Soul Sickness vs ..kontroverzey..
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 10-13-04 at 12:25 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

you got 60 mins to spit............................

Soul Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 11:56 AM.

..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 11:58 AM.

cant even get the rules right truly are a fukin herb/
like randy johnson i bring heat at u but still throw a curve/
u like my bitch cuz ima fuk u for every word u worth/
i roll in style dis kid gets transported ina hearst/
maybe i day u will learn how to get it right/
so like jesus ima move dis herb into the light/
u play wit milk bags and run around sayin u grabed tity/
rock da g-unit sneaker but kid u not like fity/
whether or not u belong theres some kon-tra-verzey/
bring ya best kid but still u not-gunna-hurt me/

Dayum. The Toronto Raptors have a better win percentage then you..
Kids gay, Imma take ya soul, like thiefs robbin elton John's shoe..
Please, ur obsession with 5 yr old girls is your only form of sickness..
It takes balls to write ill rhymes, This Bitch is Dickless..
Splatter your brains, Bitches think im Ms.cleo, way im readin ya mind..

Here,
Weak Textcee who constantly gets merked in Battles

......................... ^there's "soul Sickness" defined..
Put so many holes in your body Osama might hide in you next..
After merkin you, you might recieve a penny,
..........................imma be countin Endless cheques..
just die now, cause your life is worth no more then a foodstamp..
Your wish of becoming successfull will never come true,
......................even if you had a magic lamp..

Dayum. The Toronto Raptors have a better win percentage then you..
Kids gay, Imma take ya soul, like thiefs robbin elton John's shoe..
Please, ur obsession with 5 yr old girls is your only form of sickness..
It takes balls to write ill rhymes, This Bitch is Dickless..
Splatter your brains, Bitches think im Ms.cleo, way im readin ya mind..

Here,
Weak Textcee who constantly gets merked in Battles

......................... ^there's "soul Sickness" defined..
Put so many holes in your body Osama might hide in you next..
After merkin you, you might recieve a penny,
..........................imma be countin Endless cheques..
just die now, cause your life is worth no more then a foodstamp..
Your wish of becoming successfull will never come true,
......................even if you had a magic lamp..

its ova

kid u spelled checks wrong its def not spelled cheques...but wutever good luck uppin for voters.........

This was feedback posted for ..kontroverzey..
 

checkin the polls n stuff...........................

ay nigga........cheques is spelled right you fuckin dictionary illeterate bitch haha

hahahaha!
hes right
it is spelt cheques.........

ay dope man can u drop an hoenst vote while u ehar dawg ill rtf....

lol nvm im thinkin of the wrong kinda checks lol but dont be tlkin bout dictionaries its jus gunna make people think u use 1...no hate jus sayin lol....yea dopeman can u drop an honest vote...you pretty good by the way go and try out for 50th brigade if u wanna be in an ill crew we got some hot talent u would fit in well.....

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

nyce battle, kon won tho.

punches- kon.
werdplay- kno some played tho (sole/soul)
complex- kon.
creativity- kon.

i.m.o- i dont think soul tried hard. i've seen 'em come alot better than this. No hate just my opinion.

Vote- kon

Vote here- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154154

upppin .....ill rtf..................................

uppin this fam.........i'll return the favour..........

uppin for voters i will return the favors..........

uppin............................................. .......

uppin............................................. ....

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

lol aiight my vote would be
Kontroverzey cuzz i saw he had them good personals in there he came harder too mayn sick rhymes this is tha part where you really murked uhm

Kontroverzey
Here,
Weak Textcee who constantly gets merked in Battles

......................... ^there's "soul Sickness" defined..
Put so many holes in your body Osama might hide in you next..
After merkin you, you might recieve a penny,
..........................imma be countin Endless cheques..
just die now, cause your life is worth no more then a foodstamp..
Your wish of becoming successfull will never come true,
......................even if you had a magic lamp..

dam cuzz you got uhm with a better flow good structure hard personals good vocab

Soul
good flow mayn but Kontroverzey had a better flow,some advise next time come harder cuzz didnt look like you came all that hard but it was good mayn

Voted For: Soul Sickness

vote sickness...

easily destroyed this herb... kon had no punches... mad chopy style....... you need to elevate homie...


sickness takes this with solid flow and punches

haha fuckin fag wat u sayin.......................uppin ill return the favour

sorry homeboy, i already drooped feed, no can do..

iight keep this shyt uppin for feed back..............

uppin....i will return the fav if u vote...............

ay fam.........uppin this shit got dayum ill return the favour

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

Dayum. The Toronto Raptors have a better win percentage then you..
Kids gay, Imma take ya soul, like thiefs robbin elton John's shoe..
Please, ur obsession with 5 yr old girls is your only form of sickness..
It takes balls to write ill rhymes, This Bitch is Dickless..
Splatter your brains, Bitches think im Ms.cleo, way im readin ya mind..

