goes nothing bitch.........................SPuL
wtf...
man im better and thats how it will always be duke
of course my verse is whack man, its all about you!
okay i guess
and youve been banned already, dont forget that b
wanna joke around with you but youll use it against me!
could of been better
for real SPuL bites so much youd figure hed be full for days
Iight ill put away the jokes, i dont need personals anyways
okay
fuck ill be even nicer in my lyrics, prolly wont even curse
his name in my lines is the closest he ever gets to a freakin dope verse
good one
come on all, watch SPuL get his ass beat, everyones invited
but please dont say i fucked him, he might get a little excited
good
plus im sorry for calling you nothing, i must have mistaked shit
Cuz you ARE challenging according to your coach for the special olympics
aight
god damn contradictory bitch really you fuckin dummy quit
wanna have beef but still have me on your buddy list
okay
nobody likes your whack lines so ill be the one to stop it
bitch you couldnt CURRY a tune with a vase on your noggin
okay
Dont know SPuL? heres a quick bio: everybody fuckin hates him
While others continue to raise the bar, he continues to take them
not there
of course you dont have ghostwriters, too good for help
youre dope as fuck man......oh sorry for talking to myself
okay
feel sad for your grandpa? fuck ill leave you in worse health
say you put my L'S uP? nah thats just you twisting yourself
wasn't there
man i wanna finish you off for real so just gimme some time
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overall:9/10



v/spul

uppin' this shit. lol I noticed this kid be dissin' my granpa too. lol wow. upp...

how the fuck did i know he would vote?^^^lmfao. he had more creativity. ok thats it, i cant fucking take this herb ass site anymore. when you people see something that you dont think is "dope" or "good" or whatever, try reading it a couple times to see if you actually get the punch. obviously, you fags didnt. thats ok tho.

pz.

Voted For: Socrates

Vote - Socrates
Reason:
Spul came personal....and showed pictures.....but didnt have hardly any hard punches at all...and most of it seemed to be comments....nothing stood out...and your verse just seemed kinda meh......you didnt put good use to the concepts at hand....Socrates had better concepts and actually a couple nice ones with witty lines...therefore...he wins for harder punches.....

Vote- Socrates..

punches- socrates, had really funny ones..
personals- socrates, funny again with the ghostwriting..
creativity- socrates, talking to myself line, l's up, and all about you line.

vote- socrates..

pretty nyce battle, but in my opinion socrates came hard and was enough to get thru..with te win

why doesnt it count my vote?. .

^cuz you don't got 500 posts. and I kno you and Smoka are AIM buddies, Soc. But I don't care, I respect his vote. uppin' this

exactly why he voted, i dunno. i asked him to look at it and tell me who he thought won, i specifically told him not to vote, cuz i respect his opinion but i aint gunna sink to your level. after i told him i was losing, he wanted to vote, take that up with him, not me :)

Voted For: SPuL

personals spul he used pictures and links
creativeness spul phanton ur punches were pretty played and kinda corny lol
both could work on vocab
both had pretty good flow
spul needs to work on structure lol
overall good battle but spul came more creative and with more personals props to both

This was feedback posted for Socrates
 

you are shit to me, something mist be wrong in your skull
so here goes nothing bitch.........................SPuL
man im better and thats how it will always be duke
of course my verse is whack man, its all about you!
for real SPuL bites so much youd figure hed be full for days
Iight ill put away the jokes, i dont need personals anyways
Dont know SPuL? heres a quick bio: everybody fuckin hates him
While others continue to raise the bar, he continues to take them
feel sad for your grandpa? fuck ill leave you in worse health
say you put my L'S uP? nah thats just you twisting yourself

You had 5 bars that were ok-nice.

Vs Spuls 3 ok bars.
Which inturn gives you the win.

Kinda raised your game here not bad at all.

You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity

These were the 3 bars that Spul produced that were ok.
Not ground breaking..
You need to up your game a lot.

Not a bad battle tho.

-1

Voted For: Socrates

v. Socrates

A lot of it was played, but it was still kinda witty at parts... like the here goes nothing line, the raise the bar line, etc.

However, you kinda stayed on the same punch the whole way, a lot of your lines were blah.

Spul hasn't seemed to improve at all since I left. If anything, you've gotten worse. Your lines lacked wit, originality, nice personals, etc.

Voted For: SPuL

LMAO... both had dope verses.. it was a very close battle i would say.. but i think spul really stepped it up here.. he hasnt shown much lately.. but this battle he really came hard... good punches and personals.. phantom u came hard nice punches too.. but i think spuls punches hit harder.. both had good flow and structure.. but i gotta go with spul here he just edged it with his personals and punches.. good job to both.. no hate..