Adrenaline vs GangsStarShit
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r hate or unexplained votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-16-04 at 07:13 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

GangsStarShit has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 07:14 AM.

Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 08:34 AM.

ayo u can call me insane,deranged or spectacula/
cuz am draining these niggaz bloodline like dracula/
I spit tha illness in defined in trueblue terrorism/
and these niggaz fearin it like voodoo heroism/
Gangstarshit got his name from his wankstarness/
He's not a thug/he's fuckin softer than a dixie chick/
All I need is a couple bars to eraticate/
your on automatic candidate/I leave no trace when I obliterate/
I can smell u a pussy/ ur nuttin but a drag queen/
I spit intelligence to this bitch/he's nuttin but a crack fiend/
Am bringing u the ADRENALINE rush/u can take it/
my rhymes are like toxic waste/u cant taste it/
so there NO WAY u can chew me/my skills are to heinous/
dre won this battle bitch/u cant even embrace it//

WORD!!

/\ PM'd me that so if that's what he spit then oh well

Verse;
When i asked ya to battle ya brain musta "skipped-a-beat",
Coz here's where ya spit ya not sposed to PM "shit-at-me",

Adrenaline? u more laid back than slappers on a busy night,
U lathargic u feelin tired so Adrenaline on RV jus equals hype,

"Fuck-this-creep" seein this verse made me wish u went & "ducked-on-me",
U gonn get teased like lil kiddies beggin mommy to "suck-her-sweet" (eugh)

"Tuck-a-beat" to sound underground but ur fortunes lookin "obselite",
U want "hells-heat" bur ur words too froze they illegal u on the jail "cell-seat",

:spit:

This 10 lines only so my bars stuck ya ability on "minimum",
But ya maximum's got more chance of losin this and ya boobie prize is "winnin-gum",

Blah no need to try i'm done 10 lines what now?

uppin this thread fuck 50 characters..............

ayo...where the votes at?

I really wanna know what yall think...

Voted For: GangsStarShit

When i asked ya to battle ya brain musta "skipped-a-beat",
Coz here's where ya spit ya not sposed to PM "shit-at-me",

Adrenaline? u more laid back than slappers on a busy night,
U lathargic u feelin tired so Adrenaline on RV jus equals hype,

"Fuck-this-creep" seein this verse made me wish u went & "ducked-on-me",
U gonn get teased like lil kiddies beggin mommy to "suck-her-sweet" (eugh)

"Tuck-a-beat" to sound underground but ur fortunes lookin "obselite",
U want "hells-heat" bur ur words too froze they illegal u on the jail "cell-seat",



This 10 lines only so my bars stuck ya ability on "minimum",
But ya maximum's got more chance of losin this and ya boobie prize is "winnin-gum",
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND FLOW


ayo u can call me insane,deranged or spectacula/
cuz am draining these niggaz bloodline like dracula/
I spit tha illness in defined in trueblue terrorism/
and these niggaz fearin it like voodoo heroism/
Gangstarshit got his name from his wankstarness/
He's not a thug/he's fuckin softer than a dixie chick/
All I need is a couple bars to eraticate/
your on automatic candidate/I leave no trace when I obliterate/
I can smell u a pussy/ ur nuttin but a drag queen/
I spit intelligence to this bitch/he's nuttin but a crack fiend/
Am bringing u the ADRENALINE rush/u can take it/
my rhymes are like toxic waste/u cant taste it/
so there NO WAY u can chew me/my skills are to heinous/
dre won this battle bitch/u cant even embrace it//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE FLOW "OK" PUNCHES BUT U SHOULDNT NEVA PM YO VERSE DATS STUPID~!

V-GANGSTARSHIT CAUSE HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

ADRENALINE-U HAD AN GOOD VERSE GOOD FLOW GOING "OK" PUNCHES DIDNT SEE ANY PERSONALS AND DA PUNCHES WERENT HITTIN HARDER,,,,,GANGSTAR HIS PUNCHES WAS ON POINT AND HITTTIN IT,,,,,,,,,,ADRENALINE ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES AND PERSONALS FLOW WASNT GOING TO HELP U IN DIS BATTLE

V-GANGsSTARSHIT CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

~PEACE~ RETURN AN FAV (*HONEST VOTE*) DA LINKS ARE IN DA SIG

ayo I knew he was going to win me wit dat PM shit
my bad... (I wasn't conscious of my actions)

NEXT TIME!! :cussing:

This was feedback posted for Adrenaline
 

ok i will battle you Adrenaline
but make it unlimited lines so i can really merk you

up................................................

uppin ......................................

Voted For: GangsStarShit

yea nigga good shit you came harder
other nigga was aiight both yall nice structure thumbsup mayn nice lines personals uhm so and so yea but you got this cuzz you came harder

Voted For: Adrenaline

Voting........

Adrenaline? u more laid back than slappers on a busy night,
U lathargic u feelin tired so Adrenaline on RV jus equals hype,
^^Aight youi had a lot of good wordplay. THe punches weren't so good, but they was liek metas a bit. Flow was ok, some shit was off. 6/10

Gangstarshit got his name from his wankstarness/
He's not a thug/he's fuckin softer than a dixie chick/
^One of a few good punches. FLow was ok, wordplay was low, metas was low, but slmost everytime you swung, you hit. Structure was goood. 7/10

One

uppin for more votes yall... C'mon peeps I need more votes

uppin and stop the herb votes i want proper votes...to me :laugh:

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vote... vote... vote... people...

Voted For: GangsStarShit

Adrenline got his head to far up his ass. This is a battle dude, not self glorification.

GangsStarShit won this one no doubt. Every bar had wordplay (even though I didn't get the 3rd one), but he didn't have the funny. That's the only think his verse lacked. The best bar was the last, even though the flow was a little off.

Good battle, nonetheless.

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

gang got this one

adrenaline.....wat in the heyll waz dat fam......that shyt was...ok...ur punches was aiight....flow good..structure ok...personals none..multi's ok..vocab ok.....meta's ok......overall this shit was ok

gangstar shit> u had better flow better structure and betta punches that is why u won this battle....nyce shit fam.....ad u need to elevate alot mayn but styll u gettin there..................

Voted For: GangsStarShit

Aiight, easy vote. GSS got this shit won because he had better well thought out disses and overall, better flow and punchlines. Adreneline, I see you got some potential, but you need to work on making your punches connect as opposed to going off track, and you need to try and use personals. Try reading the tutorials on this site to elevate. As for this battle GSS gets my vote.

Peace.