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schema vs ~{ExClusive}~
Battle Rules:
6-10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/R No Hate Votes Explain Your Votes or dont vote...Good luck schema 30 min after check schema wanted yall to know that he aint just battlin me for his record to up i baged to battle him pretty much...heres the link: http://community.rapverse.com/priva...wpm&pmid=297714 and dont think im pre writen cuz i aint... Minimum posts to vote: 450 Check in by: 10-13-04 at 11:50 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
~{ExClusive}~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 11:51 PM.
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Schema, you walk around sayin shit, which makes you sound retarded… Your verses come-out wack, they smells like you have just farted… This shit has just began, what were you thinkin I need elevation-still… You cant rap all you have is nerd ability’s and animation-skill… This cat plays everyone for a fool that acts like a gay faggot… After im threw with him he’ll be crushed into 3 pieces of a maggot… Stop preppin shit cause after me you gonna need a baby’s bandage… You’ll be loose on a stick like a fat man and his lovely sausage… You might have enjoyed yourself before this battle, full with satisfaction… This shits over I played you like Mohammad Ally and his fast reaction… |
are you gonna spit dawg like schema dont duck me...i wanna prove how much better ive gotten against a vet so hit this battle up...come on
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schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 05:43 PM.
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youre exclusively and independently wack...when your pen hit the pad...
its like "damn rv's wack...wheres the ill text heads really at?"... you have absolutely nothing to offer...im embarrassed to know you... whenever empire talks you there repeating him like parrot vocals... get off his dick herb...in all those pm's beggin to get served... im just posting some bullshit up so i can laugh at ya shit verse... battle me? pack your bags and dip first...im merkin lames... you beatin me is like a cardboard box beatin a hurricane... now get the fuck outta here kid before i stuff your ass in a locker... wanna prove yourself against a vet? go punch an animal doctor.. |
This was feedback posted for schema
Just checkin the battle good job old fam... all i know is it was close in my opinion... hahah this line was funny: You’ll be loose on a stick like a fat man and his lovely sausage…
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^word...ya im not sure eather schema didnt try or i got fuckin way better...
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This was feedback posted for schema
Checking the polll............................................. .
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why dosent someone fuckin vote....................
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I was About TO Vote But I Would've Voted For Scema... But I Figured.... Nah...
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^lmao...yerrrrrrr stoooooooned....................
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This was feedback posted for ~{ExClusive}~
Yo Im Just Checkin The Poll For Crew Reasons Aight
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Voted For: schema
props to both battlist, but here's the verdict. flow:schema vocab:xclusive punches:schema seriousness:schema hunger:schema verdict: Xclusive, i wouldn't necessarily say you had less hunger, but there was something called effort that i think schema put forth more of in his verse. But in terms of hunger i think you both were fairly close. But unfortunately, you lacked the skill on this one. Bandage does not rhyme with sausage. This fact also led me to believe that you weren't that hungry for it. Because just saying the line, out loud you and i both know that the two words don't rhyme. But i commend you on your try. As every person does, no matter how ill you are, you need elevation. Just a lot right now, keep at it. schema-had superior flow, very much enjoyed reading this one. Unfortunately i heard schema was dead, is this true? but what got this one is superior flow, and the constant punches. the closer was great as well, winning you this battle. wanna prove yourself against a vet? go punch an animal doctor.. |
Voted For: schema
Ok, by now everyone should know I always drop explained votes and all this, but I'm not in the mood for lengthy typing tonite, so I'ma just give it to you straight. Schema won. Xclusive your opener was weak (fart lines are below where you should be at skillwise) and the "maggot" line just didn't make any sense. Good structure and rhyme style, so I can't complain there. Schema, you came with some good lines, even though they didn't really serve as punches. But you made up for it with the last 4 lines. The concept of a "cardboard box fighting a hurricaine" seemed so simple to me that I woulda never even thought it up, but you made it work. And then the closer just made me laugh, 'nuff said. V//schema Return an honest, explained vote to the link in my sig, 'preciate it... |
lmao, sorry i just saw somebody with r.i.p. schema 10-9-04 in thier sig, they must've meant, they killed you in a battle or some shit.
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word...i agreee he had me but yes bandahe and sausage dos rhyme if you say it like i do...but w/e i will get better from this upin
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^^hah...nah it was a joke...after the smokajoka being dead and then really not being dead fiasco...
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well atleast i should get some votes all my freinds said that schema is a wack rapper lol said i won so...come on vote..but schema i have respect for you but your not that good for a vet...
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This was feedback posted for schema
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fuck what you heard...you and your friends are wack...like im really gonna try against a herb...get that noise out of my thread...just sit and patiently wait to get ko'ed...thank you...please come again...
