D-ICED vs *Troop*
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 =K.o

Tired of ya Bullshit Statements

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 10-15-04 at 01:17 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 03:59 PM.

*Grabs Mic*
Ya ready 4 sumone 2 Ko this Bitch
Feel Me on this U Bitch
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*Drops Mic*

And thats all u gone get outta me u Fuckin Pussy
Lets see u Ko that shit muthafucka
U jus got exposed u fuckin Chump
And i keyed this shit in bout 10 Minz u fuckin Clown
....Nuff Said....

*Grabs Mic*
Ya ready 4 sumone 2 Ko this Bitch
Feel Me on this U Bitch


*Drops Mic*

And thats all u gone get outta me u Fuckin Pussy
Lets see u Ko that shit muthafucka
U jus got exposed u fuckin Chump
And i keyed this shit in bout 10 Minz u fuckin Clown
....Nuff Said....

D-ICED has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 11:36 PM.

*Smacks the shit outta Troop*
*Picks mic back up and smacks this bitch again*



Like fallen 'GODS' and lightening rods ya thunder done left
No wonder you struggle to elevate you stuck under the steps
This a slaughter 'Troopers' take orders what can you really achieve
This batle like General matters 'Troop's is outta they league
Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C
Trust me you been scared to battle you rusty aint been twirled in awhile
Ya whole game is extremly lame when you think jeri curls is back in stylelink


*Smacks the shit outta the little boy a thrid time and tells him DONT EVER BE IN GROWN MEN BUSSINESS AGAIN*
*Leaves the stage in digust at this lame*

jus incase if ya didnt get the closer

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153438

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

Im 1st 2 "D-ice" the Defenitions Entire Empire No Evidence of Man Raps
U in Rv Vet Reference is Like No Flangerlee 60 Year Olds Performin Hand Claps

No Acceptance of Intelligence U Couldnt Provide Dopeness if you Were a "Caliph"
Your Adapted to Lack of CommenSense like Ray Charles joggin on a Cliff

Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines

You in Banishment against Me is Frowned Upon like Nigerians with White Knees
"Ugly"Speculations of Suffercation is Nomation for Bubba Sparx in Tight White Tee's

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD PUNCHES NICE PERSONALS NICE FLOW



Like fallen 'GODS' and lightening rods ya thunder done left
No wonder you struggle to elevate you stuck under the steps
This a slaughter 'Troopers' take orders what can you really achieve
This batle like General matters 'Troop's is outta they league
Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C
Trust me you been scared to battle you rusty aint been twirled in awhile
Ya whole game is extremly lame when you think jeri curls is back in stylelink
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD FLOW GOOD PUNCHES GOOD PERSONALS NICE WORDPLAYS


V-TROOP HE CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

D-ICED- NICE VERSE U HAD GOOD PERSONALS NICE PUNCHES BUT TROOP CAME ALOT HARDER MAYNE


I THINK TROOP SHOULD GET DA WIN CAUSE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

~PEACE~

Voted For: *Troop*

pretty good battle...lines i liked...everything from troop.cept i wasn't feelin the ray charles line...it sounded forced...


and same with empire...accept for i wasn't feelin the jerri kurls line..........so this is a close one....g'luck

In-vision requested vote was a feedback instead

This was feedback posted for D-ICED
 

lmao.... this was some good shyt, y'all... i laughed thru both verses...lol... tight shyt... but I ain't gon say who won... the truth will come out if kats vote the same way i saw it...lol

Voted For: *Troop*

both of you actually did good.. im suprised at emp for actually posts a below average verse.....
EMp: ya shit was iight.. nothing special...... nice overall but you had some flaws.. ya structre was noty that good which i thought you needed to improve very mucvh on...but ya flow was iight but at some partds ya flow didnt go to good.. ya personals were a bit better than i usually expect from you..... actually a lil harder.. ya punches did very good... decently strong..... didnt feel the closer very much though.. but the middle was iight..... good job.. im shocked.. LOL

Troop: ya shit was very good nice overall... nice lines...... but i though that ya structre was messed up like a mofo and its streched up so much too.... so emp got you with the flow and stucutre.. which he normally doesnt ghet... but troop came in with way harder punches that was good.. peronals ehh.. i wasnt feelin those shit much.. but it was iight...

both of yuo gotta stop using explinaation cos i deduct points from that..
Vote troop.. for a slighly better verse

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

fuckin hell this battle was HOT!!!...

