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Myth vs Verbal Abuse
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10-15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No D/R *Explained Votes Only* I'm leaving the time and check in as it is cause i know ya busy with the fem tourny Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 10-16-04 at 02:58 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
i will accept. im just really busy with my tourney right now. "natural selection". but no sweat, ill get a verse in soon. pz.
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Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 07:23 PM.
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records better than mine. but whos bitchin? when ya rep is smitten. i guess ma text aint hittin. or ya battlin dopes without blessed prewrittens. cause i only key to vets, i guess this battles just not my style. ya living cause ya not the underdog. unlike me, ya jock survival. ya internet beefin. ya couldnt be decent orally, so ya fax jokes. the open mic links in ya siggy arent links. ya must be that dope. this verse is hatred. from start to mission statement, ya once rhymed. youd like to think ya made profit, but ya just elevating front lines. i shoulda dropped 8 lines, so ya had a chance to come through with a win. youd like to think ya place is safe in this race, but ya just pacing us fems. 10 minute, quick key... ...this kid had been bitching about me not checking in all week, ive dropped now, i he hasnt even checked. how ironic. pz. |
Myth has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 10:38 PM.
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ducked the first battle so u could prewrite, verse needed practice *
3-3 what happened to u being a vet, u shouldn't of changed ya tactics * verbal beating me is like leg amputee's performing numerous back flips afraid to drop? fronting saying u were busy with the natural selection * a buttaface? i saw ya pictures, ya beat, but is that ya actual complection * verbal abuse..naw? i rather hit the next level, domestic violence * talent? nope abuse skills don't exist like cops arresting pirates doubts? u even said it ya self that the dickless can't be hard * va's talent couldn't stand out if she was in a camp full of retards sex..naw? i paid attention in health, i rather stay away from the clap structure problems, va's lines stretch farther then ones on subway maps ya career's plunging fast like jamicans running down a steep hill racing claim u hot, ya couldn't come sick if ya skills were fat people embracing rumors? naw the speculations are true, u sent ya pictures to one-man-band * va showing skill would shock peeps like muhammad ali performing hand stands *never accepted the 1st battle *had a good record but reset it *she's involved in the natural selection tourny *i saw her pics *her name *a comment she made *omb told me that she sent him pics |
we uppin for this and i wasn't bitchin, u ducked the first battle so i had to keep after ya, i could see if i was like check the fuck in but i wasn't, i would just say are u gonna check in, anyways we uppin fot votes
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This was feedback posted for Myth
iight this was a hot battle
both you came hard as hell wit da punches. But ima have ta say Myth would take this. His wordplay and vocab and multis were off da hook..Also his punches hit fuckin hard.. Verbal you verse was hot but i couldnt understand it at some points in the verse. Like i was lost in some spots ya wordplay and vocab was weak and ive seen you write alot better. No Hate This is Only Feedback -1 |
Voted For: Myth
myth barely won this battle due to a couple punches that hit pretty hard. A little harder than some of VA's. Va's multies were pretty hot n punches were decent but myth had some ones that just hit harder so i gave this to him holla at ya boy http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=155562 |
Voted For: Myth
ima have 2 give this one 2 myth Va u came wit some nice structure overall nice flow but ya punches and wordplay were not really on point so i guess u can due 2 work on that,but u had nice flow which was bout the best thing u had goin 4 u Myth nice flow and structure ya punches were clever ya closer looks 2 much sumthin like i said in one of my battles so work on comin more original gotta say stuff other peepz havent said ya personals basically got u the win in this one due 2 overall better punches ....Nuff Said.... |
Voted For: Myth
an okay battle. i expected it to be a little better. but good drops from both of you verbal abuse-you had a good flow. u stayed with it. your structure was good. lines werent streched out or anything. vocab was good. i didnt find any hard hitting punches in your verse. i noticed that you tried to throw in a personal toward the end but it wasnt really that good. overall-6/10 myth-your flow was alright. coulda been a little better. your structure was okay. your lines were somewhat even. you had a lot of personals that you tried to throw in there which was good. punches? i know you had a couple. they werent really hard but they were there. overall-7/10 very close battle but my vote goes to myth for having more personals and punches in his verse |
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
