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Vango 10-10-04 09:47 PM

Vango vs Triple_N
 
Battle Rules:

12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding, im sure your bitch ass will have problems with this one

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 10-10-04 at 10:17 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

System 10-10-04 09:50 PM

Vango has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 09:50 PM.

System 10-10-04 09:50 PM

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 09:50 PM.

Vango 10-12-04 06:48 PM

I'm spitting flames on dames, while your dancing with Tha Q
Funny how your claiming Terror Squad, when they aint heard of you *
You fed off my verse last battle, so here's some encouragement
I won't be feeding off yours kid, cuz it provides no nourishment
Your a sacrificial offering, see I've figured out Triple N
You got No talent, No deal, and No chance to ever win
Your in denial kid, Triple your vocals ruin perfectly good tracks
I put you in the corner at Kinkos, just so you could face the fax (facts)
You got the wrong DNA to be a rapper, its just not in your genes
You can tell alot by where people live, didn't you say you were from Queens
That terror squad shit was funny, but time to wake up and realize
Your only chance of beating me in a battle, is if you plagiarize



*had cyber sex with Tha Q and claims he's got a deal with terror squad

dont get it, dont vote, explained votes only or they will be deleted.

Triple_N 10-12-04 06:52 PM

Ya punches could be "Alexander Graham Bell" an not fathem connection
You'd have an alergic seizure if talent was administered in injections
Ya punches complexity's like asians standin' under da bombs of hiroshima
Opposin' me wit those^^^^is dumber than registerin' a stolen beemer
Your verses A.D. concepts are so old I mistook them for hyroglyphics
Pharoah endured furious plagues...ya verses was killed by rabid crickets
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wants to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
Like a "deaf computer geek's cell phone" your a waste of valuable time
Nonexistent on RV...he wouldn't "matter" if he spit atoms in his rhymes
Give him a straitness test...like a "blind man" takin' a eye exam he'd fail
He's in denial, cuz like loyal fans of Dr.seuss books..he pays for "fairy-tail"

Triple_N 10-12-04 06:55 PM

Aye good drop vango...may the best man win...for those that don't get punches..I tried to make them as easy to understand as possible....u don't understand just pm me or something an I'll gladly explain.

Vango 10-14-04 03:08 PM

Uppin.............................................

Willa 10-14-04 05:29 PM

This was feedback posted for Vango
 
good battle to both of u both came hard both r good emcees

Terumoto 10-14-04 05:47 PM

Voted For: Triple_N

vango: nice verse. ya had some pretty nice punches in there. That line with the triple Ns was a good idea... But some werent as effective.. like the one about tha q.. HELLA played..
flow was fine.. i thought triple was in trouble on this one..

triple N: you came dope... mad original lines... ill opener.. shit had me laughin.. nice punches throughout... nuthin wrong with structure.. flow was fine.. wordplay and metas were nice.

v/triple

Artemis 10-14-04 06:06 PM

Voted For: Triple_N

Yo this was a very good battle. Enjoyed reading

Ya punches could be "Alexander Graham Bell" an not fathem connection
You'd have an alergic seizure if talent was administered in injections
decent wordplay. And nice punch[b/]

Ya punches complexity's like asians standin' under da bombs of hiroshima
Opposin' me wit those^^^^is dumber than registerin' a stolen beemer
[b]lol @ set-up. decent punch


Your verses A.D. concepts are so old I mistook them for hyroglyphics
Pharoah endured furious plagues...ya verses was killed by rabid crickets
tight set-up. nice punch
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wants to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
lol nice one set up too
Like a "deaf computer geek's cell phone" your a waste of valuable time
Nonexistent on RV...he wouldn't "matter" if he spit atoms in his rhymes
LOL nice set up. ILL Punch. best of match

Give him a straitness test...like a "blind man" takin' a eye exam he'd fail
He's in denial, cuz like loyal fans of Dr.seuss books..he pays for "fairy-tail"
Pretty good. decent wordplay

now to Vango:

I'm spitting flames on dames, while your dancing with Tha Q
Funny how your claiming Terror Squad, when they aint heard of you *
Decent, not that hard hittin'. But nice try
You fed off my verse last battle, so here's some encouragement
I won't be feeding off yours kid, cuz it provides no nourishment
personal. decnet punch

Your a sacrificial offering, see I've figured out Triple N
You got No talent, No deal, and No chance to ever win
played concpet. But it's still a nice punch

Your in denial kid, Triple your vocals ruin perfectly good tracks
I put you in the corner at Kinkos, just so you could face the fax (facts)
lol nice one. dope shit
You got the wrong DNA to be a rapper, its just not in your genes
You can tell alot by where people live, didn't you say you were from Queens
LOL nice one again.
That terror squad shit was funny, but time to wake up and realize
Your only chance of beating me in a battle, is if you plagiarize
decent

Flow wise, Vango took this shit. But other than that it was all triple. Triple had vocab and punches. plus, Triple actually had punches in his set-up. Ill battle. (might contend wit me and Socrates for battle of month :D) props to both. pc

Cocaine 10-14-04 10:34 PM

Voted For: Triple_N

hm.. triple n came with more complexity and wordplay.. both were about even on flow and structure.. punches was prety close but i think triple edged it out... vango had some nice punches tho too... good personals from vango as well.. this was a real nice battle i enjoyed reading it... no hate to either of you.. u both came pretty hard on this.. but i think i was just feeling triples verse more.. he had more complexity and wordplay like i stated about so now hate to either.. good job by both i just gotta vote triple pz..

