j-nutty vs infamuz
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-15-04 at 08:34 AM

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Infamuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 08:34 AM.

j-nutty has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 08:34 AM.

look i no you a bitch and been puttin this fuckin battle off fa weeks/
"Im not gon battle you my work comes first" you no books is fa geeks/*
this kid hipped his tooth and now he thinks hes F-A-B-O-L-O-U-S/**
he wouldnt understand my lyrics if i "spelled it out" or he guessed?/
ya shit is wak silly senselless what you want to call it, now is that unfair/
no. cuz ya rhymes are simple come to you more than then fuckin air/
"Im cool but ur not/ who do you think you are tupac/"***
"im gon merk you" shit this battle will ya street credit below zero/****
now i just fuckin rocked ya shit like i was fuckin craig on de~bow/



i no him he in my school..................................
* he said the shit in parenthes
**he really did chip his tooth and think he can rap
***something hed probully say cuz his shit is wak
****he said hed merk me so i put it in parenthesis

look I got more ass from ya mama than a piece of toilet tissue go home read this shit and see how much I dissed you, he got his hat and his hoodie like he eminem you could change his name from infamuz to feminem dis dude sayin he could beet me like he is da super shit he can go hide in the corner and beat on his 1/2in. dick.

work come first biatch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

and you got knocked the fuck out

Voted For: Infamuz

infamuz got this..........
nutty, ya lines were stretched as hell an i couldnt find the rhyme, improve the structure an dont stretch lines, not hatin on you, just trynna help elevate, homeboy...

infamuz ya flow was aight, wasnt feelin that cool but ur not line, but to be honest it wasnt the strongest battle, but nuttys structure was too fucked up to understand
no hate
just tellin it how i see it
return the fave in my sig
peace

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damn what the fuck why aint no 1 votin...................

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Voted For: Infamuz

fam's lines were better structured, with j's its hard to tell wher it ends work on that structure man for real, and fam had alot more personal hits.

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Voted For: Infamuz

Infamuz took this easy...

J-nutty, u've got a lot of elevatin to do...everything in your verse was played n weak...n the structure was horrible...u need to hit enter after every line, cuz i guarantee u wont win wit a structure like that...

Infamuz, i really didnt feel u had much in your verse either...u had punches, but none of 'em really stood out...but at least your structure was better...n u dont need the //// <--takin those out is up to u, but if u decide to keep puttin 'em in, voters wont like it, jus a forewarnin....anyways...

V/ Infamuz, no hate, jus some honest feedback...

Voted For: Infamuz

flow and struct: this goes to infam because his is betta put together and flows betta
punches: the few i saw but goes to infam
multis: Infam but both lacked them
Personals: both had them bu Infam portrayed them more
enjoymen: i liked infam more on this

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Voted For: Infamuz

Aight Infamuz got this on everything coz J nutty werent even tryin...Infamuz got better structure...Vocb & everything else i'll break it down..
Structure/I
Punches/I
Vocab/I
Wordplay/I
Wit/I
No Hate Return the Vote I on this Battle gettin slept on..
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