*KiRô-æ-PhY§iX* vs shake-spear
 

Battle Rules:

6 to 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-12-04 at 02:23 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

*KiRô-æ-PhY§iX* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 01:54 AM.

writers block.....

yo
this kids whole career is just a ''boy-whoring-new b's''
my bars will leave this *woody more buzzed* than ''toy-story-movies''...1
your a herb, this kid is whack so ill ''SPEAR-n-smear-ya''
my bars leave him hung like handicapped signs on ''rear-view-mirrors''....2
like hes scared of bombs he's wishin he aint ''c-4'' [see four]
but check under his avy hes wishin he can ''b-more''...3
shake-spears lines are stretched and his ''bars-poor''
it obvious the *force is with u* like ''star-wars''....4[ya shits forced]......

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 02:00 AM.

iight here go nothin

dont take it personal but personally dis persons personals be gar-bage/
ya arms to short to hit me wit punches cause compared to u ima God-Bitch/(ya arms to short to box wit God)
stand back while i kill dis dude dont worry RV wont miss-u/
when i squezz da snub "nose" "sneeze" and "blow" right through ya "tissue"/
so all u gotta do is post ya wack verse sit back and rest-dude/
cause i dont even have to "sneeze" for u to say a "God blessed u"/
post a verse y bother? kiro im ya father i made u like MTV/
u a waiste of my sperm i wish i could go back and wipe u in the sheets/
i peeped ya last battle verse i knew from that i was battlin a herb all ya "lines" are "played" dont u think "shake" could tell/
fuck KiRô's lil hatin ass, and fuck PhY§iX i always came late to class so ill do u like the teacher and make u take da L/(teachers write L in they book when u late)

this has to be my shittiest verse ever lol i know its wack

nice last bar shits hott.................uppin no beef..........

This was feedback posted for *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*
 

checkin the polls n stuff...
decent drop yall an upppin for both of ya

uppin 0-0..........................................

tryin to get some votes hurr/..........honest....0-0 still uppin....

up up and away....

Voted For: *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*

DAmn Son Kiro Got This
GooD Ass Wordplay

Opener-Kiro (Shit Made Me Laugh-Toy Story Movies Aha)
Closer-Shake-Spear
Wordplay-Kiro (NO Doubt)
Punches-Kiro(Hit Harder)
Flow-Kiro (Shake Sometimes You Got Me Lost)
Multis-Tie
Metas-Tie
Vocab-Kiro
Structure-Kiro

Overall-Kiro

1-0 uppin............................................. .............

Voted For: shake-spear

I Realli Dun Wanna Say Shake Won But It Was Better Than Kiros

Let Me Try To Break It Down...

Opener: ShakeSpear
Shakespear: It Wasnt Good... Definately A LiL Forced But It Was O.K.

Kiro: That Shit Was An O.K. Punch But Was Definately Forced Like WHOA

Closer: ShakeSpear
Shakespear: I Liked It The Whole Concept And The Multie But The Lines Were Way Too Long.. Never Do Something Like That Again.

Kiro: Definately Forced Multie Again "And His Bars-Poor"... Definately Could Have Been Worded Better But Good Punch

Personals: None
Shakespear: You Really Only Used His Name Twice And They Were Not Personals

Kiro: I Dont Think You Said His Name But You Kinda Attack Him With That Forced Bars Thing.... Its Just Ignorant And Ironic That Your Shits More Forced Than Him

Multies: ShakeSpear
Shakerspear: Your Multies Were O.K. Could Have Been Better Used Tho

Kiro: Your Multies Were Better But Way Too Forced

Punches: Shakespear
Shakespear: You Had A Lot Of Good Punches Just Try To Re Word Them A Lil Better To Flow Better You Kno?? Just Read Your Flow Before You Post It Next Time And See How It Sounds

Kiro: You Had Punches But Just Reword Them If You Want Your Punches So Bad Just Focus ON Them And Not ON The Multies As Well Comes Out Too Forced

Winner: ShakeSpear

thnx for the vote son uppin more some more..........

my bars forced hahaha..............
uppin.............1-1 shake got a vote whoo hoo lol nice drop fam

upppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnn !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: shake-spear

shake good opener person person person haha structure and flow was a little streched good vocab decent punches nice disses good ender shouldve worded it better though 7/10
kiro opener aint make much sense and aint rhyme but neither did shakes shit it was decnt good flow and multis were dope here also but punches and disses werent better then shakes and thats what wins battles 7/10
basically this was very close they have even scores in diffrent areas kiro won in flow multis and his shit sounded nice to read but shake had better punches and personals and that wins battles so i gotta go with shake here

thanx for voting 1-2 uppin damn shake lol...........

uppin this shit lol i got the lead wit my trashy verse lol

up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

2-1 up up and awayy again....................................

This was feedback posted for shake-spear
 

uppin...lol..............some nice lines from both...
...keep it up..........

shake who do u think won? lol might as well ask qwestions no one is voting......

well i think it was a very weak battle considerin we both had writers block lol and it was a quick key but i think u might get this win ur flow was a lil betta so how bout u lol

i think i had punches......and yeah...but u up 2-1.....good job i wonder when people will vote..??? so how was ur day???

it was pretty good but im leavin this weekend so u gon have to uppin this shit by yaself lol

yeah me too.....that sucks......ill be at a place with out a comp....

*knock , knock*..................[uppin]

up................................................ ...........................

Voted For: shake-spear

punches-kiro
multies-tied
flow-kiro
wordplay-kiro
creativity-none really
metaz-none
personanls-kiro

vote-kiro

return feed and vote on my battles pz

tell the mod to fix that^^^ i selected shakespire by accident

2-2 uppin............................................. ..

Voted For: *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*

my vote kiro... its true shakespere had mad stretched bars that would have hit harder had they been thought through... shit was mad forced kid... elevate

kiro takes this with flow and harder punches.... nice personals as well.


"ez"


return the favor yall drop a vote!! links in the siggy

thnx for the vote son its 3-2 ur way

Voted For: *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*

ohweee diz wuz close!
i thnk kiro just took it doh, they both had kick ass flo, sake ya opener wuz off da fuckin hook, one of da best i saw on diz site so far, but ya finisher culd have hit harder, kiro ya finisher killed it....
it wuz hot as hell, diz wuz one tite azz battle n i hate ta judge it, but kiro just get it
witty azz puns ovr shakes epic wordplay, so kio just scarpes it yall

This was feedback posted for shake-spear
 

checking polls!

Voted For: *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*

ok shakes was aight, the structure was fucked. ok disses and aigt hits.

kiro line structure was aight,ok hard of hits, to general.

line structure:kiro
core disses:both a lil more kiro
creativity:kiro

damn son nice battle but u win......................hopefully well get to do it again somtime

Voted For: *KiRô-æ-PhY§iX*

yo
this kids whole career is just a ''boy-whoring-new b's''
my bars will leave this *woody more buzzed* than ''toy-story-movies''...1
your a herb, this kid is whack so ill ''SPEAR-n-smear-ya''
my bars leave him hung like handicapped signs on ''rear-view-mirrors''....2
like hes scared of bombs he's wishin he aint ''c-4'' [see four]
but check under his avy hes wishin he can ''b-more''...3
shake-spears lines are stretched and his ''bars-poor''
it obvious the *force is with u* like ''star-wars''....4[ya shits forced]......

^true personals- compared to the other persons verse.. shakespeare, not bad but a lot of ur lines were stretched.. kiro had better wordplay and creativity... nice battle shake spear work on ya quality and structure, and u str8... aight good luck with this, pz.. and peep my open micz..