GangsStarShit vs BIGPAPPA76
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding
No d/r hate or unexplained votes

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-13-04 at 08:47 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Old battle closed win

GangsStarShit has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 10:54 AM.

BIGPAPPA76 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 03:42 PM.

.....aight look.....

This kid been buggin my ass for 2 days to fuckin battle
now hes floatin straight up shits creek wit no paddle
this kid is goddamn wack, watch out while i committ this lyrical murda
ay gangsta, imma spit some shit ya neva even 'hurda'
bitch hit me up on AIM sayin he wanted to test my verbal skillz to tha fullest
well nigga, sorry to say but my shits rippin you like fuckin 7mm bullets

this faggot raps like kidrock, "only god knows why"
yeah hes tha only one who knows why this emcees still alive
'haha'.... nigga thinks hes luda... actin a fool
ay homo dicks are for chicks man that shit aint cool
answer me this, if you so gangsta then why you on tha net
ya couldnt handle a vet, and thats more than a bet
imma give this herb somethin he'll never forget
today son it is time for your rhymin to end, its your lyrical death
mutha fucka my shits rollin threw ya vains like an OD off Krystal meath
i know you can feel it, you wish death was closin in on the chase
your wish is my command... now imma face this murda case.... and plant this axe flat deep in ya face.

Bigpappa76

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This was feedback posted for BIGPAPPA76
 

GangsStarShit: ya verse would have won u this if i wouldn't have saw it somewhere else, most of ya verse was similar to something i saw in a cal'q'lus battle but u still had some good original lines, i was feeling the last 4 bars especially, overall, some played lines, good structure, good flow, some played multi's but the orignals were good and hitting, good personal, good meta's, ok opener (gun rap is played out), good closer.
6/10



BigPappa76: first of all i didn't like that line similar to the one off 8 mile which was the shits creek line, but luckly u recovered from that mistake, i was feeling ya flow in the 2nd part of ya verse which was the net, handle a vet, bet, all that shit was nice, end of 1st verse was played (gun rap), besides that most of ya shit was good, overall, played opener, structure could have been better but u really didn't fall all enough to lose the vote, flow was good, good meta's (krystal meth, lol), good punches, good personals, not really any multi's, good ending. 6.5/10


vote - BigPappa76


no hate to any of ya, this is only my brekdown through feedback, don't got enough posts to vote

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Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

Wack battle from both

Gangstarr....your flow was nice...structure nice...but you had a lot of pointless multies that was just there to be there...your punches suffered becuz of it..if u had focused on developing your punches better an not multies you woulda took it easy.

BIg....flow was a lil off structure was wack....vocab was weak but your punches were ckinda comical an weak but they were worded better, developed better an more polished an thats what gave u win but both need improvement.

Vote: Big

ayo im uppin this shit people....................DONT SLEEP

uppin this shit for votes.................................

I'd like you to link me that coz 1 thing i ain't and that's a biter!

Anyway uppin this battle

This was feedback posted for BIGPAPPA76
 

am jus givin some feedback...
nice battle both of u, nice punches, nice verses, metaphors
nice multis from gangstarshit
nice personals by bigpappa
I think big pappa came harder but this was a good battle

ayo I need votes on genocide vs. Adrenaline...
ROUND 2, also me and GANGSTARSHIT

uppin this shit... if the post limit wasnt so high id be up 3-0 right now but whateva... uppin this battle

Uppin This Shit... Get This Voted On And Closed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

break down...1 sided

vocab- gangstar (shit wuz complex
punchez- pappa (harder an felt them more then gangstarz)
flow- pappa (relative bar length)
structure- pappa (eazier 2 read an more understood)
multiz- pappa (ehh....no1 realli had any but i liked urz more)

okay 4 outta 5 my vote goes 2 pappa but big upz ta both tho

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uppin this for votes............................................. .......

/\ wtf obviously somebody didn't read my verse

Voted For: GangsStarShit

pappa:

ya punches were aight.. some kinda played.. flow was good.. vocab a little basic.. wordplay was OK ... kind of an on and off verse.

GGS: more consistent punches... better wordplay.. a little stretched structure but it was coo... nice flow.............

GGS takes this.

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well one man band.. its nice to see a crew member vote against me.... but whateva... uppin this shit.

wow lots of DQd votes... explain ya votes... uppin

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This was feedback posted for GangsStarShit
 

just checking polls cant vote tho cuz big pappas in my crew but GSS would win...KO

Voted For: BIGPAPPA76

pappa came harder with more punches better flow and better meatas nice word play i was really felling his verse
best line-this faggot raps like kidrock, "only god knows why"
yeah hes tha only one who knows why this emcees still alive
gangstarrshit came weak his verse was kinda whack not alot of wordplay n meatas
best line-"Stop-the-press" this guy talks gangsta but we all know that he's "locked-in-stress",
"Pump-ya-chest" like balloons fillin up in metal left him cold like he "dumped-the-vest",
vote on my battles

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uppin this shit for some more votes.. get it closed

Wow i know who to blacklist now...mad or sumthin??

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this is goddamn rediculous..... UPPIN THIS SHIT!!!

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

bigpappa - some weak punches...not really any personals....ur flow was ok but at some parts it got kinda weird.....i was disappointed cause i though u would come harder than that.....ur structure wasnt too bad..... overall-5/10


Gangstar - ok verse.....not really any hard punches.....u had more personals than bigpappa.....u were good with the multis.....structure and flow were good too....jus be a lil more creative with your punches though..... overall - 6/10


vote goes to gangstar because bigpappa had no personal(well maybe 1)....his punches were weak and so were gangstar but gangstar had more personals and his ver flowed better

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

bigpapa= ya punches were weak n ya dropped tomany fillers, personals were non existent....you need ta get more complex n work on ya drops...focus when writin don't jus drop bs...
gangs star shit=punches were evident n flow was good/kinda started fallin off as bars went on...a couple good multi's..
but overall you deffinately had the better verse....