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DaCROZofHB vs yte grl
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10 - 15Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-16-04 at 06:28 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
yte grl has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 06:29 PM.
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I'm Ill... that's real... about to be a legend like spul...
I'll stone you to death like you smoked a whole bowl... Your of the HB... what that mean... Hoez & Bitches? What's next? Check seven third's avy... bitches get stitches... Da Croz done... Fried like the ozone... Gay & Croz yo is a homo-phone... I freeze the beef... Yo got beef with me... I leave you in the snow alone... Da Croz reminds me of Empire... you caught up on your self... Lose you get slapped... when you lay doubles of the cards your delt... You're a regular guy jackin' off poppin' bras... but there's only one diference... Ya getting off on your cousin Andrew Martz... I'm heated like pop-tarts... |
srry... I didn't finish my verse.
Mom made me get off so I just posted it. |
DaCROZofHB has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 10:37 PM.
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I rape dis bitch quickly like Im the rapverse Kobe/
Get R Kelly to Tape dis while yte grl sits back and blows me/ I dont give a Fuck if this is a woman Im gon send Double Decker Blows/ I aint gon say spit no bullshit, just let the Record Show/ Bitch gets a win, bout as often as the Clippers do/ Cuz once i get on the mic I Rip-Her Through/ My flow so hot, it keep da Keyboard constantly a 100 degrees/ She gotta freeze her name, just to post a verse on one of these/ I dominate dis woman just like we back in the 50's/ Rape her, shoot her, Throw her in jail and make dat bitch Tip Me/ |
This was feedback posted for DaCROZofHB
just leavin feedback... goddamn crozzy... that opener was SICK AS FUCK! i dig that shit big time... good battle yall
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uppin dis battle y'all, will vote on ur shit
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uppin........................somebody please vote leave a link
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Voted For: yte grl
Back for your voting pleasure I dont give a Fuck if this is a woman Im gon send Double Decker Blows/ I aint gon say spit no bullshit, just let the Record Show/ ^^^Only persoanl, best line i think. Flowed alright, off at parts. Kobe opener was pretty good. Not a lot of persoanlls or metas. pretty simple. 5/10 Your of the HB... what that mean... Hoez & Bitches? What's next? Check seven third's avy... bitches get stitches... ^^One of a few good lines. I like how you throw in people from da site n shit. Structure was pretty good. Closer was wack, opener was good. Some aiight word play, good multis. 6/10 Aiight battle some elevation needed. One |
Voted For: yte grl
I AM a legend............................................ .................... :D :hump: |
^opps.. my bad. lol meant to put feedback.......................................... ........................................
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upping............................................
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Voted For: DaCROZofHB
yte had some tight lines with the whole stone thing but if she knows things about her opponent that are personal and then disses about it she needs to let voters know, so that we know wat she's be talkin about. dac came aight i was likin the rape thing until it got to kobe cause he's been played out but i do like the kely line. girls last line was lame you always have to have a killer ender and dac for sure did im likin that alot. |
keep leavn votes on dis battle will return da fav
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Voted For: DaCROZofHB
HB - nice punches...decent structure..vocab was aight..those punches couldve been harder tho..but overall u had a decent drop, just work on ya structure and the punches & u should start winnin battles n' shit yte - no...structure was aight...punches were blah (especially the spul line)..thats wack..overall elevate more...didnt like ur drop |
This was feedback posted for DaCROZofHB
goddamn this is an old battle..... ummm is crozzy even on the site any more?
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Voted For: yte grl
This was a close battle, but yte won because she had more consistency in her verse. There were some generic nursery rhymed lyrics in here, but Da Croz had more in his. So Yte girl wins this barely. I'm Ill... that's real... about to be a legend like spul... I'll stone you to death like you smoked a whole bowl... 5/10 - smoke a bowl, wut does it mean? Your of the HB... what that mean... Hoez & Bitches? What's next? Check seven third's avy... bitches get stitches... 5.925/10-Dont say the same thing in a bar, bitches twice Da Croz done... Fried like the ozone... Gay & Croz yo is a homo-phone... 6.825/10decent multi, didnt need to say &, homo-phone doesnt make sense I freeze the beef... Yo got beef with me... I leave you in the snow alone... Da Croz reminds me of Empire... you caught up on your self... 3.125/10 Said same words (beef2x), 2nd line doesnt make sense, weak punch Lose you get slapped... when you lay doubles of the cards your delt... You're a regular guy jackin' off poppin' bras... but there's only one diference... 3.125/10-No rhyming words, weak punch Ya getting off on your cousin Andrew Martz... I'm heated like pop-tarts... 5.725/10-ok personal, can u prove thats his cousin? /55, u got 29.725/55, which is 54.04% ____________________________________________ Now for Croz ____________________________________________ I rape dis bitch quickly like Im the rapverse Kobe/ Get R Kelly to Tape dis while yte grl sits back and blows me/ 4/10-nice for a porn site, but not a punch I dont give a Fuck if this is a woman Im gon send Double Decker Blows/ I aint gon say spit no bullshit, just let the Record Show/ 6.125/10-decent 1st line, filler & weak for 2nd line Bitch gets a win, bout as often as the Clippers do/ Cuz once i get on the mic I Rip-Her Through/ 8.100/10 - Decent, liked it My flow so hot, it keep da Keyboard constantly a 100 degrees/ She gotta freeze her name, just to post a verse on one of these/ 5.925/10-1st line isn't realistic, 2nd doesnt make sense I dominate dis woman just like we back in the 50's/ Rape her, shoot her, Throw her in jail and make dat bitch Tip Me/ 4/10- everything's weak in this line /55, u got 28.50/55, which is 51.81% ____________________________________________ YTE WINS BARELY |
oh yeah to make it even +5 for /50 so yte got 34.725/55, and croz got 33.5/55
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uppin lmao this is hella old.........................
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This was feedback posted for yte grl
lol at vilage pimp pretendin to be someone else ........
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Voted For: yte grl
yte grl won this shit soo eazy, she took it in a breezy fa sheezy, so don't hate and be fake, or i'll take and make you go beat off, to cheat offs or like to kill babies who got rabies, man fuck they lazy and crazy, nah sayin'? worc. |
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