iight... verbal: this wasn't ur best but i could see as u sed u just keyed it in... score: punch: 8/10..pretty good.. especially representin the fems! lol fow:9/10 good flow..it flowed good da whole time structure: 9/10..very good structure.. easy to understand personal:7/10good personals..but not very strong total: 33/40 (pretty good) myth: i really don't like how u put ur verse..it was pretty stretched..the only way u made it not look stretched was wen u made the words smaller.. so don't stretch em agen plz! score: punch: 7/10..okay punches..though not as strong! flow: 6/10 didn't flow good at all!(work on it) personals: 6/10..iight, these personals wern't good.. plz don't use links..they jst pretty old..n not good.. strucutre...3/10.. blah.. sucky structure.. 22/40...(F! lol.. do better next time) vote: Verbal Abuse.. -Mind |
i'll stretch my lines however i please and i always right in small font, if u don't believe me check all of my battles, uppin for this
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
I was gonna break it down but it's almost impossible to do with Myth's verse. Your rhyme scheme is incredibly fucked up, it was hard for me to follow. Your punches weren't that hard either, you just gotta keep elevatig though bro. Verbal came with multis, harder punches, and a better structure overall. This was just an honest vote though, and it goes to VA... Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only... |
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Voted For: Myth
aight... nice battle nice battle... yall both came pretty hard and i respect that big time... verbal first off know this aint a hate vote but it is my opinion Myth won this one... the punches about prewriting and shit was used by both so i liked how they countered eachother on that one... the line that won this one for Myth was the muhamad ali closer.. i was really feelin that shit big time hommie... here is my break down... Multis-neither wordplay-Myth Punches/Personals-Myth Metas-Myth Structure-both Overall Verse- Myth aight like i said.. mad props to both of yall but this one goes to myth with pretty much an overall better battle verse... no hate tho to verbal cause i know she came hard and i got a lotta respect for that so props for that one... but this one goes to myth.... VOTE- MYTH |
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This was feedback posted for Myth
i want to see who wins.............................
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Voted For: Myth
Damn... Myth killed with all the personals/punches... a very one-sided battle here. Verbal: records better than mine. but whos bitchin? when ya rep is smitten. i guess ma text aint hittin. or ya battlin dopes without blessed prewrittens. hmmm... set-up was cool but then she dissed herself and ended the line kinda wack cause i only key to vets, i guess this battles just not my style. ya living cause ya not the underdog. unlike me, ya jock survival. ehhh.. nothing happening here... didn't rhyme either.... pretty forced ya internet beefin. ya couldnt be decent orally, so ya fax jokes. the open mic links in ya siggy arent links. ya must be that dope. wack this verse is hatred. from start to mission statement, ya once rhymed. youd like to think ya made profit, but ya just elevating front lines. no punch... what was the point of this line? i shoulda dropped 8 lines, so ya had a chance to come through with a win. youd like to think ya place is safe in this race, but ya just pacing us fems. good closer but that's about all ya had going for ya in this one... the whole verse shoulda been on this level. 10 minute, quick key... ...this kid had been bitching about me not checking in all week, ive dropped now, i he hasnt even checked. how ironic. pz. good point^^...lol MYTH: ducked the first battle so u could prewrite, verse needed practice * 3-3 what happened to u being a vet, u shouldn't of changed ya tactics * verbal beating me is like leg amputee's performing numerous back flips good opener...watch the line stretching, though...kinda threw me off at first going with 3 lines as opposed to 2 afraid to drop? fronting saying u were busy with the natural selection * a buttaface? i saw ya pictures, ya beat, but is that ya actual complection * more personals... again, ya lines seemed a bit stretched verbal abuse..naw? i rather hit the next level, domestic violence * talent? nope abuse skills don't exist like cops arresting pirates set-up was good but ya ended this line kinda flat... doubts? u even said it ya self that the dickless can't be hard * va's talent couldn't stand out if she was in a camp full of retards again, good set-up but ya ended kinda soft... finish with a punch instead of love taps sex..naw? i paid attention in health, i rather stay away from the clap structure problems, va's lines stretch farther then ones on subway maps ehhh...ok... what's sex gotta do with ya follow-up line? ya lines and punches should lead into each other... seems like ya just wanted sum'n to rhyme here ya career's plunging fast like jamicans running down a steep hill racing claim u hot, ya couldn't come sick if ya skills were fat people embracing worst line ya dropped so far...no connection... no punch rumors? naw the speculations are true, u sent ya pictures to one-man-band * va showing skill would shock peeps like muhammad ali performing hand stands closer coulda been better ... i noticed a pattern here... ya set-ups are golden but then ya end all of ya lines flat... and wussup with all the questions at the beginning of each line? stay away from doing that so much...it's a little annoying... work on ya structure... ya lines seemed to stretch... not a lot but it's still noticeable... the thing that saved you in this battle was the tons of personals ya threw in there... work on connecting ya punches and finishing stronger and you'll be the shyt... keep at it one |
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