TROOP had some tight ass punches...his vocab was way wider...he had some gd personals too...on empires side..he had tight ass punches...vocab wasnt as rich as troop's tho...he had some personals..but troop gets this too...both were tight..and both verses were fluent..props to both..but i aint voting tho....


holla

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

damn...if i COULD vote i would give this to Troop...Empire yes u may say that im d/rin cuz he in my crew...no...if u check his battles i have voted against him...

Troop i liked ya punches they hit harder in this one...ya opener was stretched...so u can work on that...ya wordplay was good too..punches were origional as well...

Empire..i didnt understand ya opener...i see where it was goin but you shoulda worded it betta..it woulda hit harder..i really didnt understand ya punches...so u need to work on ya wordplay and how u word ya punchs...cuz the p.c. line...:huh:...closer was a personal...but u coula made that a personal and a punch too..

so if i could vote i would give it to Troop...but A.I stand up

This was feedback posted for D-ICED
 

checkin this shit out ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

just checkin' the polls fam..............................

omg your in a.i and aint get the 1st line hes in g.o.d.s a ai subcrew he lists where hes from as under the steps real simple damn what the fuck :banghead:

Uppin............................................. ...

D_Dice Had Good Lines Actually...........................

Voted For: *Troop*

Troop

Bar 1 - not bad.. could have been better.. 7/10
Bar 2 - Pretty good punch / personal.. 8/10
Bar 3 - hahaha dope... good punch.. and meta.. 8/10
Bar 4 - Dope personal and closer.. 9/10...

D-Iced

Bar 1 -pretty dope opener.. 8/10
Bar 2 -wasnt feelin it too much.. could have been worded better.. 6/10
Bar 3 - not bad punch / personal... 8/10
Bar 4 - Dope closer.. overall 9/10 on the closer..


Troop got this by 1 point.. good battle.. punches.. and personals by both.. gatta give it to troop though.. pz

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

Checking polls..

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

Voted For: D-ICED

*Troop*...

Im 1st 2 "D-ice" the Defenitions Entire Empire No Evidence of Man Raps
U in Rv Vet Reference is Like No Flangerlee 60 Year Olds Performin Hand Claps
.....pretty dope opener...good punch, nice name play..8/10

No Acceptance of Intelligence U Couldnt Provide Dopeness if you Were a "Caliph"
Your Adapted to Lack of CommenSense like Ray Charles joggin on a Cliff
...didn't really like this..i understand his old alias was Caliph..but that bar didn't really flow that well...6/10

Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines
...ehh not bad...coulda made this a bit better...7/10

You in Banishment against Me is Frowned Upon like Nigerians with White Knees
"Ugly"Speculations of Suffercation is Nomation for Bubba Sparx in Tight White Tee's
...good personal and closer...but seemed to be stretched....7/10

Overal...28/40...good drop...work on you structure a bit more and your personals...

D-ICED...

Like fallen 'GODS' and lightening rods ya thunder done left
No wonder you struggle to elevate you stuck under the steps
...good personal and punch..solid opener..well done..9/10

This a slaughter 'Troopers' take orders what can you really achieve
This batle like General matters 'Troop's is outta they league
...didn't flow as well as it coulda...good punch/nameplay..7/10

Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C
...not as good as you coulda made it, but it was still a connected punch...7/10

Trust me you been scared to battle you rusty aint been twirled in awhile
Ya whole game is extremly lame when you think jeri curls is back in stylelink
...HAHA I liked this shit...DOPE CLOSER...hahaha...nice personal and punch hahaha....9/10

Overal...32/40...you came a bit harder and deserved the win...you had the good opener and closer..nice punches and personals...good drop

v/D-ICED

Crew vote removed

lol thats sum bullshit
fuck outta here wit dat shit

lol too bad whore jerhi curls not in style too bad your 2 votes came from x a.i members real suspesious troop you d.rs :nono:

I think it was a tie.. both of you were pretty much not good...

