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Trentorican vs D-Thug
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10-16 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No feeding No d/r h8 or unexplained votes Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-15-04 at 10:51 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
D-Thug has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 10:52 AM.
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Trentorican has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 10:53 AM.
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U look shook grabbin ur rhyme book to find a decent hook, But u left grilled like burnt out cooks cryin like the victims of crooks, U "spittin in cyphers" Watchin them Words but the W's i'm "denyin ya", U "lightin up fires" to spit hot but u speak no truth so u stutter like "trippin up liars" I'll "flex u vandals" like spagetti u'll get left twisted like screwed up "sexual scandals", Trentoricans crazy like fallin off his bike this bitch is "off the handle", End ya career dawg coz at best Trentoricans rhymes "are horrible", U couldn't bribe me to lose even if ya found shit on me and setted ya lines to "extortional", U a crowd displeaser coz all i see is the opposite of :thumbsup:, U pay ho's but like potholers u got all them holes but u still "bum-sluts", I feel sorry for ya coz u a mistake of the new rap age, But i did tell ur mom and dad not to toy wit their D.N.A, |
i'm a always be on top cus i cant quench my thirst for power
da diff is u spit rap i spit crak and u on da search for powder i'm da most raw and dats war spelled backwards you wont go far and dats for sure cus you's a coward fool lyin' aint cool i'm true to da game but i'll let you play no matter wat da fuk you do you cant proove da shit you say how is you gon' study me then try to trace my cyphers dat shit is fake you fukin snake time to face the viper wit all dat bitch in ya blood ya phisically so denyin' Y you gon say i'm horrible when knowin' i'm lyrically horrifyin' lem'me talk to who's in charge da shit u typed gotta be ghost cus you basically was a waste of 462 posts |
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u haven't spit yet you twat...gees man c'mon and spit sumthin
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U look shook grabbin ur rhyme book to find a decent hook, ...But u left grilled like burnt out cooks cryin like the victims of crooks, U "spittin in cyphers" Watchin them Words but the W's i'm "denyin ya", U "lightin up fires" to spit hot but u speak no truth so u stutter like "trippin up liars" I'll "flex u vandals" like spagetti u'll get left twisted like screwed up "sexual scandals", Trentoricans crazy like fallin off his bike this bitch is "off the handle", End ya career dawg coz at best Trentoricans rhymes "are horrible", U couldn't bribe me to lose even if ya found shit on me and setted ya lines to "extortional", U a crowd displeaser coz all i see is the opposite of :thumbsup:, U pay ho's but like potholers u got all them holes but u still "bum-sluts", I feel sorry for ya coz u a mistake of the new rap age, But i did tell ur mom and dad not to toy wit their D.N.A, |
Voted For: D-Thug
Both have a slightly similar style, trent, your bars had a lot of self glorification. D-thug had way better punches, flow was pretty good, though some lines were stretched in parts, he had better vocab.. And personals were aiight. Thats why D-thug got the battle won. |
Voted For: D-Thug
aight this one was eazy to judge... gangstarshit takes this one with a lot better structure, flow, punches/personals and some sick multis... i didnt see 1 multi in trents verse... trent just so ya know "backwards" and "coward" do not rhyme... in an audio battle you might be able to pull that off but in a text battle the 2 words are much to differant hommie... any way keep elevatin... this just wasnt your day hommie... gangstarshit i liked all those personals with the links n shit... those hit hard... gotta love the multis man. and finaly that closer was sick hommie... it all flowed togeather nicely gangstar shit takes this one VOTE- GANGSTARSHIT |
This was feedback posted for D-Thug
yo gangstarshit creamed trentorican cuz he had more:
-vocabulary -better flow -more punchlines yo he even added the michael jackson gig, LMMFAO |
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i know this is just net......but chill watch ya mouth...i aint disrespect u... |
/\ na was playin wit ya lol...i posted my verse in the wrong box...lol...which was why i couldn't see ur verse up /\.
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Wow the only open battle i have with votes ok upp.
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Voted For: D-Thug
yo gangstar got this, his verse wuz much moe creative, easy to read, puns hit hard, it was just overrall a much tighter more enjoyable verse yo trent work on yo personals iight homes |
Voted For: D-Thug
U "spittin in cyphers" Watchin them Words but the W's i'm "denyin ya", U "lightin up fires" to spit hot but u speak no truth so u stutter like "trippin up liars" ^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD SPITTIN NICE FLOW GOOD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES I'll "flex u vandals" like spagetti u'll get left twisted like screwed up "sexual scandals", Trentoricans crazy like fallin off his bike this bitch is "off the handle", ^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT DAT WAS AN GOOD PUNCH DECENT End ya career dawg coz at best Trentoricans rhymes "are horrible", U couldn't bribe me to lose even if ya found shit on me and setted ya lines to "extortional", ^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD PUNCH GOOD FLOW NICE MAYNE U GOT PERSONALS AND PUNCHES U a crowd displeaser coz all i see is the opposite of :thumbsup:, U pay ho's but like potholers u got all them holes but u still "bum-sluts", I feel sorry for ya coz u a mistake of the new rap age, But i did tell ur mom and dad not to toy wit their D.N.A, ... ^^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND FLOW ON DIS VERSE GANGSTAR- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND FLOW DA PUNCHES AND DA PERSONALS JUST BLEW ME AWAY NICE MAYNE 'm a always be on top cus i cant quench my thirst for power da diff is u spit rap i spit crak and u on da search for powder ^^^^^^^^^ DUDE DATS WEAK ' i'm da most raw and dats war spelled backwards you wont go far and dats for sure cus you's a coward ^^^^^^ DUDE DAT DONT EVEN MAKE SENSE MAYNE fool lyin' aint cool i'm true to da game but i'll let you play no matter wat da fuk you do you cant proove da shit you say ^^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK PUNCHES MAYNE NOT AN GOOD VERSE how is you gon' study me then try to trace my cyphers dat shit is fake you fukin snake time to face the viper wit all dat bitch in ya blood ya phisically so denyin' Y you gon say i'm horrible when knowin' i'm lyrically horrifyin' lem'me talk to who's in charge da shit u typed gotta be ghost cus you basically was a waste of 462 posts ^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD CLOSA OK VERSE TRENTORICAN-"OK" VERSE NOT GOOD TO LOOK AT.U HAD NOT GOOD PUNCHES ELEVATE ON THAT, GOOD FLOW, PERSONALS I DIDNT SEE,BUT DA PUNCHES WERE WEAK MAYNE V-GANGSTARCAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW AND PERSONALS TRENTORICAN-OK VERSE BUT U NEED TO WORK ON PUNCHES AND FLOW AND USING PERSONALS, DA PUNCHES WERE MAD WEAK AND DA PERSONALS I DIDNT SEE SO ELEVATE ON THAT HOMIE ~PEACE~ |
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Voted For: D-Thug
Murda U look shook grabbin ur rhyme book to find a decent hook, But u left grilled like burnt out cooks cryin like the victims of crooks ^^^SHows how the rest of the verse will go. crazy funyn at aprts, lines were a bit long and punches were a bit off at times, but overall very good. DNA closer was good. 7/10 lem'me talk to who's in charge da shit u typed gotta be ghost cus you basically was a waste of 462 posts ^^Only good part was when it was over. Whack and should not be battlin Gangstarshit. Elevate and you'll be alright. punches were mdeiocre at best. 4.10 Return da favor (In ma sig) One |
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