JRad vs ~...razor...~
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-16-04 at 04:37 PM

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JRad has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 04:39 PM.

~...razor...~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 04:43 PM.

yo im gonna span ur bck n punche u in da nose//
hit u with my ryhmes so ard u fall 2 tha ground i give u a over dose//
yo rhymes r wack just lyk ur face u walk lyk a gay bo at pace//
u cant rap so y u here man ur a discrase to the rap race//
i lyk to win witch im gonna doi punch ur in da face until u die//
u cant rap u no ur bitin i will kill u slowly until u fry//

Look at his name it's Razor, why? He likes to shave his legs
Run 'em over with my Blazer, Die, You now look like scrambled eggs
I'll scrap you off the sidewalk, and feed you to your dad
He'll probably die from shock, but the rest of us will be glad
Your girl will be sort of mad, your family will be left sad
They've been shown whos bad, don't fuck with the JRad

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Vote damn you! lol, even if it's agaisnt me (As long as it ain't hate )

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btw jrad they cant c ur message until they vote nywayz

Oh , ddin't know that..................................

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its uppin not bump
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they only c it after they vote but if u uppin it
it gose to tha top of front lines so more peeps votes
nuff said

Voted For: JRad

Look at his name it's Razor, why? He likes to shave his legs
Run 'em over with my Blazer, Die, You now look like scrambled eggs
I'll scrap you off the sidewalk, and feed you to your dad
He'll probably die from shock, but the rest of us will be glad
Your girl will be sort of mad, your family will be left sad
They've been shown whos bad, don't fuck with the JRad


^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD 'OK" PUNCHES GOOD FLOW NICE STRUTURE AND WORD-CHOOSIN


yo im gonna span ur bck n punche u in da nose//
hit u with my ryhmes so ard u fall 2 tha ground i give u a over dose//
yo rhymes r wack just lyk ur face u walk lyk a gay bo at pace//
u cant rap so y u here man ur a discrase to the rap race//
i lyk to win witch im gonna doi punch ur in da face until u die//
u cant rap u no ur bitin i will kill u slowly until u fry//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" PUNCHES NICE FLOW

V-JRAD CAUSE HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES AND FLOW HE EDGED IT

RAZOR-"OK" VERSE BUT IT WASNT GOOD ENOUGH U DIDNT HAD NO GOOD PUNCHES U HAD FLOW I GIVE U PROPS FOR THAT BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT

JRAD- GOOD VERSE BUT IT WAS TOO LIL BASIC USE CREATIVE PUNCHES NEXT TIME DEN U'LL BE BETTA ELEVATE USIN PERSONALS AIGHT

~PEACE~

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Voted For: JRad

Weak Battle

JRad
yo punches were a slight harder than razor's..
tha flow was aight...and the structure was decent
elevate more tho..tha scrambled egg line was whack

~...razor...~
yo punches were hard too..but not hard enuff...
tha flow was aight...(almost fell tho)
structure was okay..and not stretch'd either...

Overall
JRad came harder wit tha punches...
had a better structure than ~...razor...~
and a pretty decent flow...

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Voted For: JRad

you got this you had better punches and you used a lil bit of wordplay but try and elevate n try to use more complicated words other than that i spose it was aight....

return the favour links in the sig thnx... no hate

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This was feedback posted for ~...razor...~
 

one word....pathetic

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Voted For: JRad

ummmmm ok, one of the weakest battles ive ever seen on here............ i guess ill give it to jrad for that personal i guess and cuz ur verse was in english.......... also, razor sed "ill punch u in the face" or "ill hit hard" liek 3 times each..... ummmm i guess err jrad had razor on multies too........ ok thats all i needa say, u got this for bein less of a dumbass

Voted For: JRad

jrad took this easy...bettert punches better flow better structure....ur punches was aiight...ur vocab....wasnt that good...wordplay none

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