Voted For: *Troop*

ok first off i really don't like all this action shit.
now down to the words:

ok this was a good battle but there was only one winner

i like both mc's flows
but empire denfinally had a better stlye it just cause i'm not a fan of the hyperlinks in the battle

Empire:
Like fallen 'GODS' and lightening rods ya thunder done left
No wonder you struggle to elevate you stuck under the steps
bad rhyme sceme and bad bar not real punch or personal
This a slaughter 'Troopers' take orders what can you really achieve
This batle like General matters 'Troop's is outta they league
i don't no i was kinda weak
Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C
ok some nice mults but so weak lines what you mean answer to d.v?
Trust me you been scared to battle you rusty aint been twirled in awhile
Ya whole game is extremly lame when you think jeri curls is back in stylelink
lolol nice closer

Troop:
Im 1st 2 "D-ice" the Defenitions Entire Empire No Evidence of Man Raps
U in Rv Vet Reference is Like No Flangerlee 60 Year Olds Performin Hand Claps
not bad as an opener
No Acceptance of Intelligence U Couldnt Provide Dopeness if you Were a "Caliph"
Your Adapted to Lack of CommenSense like Ray Charles joggin on a Cliff
um the rhyme sceme was bad but nice line "RIP TO RAY!!1"
Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines
NICE lolololol second was hott
You in Banishment against Me is Frowned Upon like Nigerians with White Knees
"Ugly"Speculations of Suffercation is Nomation for Bubba Sparx in Tight White Tee's
the link helped explain but don't like um
and i nice line

troop

omg see why i post explanations this fucking dudes is stupid as fuck whos d.v?omg what the fuck and it aint 3-0 strobe will fix it cuz red bulls vote aint crew i aint been council for like 2 weeks at least

Strobe the one that took it off u dumb ni99a
and it dont matter cuz thats 3-0 lol
consider this closed
Haaa u got Owned bitch

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

jus checkin out the polls i cant vote..............

This was feedback posted for D-ICED
 

Nice drop D-Iced you merked him fa sho...
Troop not bad Ive seen you do way better.

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

checkin polls......... good battle......... i like the intro for Empire tho, shit was hillarious after readin ur verse

oh yea........... close the shit......................... 1

Voted For: *Troop*

Im 1st 2 "D-ice" the Defenitions Entire Empire No Evidence of Man Raps
U in Rv Vet Reference is Like No Flangerlee 60 Year Olds Performin Hand Claps
^^nice...vocab...8/10
No Acceptance of Intelligence U Couldnt Provide Dopeness if you Were a "Caliph"
Your Adapted to Lack of CommenSense like Ray Charles joggin on a Cliff
^^...lol...nice punch...8.5/10
Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines
^^good...7.5/10
You in Banishment against Me is Frowned Upon like Nigerians with White Knees
"Ugly"Speculations of Suffercation is Nomation for Bubba Sparx in Tight White Tee's
^^koo,closer....8/10


Like fallen 'GODS' and lightening rods ya thunder done left
No wonder you struggle to elevate you stuck under the steps
^^decent...8/10
This a slaughter 'Troopers' take orders what can you really achieve
This batle like General matters 'Troop's is outta they league
^^hmm,aight/7/10
Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C
^^..decent....7/10
Trust me you been scared to battle you rusty aint been twirled in awhile
Ya whole game is extremly lame when you think jeri curls is back in stylelink
^^koo closer...7.5/10

troop=32/40...vocab was nice punches pretty much all hit
flow was on point n structure was aight....personals were aight to...punches deffinately hit harder though....

empire=29.5/40...vocab was simple ..but multi's were good they helped ya flow ..structure was good..but ya punches were a bit weaker then normal....
.
both came nice it jus came down to who hit harder with punches, n i gotta sat i think troop came with them better overall...good battle....
.
props ta both..

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

ok both asked
both had good structure
flow d iced was a lil better because troops line were a lil long
both came pretty complex
both had really nice personals
booth could work on multis though
best battle ive seen in a minute im nto votin cause i aint tryin to have beef both asked for feedback u got it vote bitches

Voted For: *Troop*

Just checking this out.......

D-ICED:
Its gets deep ya occupation is commander and chief but you answer to D.V
You not hard just another pussy behind bars you rhymes is a definition of P.C

*Troop*:
Understand Empires Defenition's of Acceptance's doesnt Make Mines
D-ice Provideing Gifted is Like Muhammed Ali Providing Straight Lines

Just stating what I saw.....free uppin