Triple_N 10-15-04 12:54 PM

Uppin this>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

FlowIntelligent. 10-15-04 05:40 PM

Voted For: Vango

Vango:

I'm spitting flames on dames, while your dancing with Tha Q
Funny how your claiming Terror Squad, when they aint heard of you *
^^ ooh fire right there hott ass opener 9/10
You fed off my verse last battle, so here's some encouragement
I won't be feeding off yours kid, cuz it provides no nourishment
^^good consistency... nice punch 7/10
Your a sacrificial offering, see I've figured out Triple N
You got No talent, No deal, and No chance to ever win
^^hott name play decent punch overall 7/10
Your in denial kid, Triple your vocals ruin perfectly good tracks
I put you in the corner at Kinkos, just so you could face the fax (facts)
^^played concept 5/10
You got the wrong DNA to be a rapper, its just not in your genes
You can tell alot by where people live, didn't you say you were from Queens
^^decent punch nice meta 6/10
That terror squad shit was funny, but time to wake up and realize
Your only chance of beating me in a battle, is if you plagiarize
^^good closer nice punch 7/10

overall: 41/60

triple n:

Ya punches could be "Alexander Graham Bell" an not fathem connection
You'd have an alergic seizure if talent was administered in injections
^^ haha nice meta good punch 7/10
Ya punches complexity's like asians standin' under da bombs of hiroshima
Opposin' me wit those^^^^is dumber than registerin' a stolen beemer
^^ yea thats pretty stupid as was this bar 4/10
Your verses A.D. concepts are so old I mistook them for hyroglyphics
Pharoah endured furious plagues...ya verses was killed by rabid crickets
^^ehhh decent 5/10
He lacks crudentials but like "puerto rico" wants to be on the map
Frustrated by inabilities..like "handless giftship workers" he can't wrap(rap)
^^ dont like the set up 6/10
Like a "deaf computer geek's cell phone" your a waste of valuable time
Nonexistent on RV...he wouldn't "matter" if he spit atoms in his rhymes
^^ too many meta's doesnt help your verse wack bar 3/10
Give him a straitness test...like a "blind man" takin' a eye exam he'd fail
He's in denial, cuz like loyal fans of Dr.seuss books..he pays for "fairy-tail"
^^ i liked the fairy tail part but everything else was pretty wack 3/10

overall : 28/60

i was really surprised about how wack triple n's verse was... i expected more but u didnt come hard enough and i guess u underestimated your opponent because vango ate your verse up

Logic The Goonie 10-15-04 08:18 PM

Voted For: Vango

vango-nah. weak punches and that kinda triple n wordplay is sooooooooooo played. personals were iffy. wordplay was weak, and stop explaining shit for christs sake.

triple n-ehh ive seen much better. punches were ehh, personals unfortuneately were gone, wordplay iffy, stop usiong " "'s dammit!:cussing: but some lines were almost there i think trying too hard fucked you up.

V/Vango
because i felt his verse was ever so slightly better because it had personals and the fax line was almost witty.

pz.

atti? 10-16-04 03:10 PM

Voted For: Vango

This Was A Pretty Crazy Battle Right Here...
Let Me Break Shit Down Alittle For You...
Overall:Vang
Flow:Vang
Creativity: Tie
Punches: Vang
Wordplay: Tripple
Personal Favorite: Vang

This Battle Was Pretty Tite...
But I Couldnt Get Over How Vangs Punches And Shit Just Flowed Almost Perfectyl One Into Another...
Tripples Were Good But Were Just Alittle More Akward At Times...
Nice Battle Though...
.One.

BIGPAPPA76 10-16-04 03:40 PM

Voted For: Triple_N

aight this was a TIGT battle... both of yall came hard as fuck!!! first off i wanna say to vango that that shit with the three big "N's" to make "tripple N" was tight as fuck, i liked that... aight this is how i saw this battle, both of yall came hard as hell with everything. flow was on lock and this is a tough ass battle to judge...

Tripple N is gonna take this one due to the fact that his punches/personals hit a lil harder than those thrown by Vango... both of yall came out real fuckin hard in this shit and props to yall.. this is my BREAKDOWN!

Multis-Vango
Structure- both
Flow- both
Punches-Tripple N
Personals- Tripple N
wordplay- Tripple N

this battle was one of the best ive seen in a while and i wanna give mad props to both of yall on this one but in my book Tripple N takes this one... it came down to punches and personals and Tripple Ns just hit harder than those thrown by vango... NO HATE tho vango, your shit was tight to hommie, like i said... this one was a hard one to judge....

good fuckin battle yall!!!!

VOTE- TRIPPLE N

-EXPLICIT- 10-16-04 04:43 PM

Voted For: Triple_N

NNN -

Bar 1 - pretty dope..liked the wordplay.. and the talent like was pretty dope.. 8/10
Bar 2 - not bad.. not as good as the opener.. but it was consistant.. 7/10
Bar 3 - Not bad punch.. and still consistant with the other 2 bars.. 6/10
Bar 4 - alright wordplay in the line.. and pretty good first line.. 7/10
Bar 5 - Not bad wordplay.. the first line was akward.. but the second was nice.. 7/10
Bar 6 - Not bad closer.. the first line wasnt that good of wordplay.. but it was alright.. 7/10

Total - 42/60

Vango -

Bar 1 - Not bad.. good opener.. id give it an 8/10
Bar 2 - not bad.. lil wordplay in there.. 7/10
Bar 3 - Once again not bad.. though i wasnt feelin it that much.. 5/10
Bar 4 - Not bad.. .though NNN isnt that bad at audio.. the kinkos line was aight.. 6/10
Bar 5 - haha.. if u dont get the w/p here its not bad.. callin him a queen i think.. 7/10
Bar 6 - the last line was a bit played.. ive seen it in all different forms.. "bit, used someone elses lines, etc".. could have been better.. 6 /10

TOTAL 39/60

Overall vote.. NNN.. peace..


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