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B.I.Detained 10-11-04 02:13 PM

5 of RV's Finest Topical Writers.
 
Leave links and I'll get bk to you no matter who you are.
I only know of a few good topical writers on ths site at
the minute so I can't invite who I think should be in the crew.
If you are a good writer with potential then I'll look at you.
If you have a dope piece then post it.

I won't discriminate against anyone, just don't post
if you knwo you don't even have a little potential.
Sorry.

This will be all topical elite.
Only 6 people.
Constant collabs.

Crew will be called-

The Commune

Brix
Deadly Vision
Daz
Nostradamus
WildFire
Paramik
Critic
L.I.

Key... 10-11-04 02:34 PM

Word. Good Shit

We got Nastrudamus, Vango, Daz & Mad Dog

All of em pretty good audiowise

Un'Touched 10-11-04 03:16 PM

Check The Link In My Profile Homie

Also Heres 2 Link Ta Some Other Openmics

~THE CROSS~Open Mic Link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152479

~Deep~Open Mic Link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=151591

B.I.Detained 10-11-04 03:38 PM

Sorry to sound an ass but you're not there yet.
Write some more and concentrate on upping the
context of your pieces.

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Un'Touched 10-11-04 03:40 PM

Aight Thanks And Appriciate The Honost Advice Homie

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B.I.Detained 10-11-04 10:50 PM

Another 4 peeps are still to be added to the roster.

Parallel 10-11-04 11:09 PM

i dont even know why im posting but im alright not read tho but ya i collab just now with you...

In-Vision 10-11-04 11:15 PM

heres my link....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=145525

Daz 10-11-04 11:18 PM

wow. DV just signs me up. ok im in

But DV on RB go sign up fo r my crew in my forum called Cliche` Killers

Introspect. 10-11-04 11:23 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153488
enough said

B.I.Detained 10-11-04 11:41 PM

Apocalypse this is hard..

I read the piece and I wasn't feeling the first part but
I thought the second part was really good.
I don't know why in the hell you used "..." for a topical lol.
I used to use them to illustarte wordplay bk in 01 lol.
Anyways you had a nice flow, good read and your
contextual writing was consistent.

But because I'm unsure I'll wait for Key Rogue(DV)
to see what he thinks too..

Introspect. 10-11-04 11:47 PM

w33rd.....an dv if you see this get on aim we need to talk serious bizness......

HoPe 10-11-04 11:54 PM

lol..who ever the leader of the crew is..i'll battle u... n plz don't say i ain't good enough.. cuz i surely am!! ;)

La Cosa Nostra 10-11-04 11:55 PM

Sup BI. Hook me up with your AIM.

HoPe 10-11-04 11:58 PM

yo poet.. im me... u have my sn rite?

B.I.Detained 10-12-04 12:05 AM

lol Ok I'll battle you. Topical is fine with me either way you'll be beaten.
I thought your OM in your sig' was ok.
But it just looks like a decimated Richard Corey style lol.
Set it up..
But Ima go bed soon..
Its 5am here.

Nostradamous-

PsDetained

But Ima go bed now.. spk tomoz

-1

La Cosa Nostra 10-12-04 12:08 AM

Your not online. Heh.

HoPe 10-12-04 12:39 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
lol Ok I'll battle you. Topical is fine with me either way you'll be beaten.
I thought your OM in your sig' was ok.
But it just looks like a decimated Richard Corey style lol.
Set it up..
But Ima go bed soon..
Its 5am here.

Nostradamous-

PsDetained

But Ima go bed now.. spk tomoz

-1


lol, oh that last battle was nothing, i didn't even try on that lol, and poet.. i just signed off.. i need to go start recording now.. pc

GodBless

Key... 10-12-04 02:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ...Apocalypse...
w33rd.....an dv if you see this get on aim we need to talk serious bizness......



yes. Am here...............

B.I.Detained 10-12-04 03:14 PM

DV make a decision on Apocalypse.

Keith Moon 10-12-04 03:51 PM

me....simple enuff.....

B.I.Detained 10-12-04 04:21 PM

lol nah.. not yet. Read your stuff...

La Cosa Nostra 10-12-04 07:51 PM

So what is the name of this division?

Keith Moon 10-12-04 09:53 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
lol nah.. not yet. Read your stuff...



u havent seen my quality stuff....

In-Vision 10-12-04 11:53 PM

sooo.........am I in?

B.I.Detained 10-13-04 05:32 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nostradamus
So what is the name of this division?


Its not a division.. its a seperate crew.

Name = The Commune.

La Cosa Nostra 10-13-04 08:03 PM

Sounds alright to me.

Good to have the topical elite all in one spot. *Smells in-crew battles*

Btw, check out my new one against schema.

Lyriclesolja 10-14-04 05:34 PM

Topicals yeah thats me check it out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153832 3rd shift saw it and said fuck it.....Peayce

B.I.Detained 10-14-04 10:32 PM

^^ No not this time sorry.

Up your game 1st.\

-1

In-Vision 10-14-04 10:34 PM

hmmm....is anyone gonna get back to me?!

B.I.Detained 10-14-04 10:38 PM

Aight..

here's the lil deal..
Peeps not leaving feedbk but I liked your piece.
Not overwhelmed by it bt it was better
than most pieces round here.
& enough peeps on here have mentioned your
name while speaking about topicals.

So..
Your In.
Anyone contests it..
I will hurt them.

Welcome.

-1

In-Vision 10-14-04 10:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
Your In.
Anyone contests it..
I will hurt them.

Welcome.

-1



lol.....sounds good...sounds real good

Keith Moon 10-14-04 10:42 PM

me......im good...but extrely lazy ;)

B.I.Detained 10-14-04 10:46 PM

BigChase.. I actually do think you could be good just coz of your]
ego but each piece I've read of yours is simply awful. Please prove me
wrong with a piece that your proud of soon.
Coz all Six places are nearly took. & I wont be recruiting for a long time.


Everyone else..

SIG THE WHAT I HAVE IN MY SIG.

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schema 10-15-04 08:00 PM

ive got a battle against poet but it was rushed and kinda blah...let me get a topic to write to for a tryout...

B.I.Detained 10-16-04 01:34 PM

Ok I've saw it but you aint left a link.

schema 10-16-04 01:50 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154343

B.I.Detained 10-16-04 02:09 PM

I was really put off by your choice of wording.
You had good flow and concept but..
Post up your best Om and we'll make a decision

Keith Moon 10-16-04 02:16 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
BigChase.. I actually do think you could be good just coz of your]
ego but each piece I've read of yours is simply awful. Please prove me
wrong with a piece that your proud of soon.
Coz all Six places are nearly took. & I wont be recruiting for a long time.



well all my dope drops in topical and poerty league have been deleted.....

schema 10-16-04 02:17 PM

i dont have one yet...i like JUST started topical...that was my first one...give me a topic and ill make an om and post the link in here


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