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This was feedback posted for schema
Schema, you walk around sayin shit, which makes you sound retarded…
Your verses come-out wack, they smells like you have just farted… This shit has just began, what were you thinkin I need elevation-still… You cant rap all you have is nerd ability’s and animation-skill… This cat plays everyone for a fool that acts like a gay faggot… After im threw with him he’ll be crushed into 3 pieces of a maggot… Stop preppin shit cause after me you gonna need a baby’s bandage… You’ll be loose on a stick like a fat man and his lovely sausage… You might have enjoyed yourself before this battle, full with satisfaction… This shits over I played you like Mohammad Ally and his fast reaction… ^^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" PUNCHES NICE FLOW GOOD PERSONALS youre exclusively and independently wack...when your pen hit the pad... its like "damn rv's wack...wheres the ill text heads really at?"... you have absolutely nothing to offer...im embarrassed to know you... whenever empire talks you there repeating him like parrot vocals... get off his dick herb...in all those pm's beggin to get served... im just posting some bullshit up so i can laugh at ya shit verse... battle me? pack your bags and dip first...im merkin lames... you beatin me is like a cardboard box beatin a hurricane... now get the fuck outta here kid before i stuff your ass in a locker... wanna prove yourself against a vet? go punch an animal doctor.. ^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE PUNCHES,,,,,FLOW,,,,,,PERONALS V-SCHEMA CAUSE HIS PUNCHES CAME ALOT HARDER AND DA FLOW AS GOOD DA EMPIRE W/ PUNCHES WERE NICE~!!!!!!! XCLUSIVE-NICE VERSE GODO FLOW NICE PUNCHES BUT DIDNT SEE ANY PERSONALS BUT ANYWAY GOOD VERSE,,,SCHEMA CAME ALOT HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND PERSONALS X-CLUSIVE-NEXT TIME USE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES I KNOW U CAN USE DEM I SEEN YO BATTLES DEY CAN REALLY BE AN EFFECTIVE U SHOULD USE DEM IN DIS BATTLE SCHEMA-NICE VERSE GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS KEEP IT UP ~PEACE~ DIS AN FEEDBACK |
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Voted For: ~{ExClusive}~
Schema, you walk around sayin shit, which makes you sound retarded… Your verses come-out wack, they smells like you have just farted… ^^^ better opener than schemas 7/10 This shit has just began, what were you thinkin I need elevation-still… You cant rap all you have is nerd ability’s and animation-skill… ^^^ pretty decent personal 7.5/10 Stop preppin shit cause after me you gonna need a baby’s bandage… You’ll be loose on a stick like a fat man and his lovely sausage… You might have enjoyed yourself before this battle, full with satisfaction… This shits over I played you like Mohammad Ally and his fast reaction… ^^^ dope punch, dope personals n hella nice flow on the finisher... schema, the highlight of your battle was..... get off his dick herb...in all those pm's beggin to get served... im just posting some bullshit up so i can laugh at ya shit verse... ^^^ very nice personal but X got this cause his verse was more creative, his personals n punches looked like they had more effort n originality in than schemas, thats the reazon i vote for x... no hate yall n return the fave |
BkBrawla...yes i did have personals i said shit about his sigs didnt you see? lol
This shit has just began, what were you thinkin I need elevation-still… You cant rap all you have is nerd ability’s and animation-skill… ^^^^that line...and yes i had some dope punches i agree.. |
ha different strokes for different folks i guess...uppin...
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man why wont anyone fuckin vote? it makes me sick to see no one votes..
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This was feedback posted for schema
whenever empire talks you there repeating him like parrot vocals...
dats why I think u win cuz tha rest of both of yall shit sound off |
^he thinks are shit sounds off haha...bitch newb dosent know what are shit is haha to complex for this fag...uppin
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yo dat wuz close but ExClusive u got it................................................ ...........This cat plays everyone for a fool that acts like a gay faggot…
After im threw with him he’ll be crushed into 3 pieces of a maggot… nice meta4 |
Tha Unknown (Uk)]yo dat wuz close but ExClusive u got it................................................ ...........This cat plays everyone for a fool that acts like a gay faggot…
After im threw with him he’ll be crushed into 3 pieces of a maggot… nice meta4 My Vote Is For ExClusive |
^lmfao...sorry you only get one vote...you scurred...
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what a goof haha....but yo schema sence this was jsut a fun battle lol think you can make me a sig like tripleN's? he said its iight i talked to him on aim i want maybe blue kinda of a colour instead of that green kinda thing well it dont matter but i want ExClusive on it spelt like that and Mater of Vocabulary instead of master of punchlines can you do it? ill pay
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meh never mind schema i got it now....but upppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnn
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This was feedback posted for schema
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punches-schema, great verse schema the punches had the oooohs and ahhs lmao i was laughin at every one they hit harder,had humor, and were more creative no hate on xclusive though flow-schema, better flow nothing was stretched it was basically perfect when i was reading it vocab-xclusive, he had a more level of vocab in his verse then schema no hate good battle but schema got this from the punches i enjoyed them a lot good luck peace |
^meh i could do better on my punches and wordplay now...i might beat schema soon he better watch himself...i have vets shacken in a few weeaks you'll see but i have no beef wit schema we boys naw we kool thats it uppin:)
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