Here,
Weak Textcee who constantly gets merked in Battles

......................... ^there's "soul Sickness" defined..
Put so many holes in your body Osama might hide in you next..
After merkin you, you might recieve a penny,
..........................imma be countin Endless cheques..
just die now, cause your life is worth no more then a foodstamp..
Your wish of becoming successfull will never come true,
......................even if you had a magic lamp..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND FLOW GOOD PUNCHES THOUGH NICE PERSONALS


cant even get the rules right truly are a fukin herb/
like randy johnson i bring heat at u but still throw a curve/
u like my bitch cuz ima fuk u for every word u worth/
i roll in style dis kid gets transported ina hearst/
maybe i day u will learn how to get it right/
so like jesus ima move dis herb into the light/
u play wit milk bags and run around sayin u grabed tity/
rock da g-unit sneaker but kid u not like fity/
whether or not u belong theres some kon-tra-verzey/
bring ya best kid but still u not-gunna-hurt me/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCHES AND DIDNT SEE ANY PERSONALS


V-KONTROVERZEY NICE FLOW GOING AND GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

SOULSICKNESS-NICE GOOD VERSE NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCHES DIDNT SEE ANY PERSONALS AND PLUS THA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN ALL I FOUND WAS FLOW~!
BUT DATS COOL ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES "OK"

KONTROVERZEY-NICE USIN PERSONAL AND PUNCHES KEEP IT UP THATS HOW U WIN BATTLES PERSONALS AND PUNCHES

~PEACE~

V-KON CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

~PEACE~

This was feedback posted for ..kontroverzey..
 

checkin....out....your.....skills....for....anonym ous...reasons...:)

uppin ill return the favour.......................

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

..kontroverzey..
Dayum. The Toronto Raptors have a better win percentage then you..
Kids gay, Imma take ya soul, like thiefs robbin elton John's shoe..
7/10
Please, ur obsession with 5 yr old girls is your only form of sickness..
It takes balls to write ill rhymes, This Bitch is Dickless..
6.5/10
Splatter your brains, Bitches think im Ms.cleo, way im readin ya mind..
Here,
Weak Textcee who constantly gets merked in Battles
......................... ^there's "soul Sickness" defined..
8/10…nice 1
Put so many holes in your body Osama might hide in you next..
After merkin you, you might recieve a penny,
..........................imma be countin Endless cheques..
7/10
just die now, cause your life is worth no more then a foodstamp..
Your wish of becoming successfull will never come true,
......................even if you had a magic lamp..
6/10

Overall: 34.5/50

Soul Sickness
cant even get the rules right truly are a fukin herb/
like randy johnson i bring heat at u but still throw a curve/
5/10
u like my bitch cuz ima fuk u for every word u worth/
i roll in style dis kid gets transported ina hearst/
6/10
maybe i day u will learn how to get it right/
so like jesus ima move dis herb into the light/
7/10
u play wit milk bags and run around sayin u grabed tity/
rock da g-unit sneaker but kid u not like fity/
6/10
whether or not u belong theres some kon-tra-verzey/
bring ya best kid but still u not-gunna-hurt me/
6/10

Overall: 30/10

This was feedback posted for Soul Sickness
 

gotta check somethin really quick

this was a close battle though

uppin.....one more....................................

uppin.............................................

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

cant even get the rules right truly are a fukin herb/
like randy johnson i bring heat at u but still throw a curve/
^^^pathetic intro, 1/10
u like my bitch cuz ima fuk u for every word u worth/
i roll in style dis kid gets transported ina hearst/
^^^^^mmm better, 3/10
maybe i day u will learn how to get it right/
so like jesus ima move dis herb into the light/
^^^^na, ddnt like it, you need personals, 1/10
u play wit milk bags and run around sayin u grabed tity/
rock da g-unit sneaker but kid u not like fity/
^^^^dry, 1/10
whether or not u belong theres some kon-tra-verzey/
bring ya best kid but still u not-gunna-hurt me/
bad ending, 2/10

total = 8


Dayum. The Toronto Raptors have a better win percentage then you..
Kids gay, Imma take ya soul, like thiefs robbin elton John's shoe..
^^^^^dont really understand this but i get the pont, 4/10
Please, ur obsession with 5 yr old girls is your only form of sickness..
It takes balls to write ill rhymes, This Bitch is Dickless..
hahahahahhaha^^^^NICE!! 7/10
Splatter your brains, Bitches think im Ms.cleo, way im readin ya mind..
Here,
Weak Textcee who constantly gets merked in Battles
......................... ^there's "soul Sickness" defined..
^^^^nice, 5/10
Put so many holes in your body Osama might hide in you next..
After merkin you, you might recieve a penny,
..........................imma be countin Endless cheques..
^^^^lol, 6/10
just die now, cause your life is worth no more then a foodstamp..
Your wish of becoming successfull will never come true,
......................even if you had a magic lamp..
^^^^ok finsih, 5/10

total, 33, nice verse you win this man!!


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