Eyvon vs poison
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Try bringin something DECENT to the table i can work with.....

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-14-04 at 07:57 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 07:58 AM.

I Guess Im Battlin A Thug Cause U Claim In U Shot A Boy/
Son, Didnt U Read The Warning Label? Caution: This Is Not A Toy/
I Come 2 Blow U Away, Like This Man Does 2 Pussy/
Scares All The Ladies Away, Boy U Better Start Raping Tushy/
Cause U See This Faggot Will Do Anything 2 Try N Git Off/
Come A Step Closer 2 Me, Bitch, Ill Slice Ur Dick Head Right Off/
U Know Me Baby :) So Dont Try 2 Protect Urself With All That Defensive Shit/
U Know I Boned U Real Damn Good, Dont Deny It, U Relentless Bitch/
U Thinkin U Dope, Right? Quit With All The Glorification/
Yes, Im A White Female Rapper, Fuck Stereotypes, Look At All The Bullshit Im Makin/
U Just Claimin U Dope, But Son, We Kknow U Just A Suburbian Ho/
Im Like The Whore Of The Underground, With Battles Ill Never Say No!

poison has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 04:23 PM.

i waitin patiently..... write ur verse so i can win already!

ur about to get merked SOON/
u suck so much ur like a human VACUUM/
ur rhymes are NOTHIN BUTT WACK/
they stink more than a FUCKIN NUTT SACK/
im a mutha fuckin FUGITIVE/
buck wild and fowl is the life style that i CHOOSE TO LIVE/
im no where NEAR TRASH/
so step to the REAR FAST/
fore i have ur QUEER ASS /
crying like TEAR GAS/
ur just a PETTY SON/
no need to hear ur shit cuz i ALREADY WON/

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.upin for votes<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

uppin, DAMN that sucked!!!!!!!!!! quit tryin..... 4 the sake of us alll...,..

Voted For: Eyvon

Eyvon - good spit, you had some good punches in there.. and a good flow.

Best Line - I Guess Im Battlin A Thug Cause U Claim In U Shot A Boy/
Son, Didnt U Read The Warning Label? Caution: This Is Not A Toy/

Worst Line - U Thinkin U Dope, Right? Quit With All The Glorification/
Yes, Im A White Female Rapper, Fuck Stereotypes, Look At All The Bullshit Im Makin/

Poison - man, you need some work.. your flow was iight.. but no punches.

Best Line - fore i have ur QUEER ASS /
crying like TEAR GAS/

Worst Line - ur rhymes are NOTHIN BUTT WACK/
they stink more than a FUCKIN NUTT SACK/

OVERALL - one sided battle, wit Eyvon winnin, she came harder and merked this kat in this battle, poison man.. you need some work man, your flow was iight tho.

Vote - Eyvon

RETURN THE FAV
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aight now, uppin! i wanna merk this son of a biatch!!!

Voted For: Eyvon

I Guess Im Battlin A Thug Cause U Claim In U Shot A Boy/
Son, Didnt U Read The Warning Label? Caution: This Is Not A Toy/
blah 6/10
I Come 2 Blow U Away, Like This Man Does 2 Pussy/
Scares All The Ladies Away, Boy U Better Start Raping Tushy/
lol, ok ok 6/10
Cause U See This Faggot Will Do Anything 2 Try N Git Off/
Come A Step Closer 2 Me, Bitch, Ill Slice Ur Dick Head Right Off/ No..... 5/10
U Know Me Baby So Dont Try 2 Protect Urself With All That Defensive Shit/
U Know I Boned U Real Damn Good, Dont Deny It, U Relentless Bitch/
no 5/10
U Thinkin U Dope, Right? Quit With All The Glorification/
Yes, Im A White Female Rapper, Fuck Stereotypes, Look At All The Bullshit Im Makin/ what? 4/10
U Just Claimin U Dope, But Son, We Kknow U Just A Suburbian Ho/
Im Like The Whore Of The Underground, With Battles Ill Never Say No!
lol right...... 5/10

31/60 coverall you win :D

ur about to get merked SOON/
u suck so much ur like a human VACUUM/
lol WTF??? 4/10
ur rhymes are NOTHIN BUTT WACK/
they stink more than a FUCKIN NUTT SACK/
HELL NO! 3/10
im a mutha fuckin FUGITIVE/
buck wild and fowl is the life style that i CHOOSE TO LIVE/
wack again 2/10
im no where NEAR TRASH/
so step to the REAR FAST/
ok right 4/10
fore i have ur QUEER ASS /
crying like TEAR GAS/
meh 4/10
ur just a PETTY SON/
no need to hear ur shit cuz i ALREADY WON/
3/10

20/60 sry you lose

v/ eyvon

uppin please!! i wanna merk this boy!!! 3 more vote 2 go!!!

i dont know whats wrong with the voters. ur rimes were shit. some of it didnt even rhyme. u probly getin some of ur stupid bitch friends to vote for u or somethin

i dont know whats wrong with the voters. ur rimes were shit. some of it didnt even rhyme. u probly getin some of ur stupid bitch friends to vote for u or somethin.
u tried to rime "git off" with "right off"
what the fuck is that

maybe, but "choose 2 live" didnt rhyme with nothin, and "soon" and "vaccum" dont rhyme much neither, so just step off and quit complainin.... i merked u, just admit it.... just look at ur record.... 1-6? who the hell u beat? and props 2 those who beat u. peace

Voted For: Eyvon

this was an easy win for eyvon.

ya verse was aiight eyvon you came decent with ya vocab and punches. structure was good some alright wordplay there 2.

poison mate u need to elevate...u had no decent wordplay punches ya verse was all bullshit. no hate mate im just sayin it how i see it aye. your lines need to be longer and u need to make some decent attempts at personals and punches not just rabble.

structure - eyvon
punches - eyvon
flow - eyvo
wordplay - eyvon
vocab - eyvon

return the favour

ok, 2 more..... but aint that considered a KO???????

Voted For: Eyvon

I think that Eyvon got this battle because i feel that Eyvon came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Eyvon got it they were used effectifely and were on point Eyvon u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Eyvon good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Eyvon and flow and structure i'll give to Eyvon.

V/Eyvon There's my link be sure to return the favour honestly

I meant poison blah long day

Voted For: Eyvon

lol
okay
hands down eyvon got this.....
hmmm, eyvon, was that the verse you had planned for me?
IP:


I Guess Im Battlin A Thug Cause U Claim In U Shot A Boy/
^^^
nice an SHOTTABOY huh?

an you kept sayin dope.............
hmmm, girl, i'ma slap you if all that was meant for me when u wanted that rematch...loljuss playin...
tight verse, ya killed him with punches an personals, ya elevatin alot, keep it up sweetness